Chapter 166: The Standard Plot of Rifanri (10/13)
Looking at the characters who appeared in the first episode of "One Piece", Ayano Iida felt her brows and began to twitch. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info
What the hell is going on with this strange-looking figure and strange appearance?!
Iida Ayano has also read a lot of comics, but she really hasn't seen this weird style of painting once.
If it was another comic, maybe she would have lost it directly.
After all, women always care more about the appearance of a thing.
But thinking about the excellent beginning of this comic, she still decided to put up with it, after all, the painting style is wonderful, but it's not without comics with good word-of-mouth sales, such as jojo.
So Iida Ayano resisted the desire to complain and began to read the manga.
About ten minutes later, Ayano Iida read the manga in one sitting, and then let out a long breath!
She reads quickly, but that's not to say that this manga is bad, on the contrary, it's the plot of the first episode of "One Piece", which is too compact and cohesive!
I couldn't help it, so I read it straight in one go!
From the beginning when the protagonist Luffy poked himself in the face with a knife and said his ambitions, to the appearance of the first pirate group, but he behaved very badly, to Luffy eating the magical Devil Fruit, and then Luffy was captured by the bandits, and the red-haired Shanks rushed to the rescue.
In the end, the giant sea kings appeared and attacked Luffy, but they were saved by Shanks.
Here, Ji Kong deliberately used contrasting techniques to outline the huge size of the sea kings, and the insignificance of Shanks, from the picture, it is like the difference between giants and ants!
But it was the glance of this "ant" that made the huge sea kings as big as the mountains turn around and run away in fright, and at this time, Shanks pulled out the famous knife on his waist and slashed it down with a sword, and the entire sea area, including the sea kings, was divided into two halves!
This shocking picture made Iida Ayano involuntarily cover her mouth, otherwise she was afraid that she would exclaim!
Generally speaking, portraying a character who is too powerful at the beginning of the story is not conducive to the reader's sense of substitution, but because in just one sentence, Shanks shows an amazing personality charm, and his identity as Luffy's teacher and friend, so that Iida Ayano can't hate him at all!
On the contrary, she found that as a rotten girl, she faintly liked this character!
When Shanks finally handed the straw hat to Luffy, this scene with inheritance meaning actually made her eyes faintly sour!
After stabilizing her mood, Ayano Iida analyzed the manga a little and found that "One Piece" was difficult for her to find fault with other than the painting style.
Whether it is the storyboard, the rhythm of the plot, or the style, it is very mature and stable, not like a novice at all.
And the elements needed for "Jump", such as friendship, blood, hard work, and victory, are vividly displayed in the first episode!
Gotta sign this manga!
Ayano Iida quickly picked up her phone from the table and dialed Kiku's number.
"Doodoo-"
After the phone rang for a long time, no one answered.
Ayano Iida gritted her teeth and continued to dial over, but no one answered.
"Damn, as an editor, I took the initiative to call you, and you still didn't answer?"
Iida Ayano is on fire, dial again, this time someone finally answered, Ji Kong's lazy, as soon as he heard the voice that he hadn't woken up yet, came from the other end of the phone: "The user you dialed is not here for the time being, please leave a message after the 'tick', tick-"
"My sister!" Ayano Iida couldn't help but burst into a foul mouth.
"Doodoo
A busy tone came, and the phone was hung up.
Iida Ayano was stupid, after so many years as an editor, it was the first time she was hung up by the painter who submitted the manuscript, and after being stunned for five seconds, she gritted her teeth and dialed the phone again.
Soon, the phone was connected, and this time Iida Ayano didn't talk nonsense, and said directly: "I'm the editor of Shueisha, Iida Ayano!" ”
"Uh...... It turned out to be an editor of Iida. ”
Ji Kong yawned, "I'm sorry, I just woke up, so I didn't look at the caller ID just now, I didn't know it was you." ”
"It's already eight o'clock before you wake up, are you a pig?" Ayano Iida said angrily: "What about the vitality of young people? If you don't take the time to exercise, be careful of growing a small belly! ”
"Eldest sister, do you know it's only eight o'clock? It's a holiday today, and I don't need to go to class, why do I have to get up so early? And I was tired last night, too? Ji Kong couldn't laugh or cry.
"Tired?" Ayano Iida immediately grasped the key word: "What did you do, would you be so tired?" ”
Ji Kong let out a "uh" sound, and was about to find a random reason to fool the past, when suddenly lying on the bed at this time, it seemed that Shiina Mashiro, who should be asleep, actually opened his mouth and said: "Sora, don't hit me in the face with a big python, it hurts ......"
Ji Kong: "......"
Ayano Iida: "......"
"Good! So that's what you call 'you're tired'?! ”
Ayano Iida broke out all of a sudden, "A girl who is so pure as Mashiro, how can you be willing to let her do such a dirty thing?" He even hit her in the face with that thing! You ...... You beast! ”
"That's not right! This is definitely a big misunderstanding! True White...... Feed! It's so white! Hurry up and explain it to me! ”
Ji Kong desperately shook Shiina Mashiro's body, but what made him complain in his heart was that Mashiro was really asleep!
But since she was asleep, why could she still say such things at such a coincidental time?
In such a fierce shaking, Zhenbai woke up as a matter of course, blinked his eyes in a daze, looked at Ji Kong and said softly: "Sora, let me go, I want to sleep, don't toss me......"
"Good! You're too bold! Actually talking to me on the phone, and at the same time still making a real white like that! ”
Ayano Iida's roaring voice, even if Ji Kong turned on the earpiece mode, it sounded like the speaker was turned on.
"Don't say it.,I seem to be the protagonist in Lifan!"
Iida Ayano's words made Ji Kong almost vomit blood, because according to Iida Ayano's description, it was simply a standard lifan plot!
But would I do something like that?
Well, Ji Kong shamefully found that deep down in his heart he was actually quite longing......
Shaking his head and throwing some dirty thoughts out of his mind, Ji Kong stared at Shiina Mashiro and said loudly: "If you get up now, there are three Baumkuchen cakes for breakfast!" ”
"I'm not sleepy!"
Shiina's white eyes opened all of a sudden, and his burgundy eyes looked at Ji Kong fixedly, as if to say-What about Baumkuchen?
Ji Kong: "......" (To be continued.) )