"Kasumigaoka-san, you're so bold! I haven't met a few times, but I actually invite a man to this kind of place! ”

On the upper floors of the hotel, standing next to the spacious floor-to-ceiling windows, Mo Wen said playfully while overlooking the scenery under his feet. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

The cars passing through the intersection, the shops that are still open, and the pedestrians walking on the road can clearly see their figures here, but their voices are not heard at all, and the sound insulation makes the whole room form an isolated space, leaving only the two people in the room.

Standing behind him, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's face turned slightly red, and he glared at Mo Wen angrily, "I don't think Mo Wenjun should do anything rude, after all, if you stretch out your fingers casually now, a large group of girls will rush up, let you do all kinds of things you like, when I just came up, I was almost torn to pieces by them!" ”

Glancing at the crowd below that had not yet dispersed, Kasumigaoka said meaningfully, but his eyes were extremely unpleasant. If it weren't for Mo Wen's brainless fans just now, she wouldn't have finally chosen an ambiguous place like a hotel, although she used to think that Mo Wen was very handsome, but she never thought that the other party would be so popular.

shrugged his shoulders casually, but Mo Wen was noncommittal, because of his own charm attributes, he had long been surprised by this kind of thing, unless he had a firm will, or his heart belonged, and now ordinary girls are really just a matter of hooking his fingers for him.

Not wanting to say anything more on this topic, Mo Wen sat down on the sofa by the window, crossed Erlang's legs, and then said leisurely: "Okay, then Kasumigaoka-san-san, who wants to find me at the risk of his life, what else do you have to say to me!" ”

Kasumigaoka was slightly silent for a moment, then took out a stack of papers from his satchel and handed it to Mo Wen.

"Mo Wenjun, I want you to see the script I wrote, and then give me an answer!"

Because of the talent that Mo Wen showed when they met before, Xia Zhiqiu regarded him as a literary senior, and after arguing with Lun, she now really wants to know whether her script is really wrong, or Lun is also running away irresponsibly again, and she doesn't want to formalize her feelings contained in the script at all.

"This is the script you wrote for Lunya?"

casually took the script and looked at it twice, Mo Wen saw at a glance who this was written for, after all, the kind of heroine was a sister in her previous life, with a sick and delicate attribute, she liked her brother, and then forced her brother who was not related by blood in this life to embark on a (****) dead end, this kind of thing is what An Yilun's kind of dead house likes.

There was a sound in his mouth, although he was not very interested in this kind of subject, Mo Wen still read it patiently, and after a while, he threw the finished script on the coffee table on the side, lowered his head and groaned.

"How?"

With a hint of nervousness, a hint of confusion, looking at Mo Wen who was frowning, Kasumigaoka asked cautiously, to be honest, she didn't know what she was thinking now, whether she hoped that her script would be overlooked, or that everything was just Lunye's wanton behavior.

Mo Wen blinked, leaned on the handle of the sofa with his hand on his cheek, and glanced at Kasumigaoka playfully.

"Kasumigaoka-san,The script is very good.,It's already usable in terms of game scripts.,It's just a good thing to invest your emotions in the script.,But it's not good to invest too much!"

Her face stiffened slightly, and when she heard the first comment, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was still very indifferent, but her face was a natural expression, but when she heard the last sentence, her face changed suddenly, and she directly lowered her voice and yelled at Mo Wen, "Mo Wenjun, what do you mean by this, why don't I understand?" ”

Like a female beast that had been violated in her territory, Xia Zhiqiu completely bared her teeth at Mo Wen at this moment.

But Mo Wen was unmoved, picked up the script and flipped it casually, and said slowly while flipping: "The outline you wrote is really good, the plot is magnificent, the story is huge, full of the feeling of a masterpiece, the grievances of several generations, the fate of the troubles, and the fate of the bloodline, it can be said that there are bright spots everywhere, the glass of the previous life, to the patrol glass of the present life, the heroine is also shaped by you quite plump, Lun Yejun's sentence 'The various charms of this girl' can be said to have reached the apex!" ――”

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka's face was a little ugly, although Mo Wen was now praising her work, but she understood that the real criticism was behind.

Sure enough, the next moment, I heard Mo Wen say 'but', and then the content changed sharply.

"But you've added too much of your own will to this script.,I didn't write the plot of retrieving daily life in the outline.,The ending didn't make Xunli change from Liuli back to an ordinary female classmate.,That is to say, Xunli, as one of the protagonists, was actually erased by you.,In the end, it's just Liuli who wears a patrol glass skin!"

"But Xunli has inherited the memories of the past. How could the personality she had formed in this life not be affected by the memories of the past! Kasumigaoka defended unconvinced, but she seemed to realize something, and her face turned slightly pale.

"No, no, no, no, if Kasumigaoka-san, you're writing a novel.,There's nothing wrong with you writing like this.,It's pretty good.,But don't forget that you're writing a game script.,There's an option.,If you write like this,,In essence, the option of patrolling the glass has been eliminated.,In this way,From the perspective of playability, it's a failure to the extreme.,After all, a very important and brilliant character in the early stage is gone.,The so-called patrol glass is just a setting of the glass.,Even a change of name to the glass is more appropriate!"

With a playful expression on his face, Mo Wen looked at Xia Zhiqiu, whose face was getting paler and paler, but he suddenly laughed and said word by word.

"Of course, you can't blame Kasumigaoka-san! After all, although the two characters of Xunli and Ruri are created based on Megumi Kato, they actually represent the two choices that Lun can make, representing the marriage of the past and the mind of the present! ”

"You subconsciously, no, you deliberately erased the patrol glass that represents the present, in fact, you just want Lun to choose the past! It's a pity that it seems that Lun didn't agree! ”

"You also noticed it, Ryonya prefers to stay with Megumi Kato now than you and Eiri Riri!"

"-Shut up!" Hearing this, Kasumigaoka, who had been very quiet, shouted, bent his legs, and suddenly collapsed on the ground.

A line of tears flowed from her eyes, dripping down the carpet of the room, damp a large area.