Chapter 4 Review

There are more than a dozen novels to review in the expedition's mailbox, which is also one of his daily jobs. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info

He didn't care too much about the new novels sent by the system.

With the starting point Chinese network opening up the difficulty of signing, many novels that are exciting enough and a little creative are not difficult to sign.

However, this is a bit of a pain for the editors.

"It's following the trend again...... It's a routine again...... Can you come up with something else?! ”

After reviewing the beginnings of more than a dozen novels in a row, the expedition couldn't help but complain in disgust again.

Online novels are like this, often a theme is popular, and there will be a large wave of authors who will come up to follow this theme, and change the way of gold finger at will, and the content in it is inseparable.

Especially the routine text, many editors want to vomit when they see it, as soon as they open the first chapter, it is either a counterattack of waste materials, or a divorce humiliation, etc., there is no creativity at all.

However, with the reform of website content, many creative novels have emerged on the starting point Chinese website.

"Alas...... Although there have been a lot of creative essays recently, it is a pity that these creative essays are too bland, and the plot is more than 300 chapters, readers are used to new ideas, and they are often weak and empty......"

The expedition sighed helplessly.

has been a veteran editor for many years, and when he looks at the beginning, he will not leave the next plot.

Nowadays, many new books are indeed innovative, but it is a pity that after the first 300 chapters, the enthusiasm of creativity has passed, and the rest is almost no passion at all.

Either desperately flooding, or keep dragging out this plot.

"Damn! Does such a plot still appear? You think it's cool? This is feeding poison, disgusting readers, okay? ”

The expedition clicked on one again, almost scolding.

With the continuous progress of online novels, those old-fashioned pretending routines have long become poisonous spots. For example, in the city, a supporting character often comes out, repeatedly comes to trouble the protagonist, and constantly tries to disgust the protagonist.

Then, the protagonist stood up and pretended to be all kinds of coercion. is a supporting role that can be solved with one move, but the protagonist inexplicably lets each other go again and again.

Then, this disgusting supporting role repeatedly appeared to constantly make things difficult for the protagonist.

The most fucking disgusting thing is that this supporting role makes it difficult for the protagonist, and after being slapped in the face by the protagonist. I patted my ass and left, without any loss.

And after the protagonist pretended to be forced, one of the passers-by was complacent under the adoring gaze.

What is the difference between such a protagonist and ****?

Such a repeated plot is clearly a poisonous point. Feed the readers, disgust the readers. Moreover, after feeding TM once, I have to feed it several times, which is disgusting to the reader, which can be called amazing.

"You still think it's a few years ago, and you still write this kind of plot......"

The expedition was extremely disgusting, and directly filtered out this routine novel, and didn't even sign a contract.

"It's not enough to be creative, the plot is interesting, this simple truth, the editor-in-chief of Wudao has said it in the online course on the starting point network, why don't these authors understand?"

Yuanzheng scolded in his heart: "Isn't it necessary to force Lao Tzu to come out of the rivers and lakes again and write a truly wonderful book?" ”

This kind of thing is not absent, and some senior editors are disgusted by old-fashioned novels, and they can't find a book to read.

In the end, he went out in person, and he also achieved dazzling results. In the words of the editor, he was also forced to be helpless, and he didn't have to find a book worth reading, so he went out on his own.

Just as the Expedition editor helplessly flipped through other novels and kept complaining, he clicked on the beginning of another book.

"The Gate of Time and Space, this kind of title is too broad, the definition is vague, the beginning is likely to be slow to heat, and if a novice writes like this, ninety percent will die on the street."

The expedition editor read a headline, but before he could read the content, he complained.

For newcomers and new books, the title is too broad, and it is taboo to start slowly. Unless it is a great god, otherwise, before the plot is rolled out, the reader loses enthusiasm and throws it away.

Author: Fang Xiaoxing. I haven't heard of it, this name should be a newcomer......" The expedition editor clicked on the first chapter and began to read.

"Sure enough, the newcomer made a mistake for a long time, slow heating."

After sweeping the first 1,000 words, the expedition editor complained, but said: "However, this setting is a bit innovative, and I hope to pass the signing ......."

However, just when he thought that the first few chapters were all slow heat, his eyes lit up when he read the last thousand words of the first chapter.

"No, it's in the plot? No slow heat! ”

This unexpected plot made him a little interested.

However, he found that the first chapter didn't even appear with Goldfinger, but the plot progressed so well that it could be ignored.

As I continued reading, the Expedition Editor slowly began to enjoy the novel.

"Space Storm...... Forbidden Land of the Gods...... The gate of time and space can open the door of any parallel universe and various time and space...... The protagonist and his party were sucked inside? Why shouldn't it be the main character? ”

The Expedition Editor exclaimed, which was beyond his expectations. The appearance of the golden finger should belong to the protagonist, right, why have a large number of people been sucked in?

This is not a cool point, it is a poisonous point. However, I don't know why, after reading the first three chapters, it made him eager to read more.

Moreover, this ability to dig holes, as well as the control of the plot, made him feel a little familiar.

Hurriedly continued to watch the plot below.

"The Gate of Time and Space", the opening scene is a grand cosmic scene, the space fleet piloted by the protagonist and his party encountered a space storm, and the entire fleet was destroyed, and only the protagonist and a dozen friends survived.

In the cosmic storm, they were swept into the forbidden land of the gods, where they discovered the forbidden 'space-time gate' that could lead to countless parallel universes and various time and space.

Before the protagonist and his friends can figure everything out, the gate of time and space suddenly opens, drawing them into a new cosmic world.

The pacification of different civilizations in the universe, a world of desolate cultivation gods, is completely opposite to the civilization of the technological world in which the protagonist was before.

The protagonist and his friends embark on a new adventure that is spooky, full of intrigue and blood.

Just when the protagonist thinks they have figured out this worldview, they are forced to join other forces and find their way back.

A huge god twist has appeared!

……

"It's gone! Why is it gone? ”

The expedition editor had just started to see it, and the plot behind it was suddenly cut off.

This feeling is as if the foreplay has just been done, all the clothes are stripped naked, and when they are ready to do a big job, suddenly the police rush in to check the room.

That longing desire, the feeling that can only be held back, not to mention how uncomfortable it is.

"Okay, the new creative novel, whether it is the control of the rhythm of the plot, the mysterious forbidden land of the gods, the gate of time and space falling from the sky, and the collision of new cosmic worlds, the ability to dig pits, extremely skilled and profound. This is definitely the old author! ”

The Expedition Editor was a little excited, because he had finally found a novel that he could continue to read.

In his mind, he was still thinking about the pit dug by the story.

Is the cosmic storm encountered by the protagonist and his party an accident or is it deliberately done? What kind of ancient secrets are accidentally involved in the protagonist and others? Or is it who is behind the scenes who is calculating the protagonist and the other group?

Moreover, the climax of the plot in it is controlled.

A bloody scene of brothers working together in the face of various difficulties.

The deep affection between the male protagonist and the seemingly female protagonist also contains a scene of entanglement and hatred, what love and hate do the two secretly contain?

"Why does this ability to dig holes, emotional scenes, rhythm control, and innovative settings seem so familiar, but completely novel?"

The expedition editor muttered secretly, he was sure that with this strength, this book must have been written by the old author in a new vest.

Actually, the expedition editor didn't know that in this book, Fang Xiaoxing fused Wubai's talent and wrote a novel at the moment of inspiration.

Although there are traces of Wubai inside, it has long been out of the routine and style of Wubai.

Chen Dong's ability to dig holes and his enthusiasm, the emotional scenes of the Tang family, the rhythm control of silkworm potatoes, the pattern of me eating tomatoes, and the creative fusion of dreams are incisive.

In particular, Fang Xiaoxing took over several divine turns, which will make readers addicted, and the brain hole is boundless.

"It turned out to be an old author, and he should still have a manuscript in his hand!"

The wistful gaze of the expeditionary editor is as fascinating as when he read the first web novel.

"This author must sign it, and he has the manuscript in his hand, even if it is forced or tricked, he must get it! I want to see it so much! ”

The editor of the expedition hurriedly opened the backstage and sent a signing invitation to Fang Xiaoxing's author backstage.

Such a powerful author naturally wants to act early, what if he is robbed by other editors?

Not long after Fang Xiaoxing's book passed the review, the fat man who had just finished a game in the Internet café opened the homepage of the starting point Chinese website and searched for "The Gate of Time and Space".

"There it is! It's out! The "Gate of Time and Space" of the Little Star God is finally here! The fat man Ge Hui shouted excitedly.

"Finally! I haven't seen the beginning yet. ”

"I don't have a starting account yet, now is the application!"

The friends around the fat man shouted excitedly, and opened the starting point one after another, and some directly picked up their mobile phones and downloaded the starting point app.

Most of them have never seen the beginning, and although they are anxious to see the next plot, the beginning part still attracts them.

The junior boss hip-hop youth, who had just come back from rest, heard the excited shouts of the fat people, and hurriedly took out his mobile phone and opened the starting point client.

He himself has a starting point account, and he is also a high-V account.

"Finally, there is, the book of the great god is so wonderful! A must tip! ”

After Wang Weiqiang left a book review, he didn't read the content yet, so he rewarded it in a wave, he himself is not short of money, and he also supports genuine subscriptions on weekdays, and the most important thing is that he likes this book too much.

Without the slightest hesitation, an alliance leader immediately went up.

However, when he finished rewarding and looked at the book review, he immediately exclaimed, "Wow! Whoever moves faster than me actually robbed my Virgin Alliance Master! ”

"Hehe, Brother Qiang, you're late, this alliance will be mine!" Chen Fan had a lewd smile on his face.