Let's summarize the first volume of this book

As a newcomer, writing this book for the first time, I can be greatly noticed by the editor within five days, and I am very happy to start signing the contract in about a week, and I am also very grateful for the help and support of the two editors of Blu-ray and Yiyi, I am really grateful. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

Because I can't reply to the book review, I haven't answered everyone's questions, but it's not that I'm cold or anything like that, don't get me wrong.

I have seen the problems that everyone is talking about, and I am very clear about them.

The biggest problem with the 100,000 words in the first volume is actually a sentence [the rhythm is not properly grasped, it is too tight]

Many more detailed things, such as Sun Zhenhuan's martial arts training process, those Taoist terms, and his wandering in the rivers and lakes, and his interactions with people like Lu Mingxiao, all need to be described in detail, not brushed over.

Yideng, Hong Qigong, Huang Yaoshi, Ouyang Feng, these original masters, I only let them appear and exit like an assembly line in the plot of less than thirty chapters, it really seems very hasty, it feels like high-end soy sauce.

I admit it!

Under the overall self-evaluation, I write a lot better than many Xiaobai, and my writing is much stronger than that of a completely Xiaobai, but my experience is too lacking, from primary school to now graduating from college, I have been reading starting novels, but it is the first time to write a book, many details are not known how to deal with it, readers and authors are two completely different feelings, can not be mixed.

So in the first volume, the protagonist is in a hurry and all kinds of pretenses, all kinds of invincibility, and the overall plot context is also very thin, I don't feel like there is the kind of martial arts that kind of heart-wrenching and emotionally appealing charm, I also accept this!

I think my accumulation is still too small, and the things that have been precipitated are very shallow, such as looking at the original works such as the game "Sword Three" and the anime "Qin Shi Mingyue" that I want to write later, all of which are works that are close to history!

The requirements for literature and historiography are very high, and you must have a pretty good literary level, and you must choose words and sentences and character dialogues to write that kind of shocking impact.

It is necessary to have a certain amount of historical study in order to write the atmosphere of the background of the great era, and to write the vast atmosphere of the long years and the history of the ages.

Mr. Jin Yong's works can have such an achievement, which is inseparable from his accumulation of classical Chinese literature and the edification of poetry and song since he was a child, and I am 108,000 miles away from this.

So in the future, I will slow down the update and spend more time studying, improve my level, and write those original works again. After all, everyone has also seen the worlds I want to write about, and I can't finish writing without millions of words, and now this kind of writing and plot conception, millions of words are simply torturing me and the readers!

So I'm sorry to say to everyone here, I will definitely write the book firmly, but I will study more along the way.

In addition, about the aspect of emotional drama.

Reading novels in my life, I hate the protagonist the most when he sees a woman is all kinds of [indescribable], the little dragon girl Huang Rong of martial arts, Lu Xueqi of Baguio, the female character in the anime, the black widow of the movie or something, all the harem, I damn it, are you writing a starting point novel, or writing Huang Wen? How hungry is it to be like this?

So if you want to see all kinds of undescribable harems in this book, please take a detour consciously, I won't write it, the heroine will have, but the feelings are sincere and unique, and there are no crystal palaces and the like.