I don't have an account in Longkong.,Just open a reply here.,I hope if there's a Longkong account to see it, I can help transfer it.。

Some people say that the character portrayal in this book is a bit weak, indeed, because my pen is not enough, and I can feel that many characters are not clear enough when I look at this book from the reader's point of view.

The problem with the atmosphere of terror...... This is the first supernatural text I've written, and I've only been able to write it to this level! Maybe I can improve my ...... by honing a few hundred thousand words more Probably, the friend who said that I didn't have enough atmosphere wanted to recommend a few books with enough atmosphere to me, and I would study and study first, and then improve them.

As for my superiority with Xiaobai Wenxiu...... Originally, I was a new book author, where did I get any sense of superiority! That's just my casual reply, how can someone take a screenshot...... Xiao Baiwen and Lao Bai Wen Qingwen are not superior in my eyes, after all, everyone is just having fun, I just think it's a bit far-fetched to say that my protagonist is not witty and decisive enough......

The author has just been a freshman this year, and this is the first time I have written such a long book. The concubine can't do it! As for all kinds of suggestions and criticisms, as long as they are reasonable, I will naturally accept them gladly.

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