39. About long-form manuscripts

"Yes, yes, I see."

Guo Pinyuan hung up the phone and saw Ye Chuan walking in from the elevator with his pockets in his pockets.

"Well, the young man who came today, you seem to have a pretty high opinion of him." Guo Pinyuan asked.

Ye Chuan pulled open the empty chair next to Guo Pinyuan, sat down, and leaned on the back of the chair as if he was struggling: "See? ”

"Well, I heard a little bit when I came in from outside." Guo Pinyuan showed a lot of concern, after all, Ye Chuan's vision was quite sophisticated among the editors, and the people he valued were definitely not ordinary. Guo Pinyuan put all the treasures on Liang Yu and Chen Nan's "Pursuit" this time, and now the guy who suddenly appeared is likely to become Liang Yu's competitor in the Red Dragon Award, so he has to guard against it.

As a result, Ye Chuan suddenly laughed and waved his hand; "Hahahaha, don't care, don't care, that's a supernumerary, I guess he won't even be able to pass the first round of screening."

"Huh?" This can't help but surprise Guo Pinyuan, because when he passed by the reception room, he obviously heard Ye Chuan say that it was no problem to be selected for the gold award, but now how can he not even pass the first round of preliminaries?

"Ah, that's, it's the son of a former classmate of mine, and it's said that he likes comics very much, so his dad asked me to see if I could train it. But what to say?,Boys at this age are too self-righteous.,Single-mindedly think that the world is great.,You can win an award or something by drawing casually.,Completely underestimate the comics.。 Ye Chuan shrugged his shoulders: "I persuaded him at first, but then I found out that he admitted his death and completely took my words as a deaf ear, so I simply gave up and said two good words in his father's face, anyway, it was impossible for such a guy to win the award in the first place." ”

Guo Pinyuan was in a cold sweat when he heard this: "Mr. Ye Chuan, is it really okay for you to do this?" ”

"Young people, you just need to hit the wall more, otherwise you won't be able to listen to what others say, and I'm doing my best to help him, but his current level is still far behind." Ye Chuan sighed with emotion, and suddenly changed his words: "What happened to the two middle school students under your hands, are they painting well?" ”

"Well, the goal is the Red Dragon Award this time." Guo Pinyuan said.

"Okay, I've read the storyboard last time, and it's done quite well, so it seems that if there is no demon like Gu Chengfeng this time, this newcomer group will win the award."

"After all, the game hasn't started yet, so it's hard to say." Although he said so, Guo Pinyuan's expression betrayed his true thoughts.

Ye Chuan didn't break it, stood up and walked towards his work table: "Come on, it's time for our group to get some results, we can't let Liu Xiang Gu Chengfeng in their group take the lead." ”

"Hmm." Guo Pinyuan lowered his head after answering.

Gu Chengfeng, is a terrible newcomer, his new serialization "Wang Tinghuiyin" has been serialized for 3 issues since its inception, and the reader votes received every week are far ahead, it stands to reason that Gu Chengfeng has two comics serialized in Fantasy magazine at the same time, and the new works will inevitably be divided from the old works, but his two serials are all ranked in the top five, and he is already a well-deserved Fantasy first-line author.

In contrast, Liang Yu and Chen Nan are still working hard for the short story, and they are newcomers with little experience.

Hahaha, it's too early for them to deal with Gu Chengfeng, Guo Pinyuan thought.

Anyway, I have to talk to the original about the long storyboard first, Guo Pinyuan looked at the time on his watch, and then stood up from his chair.

30 minutes later, the café closest to Liang Yu's house.

"Then please show me the long storyboard on the phone." After meeting, Guo Pinyuan said straightforwardly.

If Liang Yu and Chen Nan can win the Red Dragon Award, then it will be equivalent to becoming a cartoonist and making their official debut, taking advantage of the fact that there is still a month before the competition, they can practice drawing storyboards of serial content, even if they don't win the award by then, for Liang Yu, they have also gained experience.

"That ......" Liang Yu's voice was a little slurred, but she finally turned around and pulled out a stack of drafts from her handbag and handed them to the editor sitting on the other side.

"Huh?" When Guo Pinyuan flipped through this stack of storyboards, his first impression was that Liang Yu's paintings had improved. Although the storyboard is actually a draft in the final analysis, you don't have to draw it too seriously, as long as the editors and cartoonists themselves can read the characters and direction of the plot, but Liang Yu draws very seriously, if you take out the manuscript she submitted two months ago, it may make people misunderstand which one is the original manuscript.

It seems that I have been practicing drawing seriously, and the progress is quite obvious, so I guess it has been quite practiced.

Guo Pinyuan thought so.

It's not hard to tell the difference, although this is a pencil sketch with eraser scribbling, but the picture and lines don't lie, although it's hard to praise it from an editor's point of view that this is enough, but anyone who has seen Liang Yu's previous drawings will be amazed at her growth.

In short, it's not too late to take a look at her content before commenting.

Guo Pinyuan turned the page.

This is a story with a science fiction background, and the era of the story is many years later, human technology has advanced by leaps and bounds, and finally has the ability to enter the distant universe and open up the sea of stars. The protagonists are members of the Space Fleet, and their goal this time is to enter the wormhole and explore the edge of the universe.

It's a very dangerous thing to leave the earth and explore through the wormhole.,But the hero for his own and human dreams.,Resolutely move forward.,Before leaving, he said goodbye to his girlfriend.,Girlfriend said that she would pray for him here for safety.,Wait for him to return.。

Next, it is the plot of the spacecraft sailing into space, the protagonist and the crew interacting, each crew member has their own ties, and at the same time has great determination to complete the mission, the spacecraft slowly sails to the black hole of the target shuttle in such a harmonious atmosphere. Everything should be foolproof, but just after they burrow into the black hole, the terrible chain of disasters begins, first the continuous meteorite constellation, then the failure of the spacecraft's instrumentation, and then the final nuclear fission, and the last picture, the tearing and fragmented spacecraft is a second before the explosion, the protagonist is stunned to look at the scene in front of him, and he is speechless for a while.

The pendant of the guardian pendant that the lovers put on him with their own hands was broken and fell to the ground, and then everything was swallowed and covered by the dazzling light, and the picture turned into a scene of the girl leaning on the head of the bed and looking up at the starry sky in the dark night.

If the story ends here, it will be just a general science fiction story, but Liang Yu actually set up a curtain two here.

It was a teenager and a girl chatting around something like a model of the universe, and the teenager told the girl that it was an observation diary he had made during his summer vacation in junior high school.

"These alphas are interesting, they're always trying to break through the barriers that I've put here and get to the border. It's really convincing.,Agini's wormhole program is bad enough.,The channel that was supposed to be connected to another coordinate axis turned out to be a problem with the program itself.,Fortunately, I finally deleted the data.,Directly added disaster mode to erase the wrong data.,Otherwise, this observation report will be in vain.。 ”

"Hey, I said Jason, we still have some time left in the summer, where are we going to go and play together."

"Good idea, the homework is done anyway, where to go?"

"How about taking the empty rail to Blue Star?"

"Okay."

"So what are you going to do with this model?"

"Leave it alone, the observation report has already been written, and the battery has been running for so long, let's let it drain on its own."

The last page of the picture is a countdown to the time when the universe is gone.

Guo Pinyuan was stunned, if he hadn't seen the end, he wouldn't have thought that these two seemingly unrelated stories were actually one, and the deep meaning of science fiction descriptions in them made people shudder, could it be that the world we live in is also built by "gods" at will like this?

But Guo Pinyuan's process of enlightenment is not too long, because he reacted quickly, isn't this still a short story?