Single-chapter Say something
I've always wanted to start a single chapter and say something alone. Pen ~ Fun ~ Pavilion www.biquge.info the first time a newcomer opened a book, for the street, I was prepared, of course, I didn't expect to be so miserable.
It's quite contradictory, and I want to write a story of my own, and I want to cater to the reader, but I don't do both well. I changed it countless times before uploading it, and I still regretted it when I finally posted it.
At the beginning, I wanted to slowly describe an island city in the context of the apocalypse. In fact, at the beginning of the book, the chapter in "Hospital", I was quite satisfied. The Zerg besiege the city, resources are scarce, and the protagonist lives as an ordinary person.
But then I read a lot of people's remarks on the Internet, and the first three chapters must be "goldfingers", I think it may indeed be an ordinary person, to write a hundred thousand words, maybe everyone has no patience to read, so they revised it again, and hurriedly gave the protagonist an ability.
The original plan was to give the protagonist a weaker, a setting similar to that in "Full-Time Hunter", Xiaojie (not too strong, good potential), but the result was not grasped well, and now the drawbacks have also appeared, and the protagonist is too weak.
One step is in a hurry, one step at a time, and the results are dismal after the first recommendation, and it is a bit directionless. It's almost struggling to update to the present, and once planned to abandon the pit. But thinking that it was also the first novel I was going to write, I persevered.
The post-apocalyptic wasteland theme is my favorite theme, but it's a pity that I didn't write it well.
I regret it, if I were given a chance to do it all over again, I might have started in the second chapter of the book, deleted it all, and started from scratch to write a book I liked. (I don't know if the editor will scold me to death)
For the fighting,I prefer the kind of side description to reflect the level and level of different people,For the first few chapters of the book,Qu Wenlong took a helicopter to fight with the insect beetle,I like it more.,Maybe it's too early.,Some readers said that after reading a few chapters.,Even the name of the protagonist has been forgotten.,This is also a failure.。
In the past two days, Kavinka has been very powerful, and I feel that the pit is too dug and the thinking has changed too much, which is a bit messy.
I've seen the experience of my predecessors for a long time, and it's a little better, and if I think it's not handled well, I'll skip it and end it quickly. I think I'm going to jump out of the recent plot holes, and I'll reply to the update tomorrow and start a new chapter.
Although the results are dismal, I am still grateful to those friends who have been paying attention to this book.