Kasumigaoka Shiyu's manuscript did not pass the review, which surprised Ji Kong very much. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

After all, before his identity was revealed, every chapter of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's manuscript would be handed over to him for review and review, and he had read everything except the end of this novel.

So Ji Kong knows a lot about the quality of this novel.

Under normal circumstances, there should be no problem in passing the review and publication, and looking at the publishing house that submitted the manuscript, the Immortal Chuan Library, it seems that it is not a large library with particularly strict requirements.

Could it be that the problem is at the end?

Seeing that Kasumigaoka Shiyu was in the bathroom, and there was no intention of coming out in a short time, Ji Kong simply sat down in front of her computer, opened the document she wrote, and dragged the progress bar directly to the end of the novel.

The ending is not long, probably more than 4,000 words, after reading it, Ji Kong sighed, stretched out his hand and pressed his forehead, not knowing what to say.

He finally knew why Kasumigaoka Shiyu's novel was rejected.

Originally, this was supposed to be a happy and complaining novel, and the direction of the plot should also be ambiguous in the harem.

But at the end, the heroine suddenly got leukemia!

Then the style went straight down, from the joyful complaint at the beginning, it directly turned into a miserable love tragedy!

This plot is simply confusing, no wonder it will be rejected.

Ji Kong had also heard before that the mood of the creators would affect the style of their works, but he didn't expect it to be so serious, the novel was written by two people before and after!

Ji Kong has a little headache, it seems that the psychological trauma he caused to her is even greater than she imagined!

"Sora, is it troublesome?" Shiina asked softly.

"Well, it's a bit of a problem." Ji Kong scratched his head, and then smiled: "However, if I make a move, I will definitely be able to solve this problem!" ”

"Well, I believe in Sora."

"Draw a comic obediently, I'll take care of this matter."

Ji Kong touched Shiina Mashiro's head again, and then took a USB flash drive on his computer desk, and copied Kasumigaoka Shiyu's novel to his computer.

He plans to revise Kasumigaoka's novel before submitting it to Machida Enko.

Machida Enko was originally more admiring Kasumigaoka Shiha, and if she submitted Kasumigaoka's novel to her, it should be easy to pass, right?

"But...... How can I change it? ”

Ji Kong put his hands on the keyboard, but he didn't know how to write.

His writing skills are average, "Sword Art Online" was originally redeemed, not to mention that this is still a Japanese-style light novel, and he has no writing experience in this area at all.

After thinking about it, Ji Kong simply deleted the final ending of 4,000 words, and then made an open ending in three words.

Anyway, there are 100,000 words in front of this novel, and even if you delete another 4,000 words, it is enough for one volume.

Moreover, this is only the first volume of the novel, and the open-ended ending is also conducive to enhancing the reader's sense of anticipation and the development of the next volume.

After the revisions were completed, Ji Kong sent the manuscript to Machida Yuanzi in the form of an email.

Of course, he also made it clear in the email that this is a novel written by Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and he also deliberately explained that if the manuscript is approved, the letter that passed the review will be sent to Kasumigaoka Shiyu instead of sending it to him.

That should give her a big surprise, right?

Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiyu who came out of the bathroom, Ji Kong thought so.

"By the way, I have something to tell you."

It happened that the three of them were all at home, and they didn't have anything to do, so Ji Kong clapped his hands, and after focusing their eyes, he said, "Tomorrow afternoon, I'm going to attend a food conference as a judge, huh...... There must be plenty of good food there, and I'll be back late, do any of you want to come with me? ”

"I don't have to."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu refused without hesitation, and now she is still in conflict with Ji Kong, so it is naturally impossible to go with Ji Kong.

After all, when a man and a woman appear on that occasion, no matter how you look at it, they will be mistaken for a couple.

Shiina Mahaku tilted his little head and asked softly, "Will there be the ultimate Baumkuchen there?" ”

"Tsk...... Didn't you say the ultimate baumkuchen before? How did it become ultimate now? ”

Ji Kong spit out slightly, and then replied, "I don't know if there are any, but it is said that there are all top chefs there, so they must be able to make food no less than the ultimate baumkuchen, right?" ”

"Then I'm going!" Shiina Mashiro immediately raised his hand.

"Alright, let's go with the two of us tomorrow afternoon."

Ji Kong nodded, he proposed this invitation, originally because he was not very worried about Shiina Mashiro, and now that she can go with him, of course it is the best.

So the matter was decided.,Ji Kong called his school.,And Shiina Mashiro's school called to ask for leave.,And then went to the game again.,Tell the girls of the muse about not going to class tomorrow.。

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The next morning, Kasumigaoka Shiyu went to school early, and Ji Kong and Shiina Mashiro had a rare sleep in bed because they took leave.

But it was said that he was lazy, in fact, Ji Kong woke up at seven o'clock because of the biological clock, and then lay in bed for another hour before he had to accept the fact that he couldn't fall asleep and slowly got up from the bed.

Shiina Mashiro was still lying on her small bed, her small body curled up in a ball, breathing evenly, and sleeping very sweetly.

Ji Kong didn't wake her up, and after washing himself, he was ready to go out for a run, and came back by the way to buy some breakfast.

As soon as he opened the door, he saw an extra figure in the door that should not have appeared.

"Season ......"

"Bang!"

Before Sento Isuzu could say a word, Ji Kong decisively closed the door.

"Whew, how did that guy find here?!"

Ji Kong leaned against the door, still a little incredulous in her eyes, how did she know where she lived?

Tracking? This is absolutely impossible, Ji Kong is sure that when he walked out of the castle that day, he was not followed.

Could it be that she investigated her residence in one day yesterday?

It's not impossible.

But the question is, isn't there a secret force protecting itself? How was she able to investigate the results?

Ji Kong remembered that the original field savage wanted to investigate him before, but he was put into the National Security Bureau, and now that he has changed someone, why is it okay? (To be continued.) )