Chapter 230 is all about foiling the villain
Chapter 230
The previous plot of this "The Emperor of Water" is completely based on Long Aotian as the protagonist, writing about what he sees and hears, and depicting a seemingly real Xianxia world to readers.
Writing Xianxia, this is an innovation!
Magic weapons, elixirs, formations, all kinds of magical spells, fierce beasts, beautiful fairies, immortal cultivators move mountains and reclaim the sea, catch the stars and the moon, and the long life span that can laugh at the vicissitudes of the sea, these are the attraction points of Xianxia to readers.
Especially for readers who have never read Xianxia, the attraction of Xianxia to them is basically inexplicable.
In the book, Long Aotian has many adventures, and obtains the ancient immortal Dao supreme exercise "Water Emperor True Scripture", his natural water-based physique, let him practice this immortal recipe smoothly, and even have a god preaching in a dream to guide him.
But this qiē is different from the treatment of ordinary people, and it is all hinting at the existence of the real protagonist Shui Xiaobai, and these foreshadowings do not make the later changes seem abrupt.
At the beginning, the reader's perspective is on Long Aotian's body, through the experience of Long Aotian, to appreciate the scenery of the Xianxia world, the framework structure in front of it, in the setting, borrowed from the constantly appearing copies in the legend of mortal cultivation of immortals, the constantly changing map.
Although these things contain online game elements, they can also allow Shui Xiaobai to let him get the things he wants to give Long Aotian, which increases Long Aotian's deliberateness in getting a lot of adventures.
Writing like this is unreasonable in the eyes of some readers who pursue rigor, but the novels written by authors in this era, whether wonderful or not, are logically ranked first, and it is impossible for such obvious irrationality.
Even, when Nian Xiaobai wrote "The Emperor of Water", he didn't have to decipher at the last minute that Long Aotian was not the real protagonist, he was just a chess piece, and readers would have some guesses about it.
And because the ultimate purpose of the whole work is to set off Shui Xiaobai's resourcefulness, he has no last resort and strong strength. Therefore, in some narrative techniques and backgrounds, Nian Xiaobai borrowed some concepts and writing methods from Chendong Shatian.
What you see and hear through Guò Long Aotian fully shows the advanced stage of the immortal cultivator, what power, saint, great sage, immortal, these advanced concepts are constantly instilled with gorgeous words, forming a kind of immortal cultivator to the later stage is very powerful, very lofty. With mortals is already two levels of feeling.
Then, Long Aotian, who can surpass these powers, saints, great saints, and immortals, is naturally the most awesome Cunzài, and in the end, he can kill such an awesome Long Aotian, and even turn him around. That's definitely the more powerful storage zài.
Readers are all substituted into Long Aotian in the early stage, relieved as he grows, nervous as he encounters enemies, and happy as he gains. If Nian Xiaobai suddenly wrote Long Aotian's qiē in order to make a wedding dress for Shui Xiaobai, the horn of Allah, then the reader would definitely not be able to accept it emotionally.
Therefore, when it transitions from Long Aotian's perspective to Shui Xiaobai's perspective, it is the most critical time for the whole book, if this stage is scrapped. Then all the previous text will become garbage, and the reader will definitely spray Nian Xiaobai, which will not change because he is a demigod author.
These come from the reader's resentment. As long as they don't have personal attacks, Nian Xiaobai can only suffer, who told him to die himself.
But on the contrary, if Nian Xiaobai writes well when he transitions his perspective from Long Aotian to Shui Xiaobai, then readers will not only not scold, but will praise it.
Because when readers look at the whole story from Shui Xiaobai's perspective, they will find that Long Aotian's qiē is so ridiculous, and his efforts will eventually become other people's wedding dresses, and they will be more able to appreciate how terrible Shui Xiaobai's calculations are, so that they will have a sense of intellectual superiority over Long Aotian.
And this feeling happens to be what everyone likes, stems from human nature, people like people who have strong force and resourcefulness, and when they can't do it themselves, they will worship some real existence, or virtual similar images to satisfy their own desires.
If Nian Xiaobai's "The Emperor of Water" is finished, and the perspective is changed from Long Aotian to Shui Xiaobai, this plot is not written, then it is destined to be read twice, the first time to substitute into Long Aotian's perspective, and appreciate the growth experience of a winner in life once.
The second time is to look at it with a reading mentality that analyzes Shui Xiaobai's layout, to experience the means of Shui Xiaobai, a terrible character who has no last resort, and at the same time to experience the superiority of IQ in Long Aotian.
Of course, this is only the most ideal situation, and the most likely situation is that after Nian Xiaobai wrote this, those diehards of Long Aotian and Shui Xiaobai's diehards had a fierce tear because of the plot discussion.
For example, the Aotian Party despises the little white character, such as the little white party's poor dragon Aotian has been manipulated all his life......
Readers in this era have been abused by various toxic plots created by the authors because of their pursuit of literature, such as the heroine being arched by the dragon, such as the heroine being killed by the villain, such as a female character who readers really want to be with the protagonist, and finally gave the villain ......
After experiencing so much poison, readers are very strong, because the author is in an absolutely strong position, and it is impossible to change because of the readers' protests, and many readers are inseparable from the author, so they have to maintain a love-hate attitude towards the author.
Because the readers of this era are not as fragile as the readers faced by Nian Xiaobai in his previous life, as long as a work is well written and can resonate with them on the whole, they can accept all kinds of highly toxic plots, at most they don't read it a second time, but the author has released a new book, and what should be supported is still supported.
In contrast, the "Emperor of Water" written by Nian Xiaobai is not poisonous, but compared with the online articles he wrote before, this kind of writing may make some readers feel uncomfortable when reading it.
But this time Nian Xiaobai is going to write willfully, the character he wants to create is Shui Xiaobai, a changeable, and unsparing Boos-type character, such a character is destined to not be able to keep the story perspective on him.
It is impossible for a person without a sense of mystery to give others the image of exhaustive and resourceful thinking.
Especially the characters written in words, without factual support, it is easy to give people the feeling that this character is very ordinary, and the reason why he seems to have a high IQ is only because of the author's deliberate setting.
Now Nian Xiaobai's way of writing is to use Long Aotian's life as a kind of evidence of Shui Xiaobai's high IQ.
ps,Chapter 2,Today's two more,I'll continue to write down the outline of this plot.。 (To be continued......)