The second volume has also been written, more than 200,000 words, in short, the mood is complicated.

It's better to introduce yourself than a testimonial about finishing the book.

When I first wrote it, I started writing with the simple idea of wanting to tell a fun story, so I wrote it very willfully.

Basically, I can write whatever I want, which seems to have led to the same willfulness of the people in the article as I do.

You can do whatever you want, and you often run off to strange places and can't pull it back.

The order in which I write my own essays is: I think of a fun story, and after the main outline is formed, I start designing the characters.

But once the characters have their own personalities, they often affect the original main outline, and finally cause the characters to get away with it, and the author can't hold it.

For example, the ending of the first volume, in fact, it stands to reason that there should be a climax, Comrade Xiaobei and Song Yuanshan had a shocking demon battle, and then justice defeated evil, everyone had a happy ending, and then happy by the way, even the princess was included in the harem or something.

And then in the end, it didn't fight, probably because after the character and the main plot conflicted, the plot gave way to the characters.

After all, the character of the male protagonist is not the kind of hot-blooded boy who stands up casually and fights with a mouthpiece.

Having said that, I'm already in my thirties, and I still have the second disease, so if I am hot-blooded, I will let the character collapse.

So when you can't control the plot, you can only end the story quickly, and then fill in the hole at the end.

And then it leads to a mess of rhythm.

The last few chapters of the first volume are really a change of heart while writing every day, and I have thought about deleting the text countless times.

And all kinds of unpleasantness when I wrote it at the beginning, not to mention the plot, I always feel dissatisfied with the writing.

So one day, in order to prove that he had regained his courage, he wrote a piece of meat, which in the end was just for a simple show of skill [laughs]

In the end, after writing it all, I found that the biggest problem was that the rhythm was not well grasped.

And then there's the second volume.

When I first thought about it, it was really special6

It's a relatively feminine story

The beauties of the Republic of China period were quiet and stubborn, and they were born contradictory in the era when they were influenced by traditional ideas and longed for a free life.

Stand-in, love but can't, every woman has her own helplessness. But he refused to give up no matter what, and finally became a cinnabar mole or something in other people's hearts.

But when I actually wrote it, it was not as amazing as I imagined, and I realized that my writing should not be as good as I originally imagined.

Especially near the end, it should be a particularly beautiful plot

When I wrote there, I thought that the previous style of writing had always taken a concise, clear, and straightforward route, and it might be a bit strange to suddenly have a large section of particularly complex descriptive language.

Whether it's writing about the scene or the appearance, people who read too much will probably find it annoying.

Then it can only be added a little bit.

In fact, this story might be better if the timeline was a little longer, at least the relationship between the male protagonist and his aunt and his wife would seem less abrupt.

At the end of the writing, an emotional line suddenly appeared, which was really inexplicable.

But there is no horror element in the haunted house, and it seems boring to simply fall in love.

But there are too many horror elements and it's a bit messy.

can only be reluctantly explained as a mistake at first sight for XX [tears]

Fortunately, other people's emotional lines are all memories, and they don't write much. Otherwise, if you compare, the male protagonist will commit suicide in shame in front of the teacher.

And at the beginning of this story, it was also to show off skills, and there were several bright and dark lines. When all the clues are put together, it's a little out of control. But it has already been written, and if you give up halfway, it will only become a pit.

The result is that even though I know what these things mean, what's the use of reading them if they don't understand them?

So the second half has been studying how to fill the pit.

And every day when I write it, I send it when I write it, and it's easy to forget the dark lines I buried before.

Fortunately, the memory is still holding up.,If it's really a goldfish brain.,After the previous chapter was written, the next chapter was forgotten.,Then even if the main outline is good, it's estimated that the second volume will collapse.。

But at least there has been progress, and there is no need to rush to the end because of the conflict between the character and the main line.

summarized the problems put together in these two volumes, probably because the emotional scenes and action scenes are not well written, and although the rhythm is improving, it is still not good.

If you think about it carefully, you can't write emotional dramas and action scenes well, and you still have the courage to appear in front of the masses.

I don't know how thick my skin is.

In the final analysis, these are all problems of the author's own lack of ability, so we just have to continue to work hard.

I always feel that this can be written well and that can be written well, but when I really write, I realize that I am not as powerful as I imagined.

Then there's the typo, just don't complain, I'll try to ......

Speaking about the problem of backfilling pits.

I'm not the kind of person who writes something and has to come up with a summary of thoughts, such as seeing the weakness of human nature from this incident or something.

Even the simplest chapter of filial piety has not been expanded.

Otherwise, the male protagonist can make up a few hundred words in an ideological and political class.

But I personally really don't like this kind of model of teaching people to be a man, there will always be a feeling of being simple to say, you can do it, you can do it.

So I just just ridiculed the chapter name.

There is also the problem of the logic of the characters, in fact, each character has his own personality [at least that's what I think].

But it's still the pot of the author's ability, so I don't know how much I wrote.

Maybe many people don't seem to have any logic in doing things, or they can't understand what the logic of his actions is, which makes everyone look like a neurotic, and the whole article looks full of pits.

For example, why did the princess seduce passers-by, why did Song Yuanshan kill Lu Mingsen, why did the actor pretend to be the eldest lady after he died, why did the eldest lady bully the male protagonist and why the male protagonist put up with her.

I deliberately wrote a little dark line, and I was worried that the writing was not good, and I don't know if everyone could see it.

But it doesn't matter if you don't see it, as long as everyone finds the story interesting, I'm happy.

You don't have to think too extensively, it's too brain-consuming. Any foreshadowing and dark lines are only related to the plot characters, and there is nothing deeper. The author himself is not such a powerful person, a person who can hide all kinds of ridicule, hints, dissatisfaction, and so on in the text.

That's Lu Xun's big way of showing off his skills, and his skills are shallow, so he really doesn't dare to play this kind of thing casually.

Speaking of Lu Xunda, when I wrote the end of the second volume, I wanted to find information on the stage, but unfortunately I saw Lu Xunda's social drama.

After reading a few big words, I was ashamed to delete the article.

However, I still want to show it off.

Regarding the second volume called Yutangchun, the drama is still singing about Su Sanqi's solution.

Su Sanqi's solution is really a good play.

The drama girl has sung Su Sanqi all her life, and she is still singing even when she dies.

In fact, this story outside the play is also the story of Yutang Chun.

But after writing it, think about it carefully, and it's better not to use this kind of hint that you need to check the information in the future.

After all, no matter how well it is written, it is just the author himself laughing at himself, and it is useless.

There is no complicated character relationship in the next volume.,The plot is the drone vs. the zombie king that I said before.。

I've been checking the information of drones this morning, and I found out that the topic of drone vs. zombie king is simply a copy of the heroic difficulty created for myself to die.

Teachers who have been laying the groundwork for a long time will also appear.

As for the old man, he is the protagonist of the final volume, so please don't miss him in the short term.

Because the next volume is an adventure story, there shouldn't be many emotional lines.

But there are still girls, and there are benefits [although not much]

I believe that everyone is not one who cares about these details.

Even if it's an adventure, it's not too magical.,There's no setting for the protagonist to fight monsters and upgrade in the whole text.。

There may be a somewhat fantasy unfolding volume in the back, but there are not many, and it will not affect the basic setting of the supernatural unit drama in this article.

To put it simply, from the first volume to the last volume, no matter how many words are written, Comrade Xiaobei is still Comrade Xiaobei at the beginning.

If you should abuse cannon fodder, you will abuse cannon fodder, and if you should be abused by the boss, you will be abused by the boss.

There's no such thing as saving the planet, the truth of the world, and so on, after all, I'm just trying to tell fun stories.

Anyway, I'll continue to work the third volume, and as long as everyone is a little patient with me, I'll be very happy.

Here are two questions about the book review, [I'm so happy to see that you have such a request for me, really]

1. The pit will definitely not, because it is a unit drama mode, a volume is almost 100,000 words floating, even if you really feel that you can't write it one day, you can still finish the last volume and finish it. After all, there is no such thing as a bad ending without a main line. As long as the last volume is written completely, it shouldn't be a pit.

2. The title of this article looks like a big game of chess, but it actually is. At the beginning, I had three complete story outlines in my head: the first one was Princess Loulan, who had already been written. The second is a historical story, but it is a nonsense to study the evidence before writing, and try to make it look reasonable, so I don't dare to write it yet. The third one touches on some well-known sensitive issues, so I guess I need to discuss it with the editor before writing it?

Secretly rubbing to say that although I have a lot of brains, I really don't have that much courage to play history casually, and it is too difficult to operate in practice, and I am afraid of being complained by the party that understands history.

But now I have some other ideas in my head, so I'll try to write as much as I can.

Although it seems to be a bit off-topic now, [kneeling]

And thank you again for your support for so long (and the reward collection recommendation ticket).