Chapter XII

In the book "Broken Void", Nian Xiaobai follows the hierarchy in Master Huang Yi's original work, acquired, congenital, grandmaster, great grandmaster, broken void.

Jiang Wandong's first-level peak combat power is probably equivalent to the strength of the peak of the day after tomorrow in Nian Xiaobaishu.

In the background setting of the story, Pang Ban and Lang Chuanyun are both peerless characters at the level of the great grandmaster, and Nian Xiaobai's description of the fight between the two draws on the descriptive skills of the authors of the gods of this era and the writing skills in the original work of "Broken Void", focusing on the combination of spiritual momentum and practical tricks.

Jiang Wandong, as a martial arts practitioner and author, may not be as good as Pang Ban and Lang Chuyun, and his writing is not as good as Nian Xiaobai, but his two talents are superimposed, but he can find some mistakes that Nian Xiaobai made when writing.

The fewer mistakes a spiritual book makes when it is written, the more powerful it will be after it is written, and at the same time, because of the high quality of the spiritual book, the more fans it can gain, so every author strives for as much excellence as possible when creating.

Jiang Wandong was still unhappy just now because he saw the wonderful part out of chapter, and at this time, Nian Xiaobai asked him to help see if there was any problem with the later chapters, this state is like an extremely hungry person who suddenly finds food.

Therefore, Jiang Wandong couldn't wait to agree, "Okay, I'll help you take a look, with my professional vision, I will definitely be able to point out the shortcomings in your article." ”

Taking the manuscript paper that recorded the contents of chapters 7 to 10 of "Broken Void", Jiang Wandong found a random place in the bedroom to sit down, and then devoted his attention to the content on the manuscript paper.

Nian Xiaobai carefully observed Jiang Wandong's expression at this time, seeing that he was sometimes amazed by the content of the fight, and sometimes frowned because of the content of the fight, a strange feeling quietly emerged in Nian Xiaobai's heart.

This kind of love is very strange, and it is rarely felt in the life experience of Nian Xiaobai and his two lives.

This kind of feeling seems to be a combination and sublimation of relief and pride, and if you use a specific adjective to describe this feeling, then it is a sense of achievement!

A kind of spiritual pleasure that arises because of one's hard work being recognized by others.

Chapters 7 to 10 of "Shattered Void" only have a total of 9,000 words, but Jiang Wandong read it for half an hour.

When he watched it for the first time, his attention was all attracted by the wonderful confrontation between the two peerless powerhouses.

When he read it for the second time, he only paid attention to the brilliance of Nian Xiaobai's text.

And the third time I watched it, Jiang Wandong officially began to look for the loopholes in this text.

After reading it, Jiang Wandong put down the manuscript paper in his hand, thought for a while, and then slowly spoke: "Xiaobai, first of all, I agree with the novelty and writing in your text, it turns out that after the spirit of martial arts is sublimated, it can actually be strong to this level!"

Then let's talk about the shortcomings in this text.

Maybe it's because you're not a martial arts person, so there are a lot of mistakes in the specific moves of the characters in the book, such as Pang Ban's slap with one palm, which blows the air and brings a series of explosions.

This is impossible, people who practice martial arts pay attention to the control of their own strength, take myself as an example, punch out with all my strength, break through the air without making a sound, because the air blocking the path of my fist has become one of my helpers.

And here, the waves are rolling ......"

As Jiang Wandong explained one by one, Nian Xiaobai felt as if he had entered another world, and after Jiang Wandong finished speaking, Nian Xiaobai was looking at the words that he was very satisfied with just now, and suddenly had an unsightly feeling.

"It seems that I need to buy a set of martial arts theory outlines to study it." Nian Xiaobai said, and without hesitation, he threw the manuscript of chapters 7 to 10 that he had just written into the household garbage disposer and turned it into ashes.

Jiang Wandong shrugged his shoulders and said with a smile: "I'll buy a copy of the General Outline of the Nine Yin True Scripture and take a look, I believe that this secret book, which is known as the General Outline of the World's Martial Arts, can bring you some help." ”

"Okay, I'll study it first, it's not too early now, you go to sleep first, you don't need me to lead the way for you, right?" Nian Xiaobai nodded and said.

"Of course, it's not the first time I've come to your house!" Jiang Wandong snorted, turned around and walked out of Nian Xiaobai's bedroom, and walked towards the next guest room.

After entering the guest room, Jiang Wandong did not sleep, but sat cross-legged on the bed, and began to think about some of the insights he gained from listening to Su Shu's lecture today, as well as the perception of fighting innovation from watching Nian Xiaobai just now, trying to integrate these things and become his own things.

Nian Xiaobai has always been one of Jin Yong's passer-by fans, and most of his works have been subscribed, so he has accumulated a lot of fan value over the years.

Before Nian Xiaobai awakened the memories of his previous life, his plan was to become an official author before the age of twenty-five.

Just use this fan value accumulated over the years plus your own faithful beliefs, and exchange it for a Northern Shengong specialization and a Dugu Nine Sword specialization, these two martial arts specializations can add up to provide Nian Xiaobai with third-level combat power.

And now, Nian Xiaobai has become an official author, and it is impossible to offer faith to other authors, and the use of these three million fans is not as great as it used to be, and it is just right to use it now.

Open the martial arts category in the personal mall, and there are all kinds of magic cheats that make people fascinated by the name at a glance from top to bottom.

Northern Shengong lv12, one trillion fans plus Holy Spirit level faith are required to redeem huàn, and the current quota is zero.

Eight Desolations and Liuhe Solitary Honor Lv12, one trillion fans plus Holy Spirit level faith are required to redeem huàn, and the quota for huàn is 1, and the current quota is zero.

Dugu Nine Swords

Jiuyang Shengong

Tai Chi swordsmanship

Zixia Miracle

Innate power

……

Each cheat is clearly marked with a price, and if a person has enough fan value and piety, then when redeeming huàn cheats, you can directly get the corresponding combat power.

And passers-by who are like Nian Xiaobai, who are ordinary level believers, can only use huàn cheats to cultivate by themselves.

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