"Love Metronome ......"

"How can this name feel a little familiar......

After taking the document handed over by Shiichi Asakawa and seeing the title of the novel typed out by the printer, Chen Yu suddenly felt as if he had heard this name somewhere. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

Hearing Chen Yu say this, Shiichi Asakawa suddenly became curious.

"Chen Yu, do you already know this book?"

No, although this novel is quite popular, it is completely not up to the point where the two books made by Chen Yu are all-age-friendly.

This light novel, the main group is the real teenager generation, it is not like "Magic Forbidden Book**" and "My Youth Love Story Really ***", so that these uncles of a certain age can also read it.

"No, it's just that I'm a little familiar with the name."

After Chen Yu finished speaking, he began to take a serious look at the first volume of the light novel in his hand.

Although he is a layman, he still has to have a correct attitude.

If you want to guide and evaluate a novel, you must first go through that novel seriously.

Pick out the advantages and disadvantages, and then compare them to see if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

If it is the former, it can be regarded as a masterpiece, and if it is the latter, it can only be said to be a work of the mean.

Of course, this is just Chen Yu's verbal words, the real one, you still have to read it once before you can make an evaluation.

And also......

Chen Yu has no bottom in his heart now!!

Knowing is knowing, but actually doing it is not as simple as it sounds.

After discovering that Chen Yu was immersed in the novel, Shiichi Asakawa also quieted down.

Next, it's time to wait for the final result.

Time passed minute by minute, more than twenty minutes later.

Chen Yu finally finished reading the first volume of the popular light novel in his hand.

After reading it, his thoughts were......

This author is a real genius, not a copyist dressed in the skin of a genius like himself.

With Chen Yu's real level, I want to guide and advise......

Well...... Or don't say it and be ashamed......

"How?"

After discovering that Chen Yu finished reading the first volume of the light novel in his hand, Shiichi Asakawa couldn't help but ask.

After all, it was a matter of credibility that he had to pay attention to.

"This ......"

"Uncle Asakawa, can you give me paper and pen?"

I wanted to refuse, but Chen Yu saw the expectant look of Asakawa Shiichi, and he didn't know how to reject others, so he finally chose to use "Wonderful Brush Flowers" to see if he could find what he wanted.

"Hmmm......"

"-give."

Asakawa Shiichi was stunned, although he didn't know what Chen Yu wanted to do, he still handed over the paper and pen.

"Thank you."

As a result, the moment Chen Yu held the pen and wrote the first word on the paper, he returned to a state that he was already very familiar with.

His mind was full of words and phrases that he wanted to write next, but these were not what Chen Yu wanted.

This time, what he wanted was not writing, but what he wanted to stimulate himself through "Wonderful Writing and Flowers" to see if he could write something related.

Chen Yu wrote a sentence according to "Love Metronome", and his mind was full of related content.

Pregnant!!!

After a cursory glance, Chen Yu found that there was something he wanted.

Creation is not his own thing, but he can arrange and compare the things he knows in his mind, which is not difficult for him.

Chen Yu now only needs to write out what is in his mind, and then make a comparison with the original work, during which the gap between the two will be born in his mind.

This evaluation is exactly what he wants.

“......”

Is this the speed at which Chen Yu usually writes......

Chen Yu, who entered the state of wonderful writing, didn't care about Asakawa Shiichi's very surprised expression at this time. Now, he is immersed in writing the evaluation that comes to mind after comparing the two.

Chen Yu didn't feel anything, but it didn't mean that Shiichi Asakawa was the same.

Looking at Chen Yu, who kept writing something on the paper in front of him, the more Asakawa Shiichi looked at it, the more surprised he became.

His speed ......

I guess it's about the same speed as copying my homework when I was a child......

You know, writing isn't like copying.

Let's take a simple example.

The speed of writing homework and copying homework is not at the same level, one wants to think, the other is simply copying, and the speed of the two is naturally incomparable.

This is true for as simple things as writing homework and copying homework, not to mention writing novels, which are much more difficult than them.

Although the novels on the market are not like those traditional literary works, which have to be revised countless times after being written, ordinary novels, when they are created, will still make the author think a lot before and after, and then after the creation is completed, the author will also roughly revise it.

But the ...... in front of you

After his two novels were submitted, they were never revised.

The reason why Shiichi Asakawa dared to make such an evaluation was because when Chen Yu handed over the second volume manuscript, the interval between the second volume and the first volume was too short.

You said that the first volume, I don't know the time, maybe you can think that he copied it down after he finished revising it.

But the time interval between the second volume is so short, where is the time for you to revise and copy again.

The quality of the second volume is still the same as the first volume, and it is difficult to find fault with it.

These are just Asakawa Shiichi's own guesses, and now, after seeing it with his own eyes, he knows how terrifying Chen Yu's writing speed is.

This guy's talent is no longer describable by heaven, this can be regarded as a demon......

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Get!

Hemp egg, it soured me.

This kind of high-intensity writing was only available in the first two days, and now that I experience it again, I really feel like I can't look back on the past.

Looking at the three pages of handwritten comments in his hand, Chen Yu was very satisfied at this time.

Produced by the group system, it must be a high-quality product.

I just guessed if I could use "Wonderful Pen Shenghua" to write a review in a different way of thinking, but I didn't expect it to be really successful, and now it can be a perfect turnover.

"Uncle Asakawa, let's see if it's okay."

He handed over the written comment in his hand.

"Well, I'll see."

Shiichi Asakawa came back to his senses, and after receiving the manuscript handed by Chen Yu, he began to review it.

This......

Because he has read the light novel "Love Metronome", Chen Yu's comments, he doesn't seem to have that kind of feeling in the clouds.

On the contrary, after reading Chen Yu's comments on it, Shiichi Asakawa found that, just like Chen Yu's comments, the advantages and disadvantages of "Love Metronome".

Most of the advantages that Chen Yu picked out were exactly what he and the staff had thought of before, and a small part of them didn't notice it, and the same was true of the shortcomings.

If anyone has a reader like Chen Yu, it is estimated that the author will be happy and ashamed at the same time.

After all, when you meet a reader who knows how to write a novel better than you do, you must have a complicated heart.

"Good, great."

"I believe that after reading your guidance comments, the author will take the work to the next level if he overcomes it."

"That's good."

Chen Yu breathed a sigh of relief.

In fact, he was not 100% sure in his heart that what he had just written was right.

Because, what he writes is nothing more than writing down the advantages and disadvantages that come to mind, and then making his own evaluation.

After that, I fell in love through the mainstream factors of the novel, and I wrote the feeling after reading this volume.

is also a youth theme, "Love Metronome" and "My Youth Love Story is really ***", which can be said to be two different categories.

has never written such a subject, and Chen Yu is not 100% confident.

"Uncle Asakawa, if it's okay, I'll leave first."

After finishing this, Chen Yu found that it was almost noon.

If he usually had nothing to do, Chen Yu would not have left in such a hurry as he did now.

But the problem is that the things around him are backlogged together unconsciously.

To use a lyric that was popular before, it is.

'Without the slightest precaution, without a trace of concern, you just appeared, in my world, brought me surprises, and I couldn't help it'

After thinking about this lyrics, Chen Yu couldn't help but want to scold.

If there were a few more surprises like this, his life expectancy would be shortened by a few years.

"By the way, Uncle Asakawa, can you act as an intermediary and help me rent a house?"

(To be continued.) )