Dear readers and friends, hello everyone, I am Xiaomo, thank you for your support for so long, Xiaomo once again said thank you, thank you for your support. I wanted to be able to write a novel in my favorite style, but my writing was mediocre, so there were a lot of flaws.

At present, the book "Promise" has written 100,000 words, which is a very good start for me, although many friends have a love for this book, but as I write, I find that this book has deviated from the kind of situation I wanted to show, and there are many loopholes in terms of flaws.

First, the outline is a little rough, and there is no specific and detailed outline, so I am in a hurry to start the book.

Second, the article has too much water, the structure is not rigorous, and it feels loose and loose.

Third, the description of the character's demeanor is too simple, and there are only a few kinds of repeatedly, and the characters are not vividly shaped.

Fourth, there are so many language dialogues that it feels like an indoor sitcom, just a few people talking.

Fifth, due to one's own emotions and other reasons, there are things that affect the mentality of the plot, which feels the most undesirable.

A few days ago, there was something wrong with it.,I feel like this book seems to be a little astray.,But there's nothing wrong with it.,These two days when it's okay.,I've read these things written during this time.,Only then did I find out that the book has made a more serious mistake.,So I'm here to stop this book.,After these problems are solved, I'll create.,I hope you can forgive me.,Thank you.。

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