On the issue of the setting of the novel
Hello everyone, I'm Zichuan, in fact, as far as the author is concerned, it is difficult to comment on the quality of his novels, especially for a newcomer like Zichuan.
Today, a book friend commented on Zichuan's book review area: The male protagonist is the Virgin, and he is an abusive text.
First of all, thank you for the evaluation of this book friend, however, what Zichuan wants to say is that this novel is not a sadistic text, and the male protagonist is not a virgin, because of these two elements, Zichuan also doesn't like it a little, and Zichuan doesn't understand why it will give the book friend the feeling that the male protagonist is the Virgin and the abused master.
So, Zichuan read his novel again, and I have to say that the writing is indeed a little immature, but I probably found the main point that the male protagonist is the Virgin Mary and the main text.
First, it is said that the male protagonist is the Virgin, probably because the male protagonist took the initiative to go to the ten halls of the underworld to save people, which gave everyone a delusion, but Zichuan felt that it was normal, because in the novel, Zichuan actually explained that the reason why Guan Tianren went down to save people was largely because of Han Fu and Chen Fenger, one is a brother, and the other is a woman that Guan Tianren likes, no matter what the reason, Guan Tianren has the need to go down to save people.
Second, abuse of the main text, I think it's probably because of Chen Fenger, but before Zichuan wrote it, he had done a survey, Zichuan had one or two friends with a little bit of money around him, and in their circle, there was basically no such thing as a virgin, in fact, it was not only their circle, it should be said, most of the situation in society is like this, for the fact that the woman the male protagonist likes has a boyfriend, in fact, most people can't accept it, Zichuan can't accept it, but for the needs of the plot, it can only be written like this,And,If Zichuan writes the male protagonist's sister,It's all been fought since childhood.,Never been in love.,At that time,,Someone should bombard Zichuan for writing too ideal.,But what Zichuan wants to say is,The male protagonist's belly will be black.,The sister will also have it.,I hope everyone can support Zichuan's novel more.。 I also hope that if you see something unreasonable, you can put it forward, because Zichuan himself looks at it, in fact, he really can't find all his shortcomings.
That's right,Zichuan received a reward today.,Zichuan never felt that he could receive a reward.,At least that's what I think in the first volume.,Here's a big thank you to Lingxin and Suya who rewarded Zichuan and the demon who has always supported Zichuan.,The setting of the second volume has come out.,You can start thinking about the plot from tonight.,The second volume is a bit of a game that is biased towards the dead.,Of course,It's just biased.,I don't know if it's to everyone's taste.,Anyway, Zichuan will try to do his best.,Thank you for your support.,Thank you.。