Seeing many people's different meanings on some of the plots of the game, I still feel very uncomfortable.

The author is an emotional writer, and in short, he is easily influenced by book reviews.

I really want to take care of everyone's reading feelings, but it is obviously not possible to use the author's ability.

About the plot of the network part,Explain it here.,Actually, the author counted it.,About this part.,In fact, the total is only about ten chapters.,That's about 2W words.。

In fact, at the beginning, this was almost one of the main lines, that is, the direction of the two-line development.

When this plot first appeared, it attracted a lot of criticism, and it was also because of the influence of those that the things that were originally intended to be written in about three thirds of a piece step by step accelerated the process, which led to the lack of a lot of foreshadowing in the follow-up plot and so on.

Then, about this part of the plot, I suddenly didn't know how to write.

It seems that the two lines are not related now, but they will definitely have an impact in the future.

And the reason why this line is set should be said to be the need of the plot, or the inevitability of the story.

In terms of the author himself,Actually, I don't really want to write the game part.,The part that was originally written calculated a lot of data and checked a lot of information.,It's more difficult to write than the general plot.。

After each chapter is written, the author has refined it at least twice before sending it out, at least the author's writing attitude is extremely serious.

Then let's talk about the inevitability of the so-called story, the setting of the protagonist, not the hot-blooded type who wants to dominate the world or become the strongest in the universe, almost a world-weary hedonistic idealist.

For him, the reality part is the incidental, the collateral of the need to maintain himself on the Internet and so on.

And the identity of the protagonist is a god, at least for a long time, it cannot be exposed in the real world and intersect with other people, so the dual identity of the scene in the holographic network is set, which is in line with the identity of the protagonist, and it is also the need to express the characteristics of the protagonist.

How should the plot of the network part develop?

Watching novels, animated movies, etc., I can't write about this.

Otherwise, do animations, write novels, and make games?

With the author's shallow knowledge, it can only make the protagonist play games and make friends.

The protagonist collects friends on the Internet,Cultivate feelings,Establish bonds,Eventually there will be a part of the collision in reality and the like.,This is the intersection of the two lines.,But it may only appear in the middle of the period.,In the early stage.,It's just the adventure strategy of the protagonist and his friends in various games.,And then make a name for yourself in the network or something.。

This part of the plot, like the scenes of online game novels in reality, seems unrelated, but they are essential.

Outline jumps also seem to be feasible, but then the plot will seem too dry, personally, the author is not very acceptable, at least, the author hopes that every paragraph of the plot, even if it is bloody, also hopes to write passionately.

vulgar or something, there is no way to compress the length, naturally all kinds of coincidences collide together.

The role of the Internet is not a game problem, there is no energy, and I can't think of a novel way to play the game, if that's the case, it's really better to write an online game novel.

And the part of the game,In fact, it has been as brief as possible,The detailed part,It's all related.,Conflicts appear.,And then the value of the equipment.,The geometry of the demand.,Get funds.,Buy equipment.,The embodiment of the value after purchase.,Revenge and counter-kill......

It's still a lack of ability, it looks too watery.

Think of it as the author's bacterium opened an irrelevant branch line to water the word count.

In addition, it's not just this that attracts criticism.,The protagonist problem.,The heroine's problem.,The problem of the heroine, etc.,This book is a double-edged sword from the concept.,It can please some readers.,At the same time, it can also cause some disgust.,It's all helpless.。

Of course, the root of all this is the problem of the author's bacteria, the ideal is very plump, the reality is very skinny, as a newcomer, there will inevitably be a lot of shortcomings, but as an author, you still have to have your own persistence.

The character of the heroine, the personality of the protagonist, and the subplots of the network part, these are all core structures and have far-reaching influences, so please don't denounce the author anymore on these three issues.

The author is an emotional person, right?,It's really easy to be influenced by book reviews.,The best thing to do is not to read book reviews.,But I don't want to do that.,So,Please understand a thing or two.。

Even if he pounces in the end, the author will admit it, learn from experience, and fight again.

If you open a book yourself, you will finish it even with tears in your eyes!