272. Gu Chengfeng made a move
On Saturday, Liang Yu and Gu Chengfeng met at a café in the center of the city as scheduled.
Gu Chengfeng had Liu Xiang's support, and he didn't make a joke in a serious formal suit like he did last time he participated in a group trip, he was dressed quite casually today, because the time had entered October, and the weather was getting cooler, so it was appropriate for him to wear a shirt and a thin jacket.
Mainly Liang Yu's side.
Generally speaking, the weather is the enemy of the girl, because once the climate becomes cold, the clothes worn on the body will increase, and a set of clothes will be piled on the body, so even the best women are estimated to be out of shape, which makes all the girls who love beauty like a great enemy. How to keep warm, and not look bloated, almost every girl has to do homework this season, if the skill is not enough, or it is particularly persistent, it is estimated that it is still wearing very cool, and I would rather be frozen than wear more.
However, Liang Yu is obviously not the type who has to succeed even if he wants to abuse himself.
Although she studied clinical medicine when she studied medicine, it doesn't mean that she doesn't understand these, at least in terms of slimming and body care, Liang Yu still has a little right to speak, she didn't let herself go because she suddenly transformed into a beauty embryo, on the contrary, she paid great attention to diet, sleep and exercise.
Not much else, in more than a year, she has changed from a character like Lin Daiyu to the appearance of being rich and healthy, she usually doesn't wear makeup, and she only wears light makeup when she really attends any important occasion, but Rao is like this, a natural beauty from the inside out, but it is enough to take people's breath away.
This includes the men who have female companions in the café, as well as Gu Chengfeng, who has forgotten his words while sitting in a chair.
"Sorry, I'm late, and I'm a little stuck in traffic."
Liang Yu put down his handbag on the chair next to him, and then sat down on the chair opposite Gu Chengfeng.
Today's Liang Yu is wearing a plain white shirt with a textured pattern, with a fake two-piece hoodie with black and white cuffs. Below is a thick plaid skirt with black leggings, which keeps warm and earns face. Of course, the premise of daring to wear it like this is that your legs are slim and well-proportioned and can show off, otherwise the top pair of radish elephant legs will really make people vomit out even overnight meals.
Liang Yu naturally has this capital, so I won't say much about this.
Getting back to the point, Gu Chengfeng, who was a little dizzy by Liang Yu, took a while to react, he smacked his mouth like a goldfish, and he couldn't say a word about the words he had wanted for a long time (Liu Xiang taught him), but fortunately the waiter came over at this time and handed Liang Yu an order, which saved Gu Chengfeng's gaffe a little, and he quickly lowered his head and took a sip of coffee.
Woo, it's so bitter, I wouldn't have pretended to be forced to do that weird bunch of foreign texts if I knew it.
But it was also thanks to this bitter taste that made his mind calm down a bit.
"Give me a cappuccino." Liang Yu smiled at the waiter and returned the order.
"Okay, wait a minute." The waiter looked at Liang Yu, glanced back at Gu Chengfeng, smiled on his face, turned his head and immediately changed his face, and scolded in his heart: "Mom. Yes, Lao Tzu is so handsome, why is there no such beauty, you kid is so ugly, why do you know such a beauty, it's not fair, it's all the world's fault! ”
This monologue in his heart happened to be the inner roar of the men in this café, and it was no wonder that Gu Chengfeng felt like a man in his back for a while.
He wanted to open his mouth several times to open the chatterbox, but each time it ended in failure, and in the end, Liang Yu couldn't bear it first, so he said: "Looking for Teacher Gu Chengfeng today, you really want to ask you to give me advice, may I ask if you are dealing with the plot high. What about the tide? ”
The general situation has been said on the phone before, Liang Yu is not the kind of mother-in-law and mother-in-law, she directly found the entry point and went straight in.
Although Gu Chengfeng has been performing poorly, he has prepared for this paragraph, and he finally didn't know any more questions.
"I should say it's okay." Gu Chengfeng thought about it and said.
"Do what you like?" Liang Yu has always felt that Gu Chengfeng is the kind of cartoonist who is inspired and does whatever he wants, but he never thought that the word "what he likes" would come out of his mouth.
Gu Chengfeng nodded, he originally wanted to adjust his mood by lowering his head and taking a sip of coffee, but when he thought of the bitter taste like taking medicine, he still shrugged off: "I didn't understand these things before, but I was lucky, or according to Liu Xiang...... Editor's words, I'm a genius. ”
He didn't feel embarrassed when he said this, but it is true that if Gu Chengfeng is not qualified to be called a genius, then there is no genius in this world, at least in the comic circle.
Gu Chengfeng paused, and finally regained his feelings: "But as I started serializing, I gradually began to find out that Fantasy is a commercial comic magazine in the end, and its foothold is to attract readers, and in layman's terms, it is to make money." So,What kind of cultural background,It's not appropriate in Fantasy,Some people say that my story has just started.,It's just starting to look good.,Cut in half.,Some people say it's not that I'm not good at level.,But you don't understand my deep meaning.,Cut in half.,So if you want to gain a foothold in Fantasy and gain a lot of fan popularity,You have to do what you like.,Let readers understand.,Understand.,Like your work.,That's a success - of course,This is my personal opinion.,Teacher Liangyu must also know.。 ”
At first, Gu Chengfeng said it was quite good, but then he looked up at Liang Yu and found that the other party's eyes were looking at him motionlessly, so he was immediately deflated and quickly looked away.
Liang Yu felt that what Gu Chengfeng said was very right, because she was a student herself, and she didn't have much consciousness as a cartoonist, and the people who usually talked about her the most were Yuwen Tong, Xiaolin, Zhu Ying and Fang Qing, although they could give some correct opinions, but they were definitely not as profound as Gu Chengfeng, who was also a cartoonist.
Liang Yu's "Chess Soul" was created very casually, she only cared about her own rationality, but never thought from the reader's point of view.
Gu Chengfeng undoubtedly provided her with a new idea, which made her a little impatient to ask: "So Mr. Gu Chengfeng, if I want to quickly increase the popularity of a book, how can I 'do what I like'?" ”
"Well, I can sum it up in three points."
"Which three?"
"First of all, try to portray as little as possible the part of the protagonist's grievances, and even if there is, let the reader maintain the protagonist's determination to find the scene soon. To put it mildly, in "Chess Soul", Ah Guang was promoted to junior high school, and suddenly gave up competing with Xiao Liang in frustration, and recently, the plot of Ah Guang's admission to the hospital some time ago has been wandering at a low altitude has dragged on for too long, although it is said that Ah Guang has now been promoted to a group, but let him go from the last place in the group to the first place, and no one likes to watch it," Seeing Liang Yu's expression fell silent, Gu Chengfeng, who felt that he had said it, hurriedly waved his hand: "No, I didn't say that Teacher Liangyu didn't arrange it well, this ...... This is just a little bit of my humble opinion, and it may be wrong. ”
"No, I think what Teacher Gu Chengfeng said is very good, please don't worry about me, if it was Teacher Gu Chengfeng, how would you arrange the plot?"
Gu Chengfeng hurriedly took a sip of coffee to suppress the shock, but he reaped the consequences.
"If it were me, I would cut this plot and directly arrange a fierce conflict instead, because this kind of trickle is less pleasant, and more is procrastinated, readers like to see the protagonist and powerful people, the more powerful, the more attractive, and as far as I know, the biggest attraction of "Chess Soul" is the conflict between Ah Guang and Xiao Liang, and readers must be looking forward to this."
When he said this, Gu Chengfeng didn't hide it like he did just now, his eyes were shining.