52. The dust settles
Liang Yu and Chen Nan's "Pursuit" was looked at by several judges in turn, and finally fell into the hands of Teacher Toriyama.
When I found out about "Kaede" just now, it started with Toriyama-sensei.,But now it's his turn to end here.,After Katsura-sensei and Araki-sensei finished reading the original work.,Although they didn't have an exaggerated expression like Kazuki-sensei.,But they also carefully exchanged glances with each other.,Ask each other's opinions.。
The atmosphere of the discussion just now became a little serious and tense, which made the two deputy editors-in-chief sit on pins and needles, they don't know if the teachers know the particularity of Liang Yu and Chen Nan's original work, the previous incident made a lot of noise, it is inevitable that some talkative editors will pass the word out, if someone has said it, then the judges and teachers should be aware.
Sure enough, Mr. Toriyama stopped after reading through it from beginning to end, stared at the original manuscript with his eyes, and said, "I see, was it this new couple who made the editor and the editor-in-chief quarrel before?" ”
Tong Cheng sweated for a moment, and said in his heart that those newcomer editors were really talkative, but he corrected: "The winner in the SD script contest is the original work of this work, and the one who paints is a complete newcomer." ”
"Newcomer?" Mr. Araki over there interjected: "Where is the newcomer, with such painting skills, if you are still a newcomer, then we old-timers will not be compared?" ”
Mr. Araki is also from the Red Dragon Award.,That year won the second place.,Although I don't want to blacken myself.,But his debut work is compared with this "Pursuit",The gap is really a little obvious.,The painter of this work can't see the youth at all.,The mature brush blade contains the skills honed over time.,That's why Mr. Araki said so.。
"Middle school students?" Mr. Gui didn't hear the news anecdotes of these editorial offices, and it was the first time I heard about the names of Liang Yu and Chen Nan today: "If I hadn't told me so beforehand, I really couldn't believe that middle school students had created such a spicy story." ”
Mr. Gui is recognized as one of the best beautiful girls in the history of Fantasy magazines.,Comics often play side-balls.,So the content of his drawings is actually closer to youth magazines than juvenile magazines.,Readers are also in the upper age group of Fantasy as a whole.。
Works suitable for young people mean that the ideological level is higher, so when he looks at the submissions of these Red Dragon Awards, he will inevitably feel that the story is too shallow, including the basketball comics that were praised by the teachers before, but this "Pursuit" is different, the clues are buried very deep, full of suspense, and the meaning is profound, this is no longer the level of eye-catching, but it makes Mr. Gui have a feeling that he has raised the level of this selection in vain, and it is no wonder that he made a fuss at the beginning of the month.
As for Mr. Kazuki, who was shocked just now, he is much calmer now, and he is a little embarrassed about the gaffe at the beginning. However, the other teachers did not laugh at him at all, which just proves that his opinion is also in line with the other teachers' intentions.
Compared with the other three, Kazuki's qualifications are a little shallower, but he is the one who creates the best atmosphere among the three. In order to achieve the desired effect, then the layout in advance and the setting of the scene are extremely important, which is also the most resonant place for Kazuki in this original manuscript.
He can not care about this suspenseful plot, or he can ignore the thought-provoking proposition of the story, but in the end, the protagonist was shot by a bullet and fell, and the back of his reunion with his wife and children came to his mind, but it made him feel as if he had been stabbed in the chest, and he couldn't calm down for a long time.
Everyone's eyes were on Mr. Toriyama, who was holding the original manuscript at the moment, savoring tea and thinking about it, and even the editor knew that his comments might affect whether this work could win the championship.
"Very good newcomer, good painter, and great storytelling, much more reliable than the one I submitted." It is said that he saw a manga magazine on the train and thought he could draw and quit his job to join the industry, but the process was more difficult than anyone else, and the number of pages of the manuscript rejected by the editorial department reached 3,000 pages, and finally he became an instant hit with "Arare", which can be described as an inspirational model.
When Mr. Toriyama said this, he made a serious face: "But how can young people be so arrogant and arrogant, and not even take the authority of the editor-in-chief in their eyes?" I don't think you can encourage young people like this, you have to give them a good boost. I don't care if he's one person or two, if he's a middle school student or not, even if the editor is fired for it, I'm still loyal to my impression. ”
Toriyama's words made the two deputy editors-in-chief drop their glasses, and it was hard to imagine that such words came from the mouth of a manga master, and Duan Chang was busy explaining: "The argument between the editor-in-chief and the editor, these two authors should not be aware. ”
But no one paid attention to him, and Mr. Araki said, "That's right, let these little ghosts know that Fantasy is not a place for them to make waves, and I will definitely be loyal to my ideas and score." ”
Tong Cheng complained in his heart when he heard this, Mr. Araki, you just want to say this.
Teacher Gui over there also nodded in agreement after the two expressed their opinions: "The two teachers who should say it have said it, and I mean the same thing." ”
With that, he marked his scorecard in front of the name.
The rest of Kazuki-sensei didn't say anything.
"So, I'll fill in the comments on this work, right?" Toriyama said.
"Hmm."
"It should."
The other three teachers were all answers.
After all the works of the Red Dragon Award have been reviewed, several teachers have also quit, and the next thing is the work of the editors, adding up the scores of several teachers to calculate the average to get the final ranking of the works.
"It seems that several teachers have a good impression of "Pursuit", but the evaluation is not very high, and I don't know if they can win the award this time......" While counting the works, Tong Cheng said, but he didn't say the rest of the words, because they all knew what the result would be if they didn't win the championship.
However, Duan Changzai did not answer Tong Cheng's words, Tong Cheng looked up and found that he was staring at the label on a file bag in a daze, which was written the judge's comment on the work.
"What's wrong?" Tong Cheng asked curiously.
"Tricked." Duan Chang finally raised his head from the case file and replied with a crying and laughing expression.
It didn't take long for Liang Yu and Chen Nan, who had been guarding their mobile phones at home, to receive a call representing the final result of the Red Dragon Award.