Ahem, I'm surprised to be able to write about it so far. There is some inexplicable sense of vicissitudes... Let's talk about this novel.

Let me tell you quietly, in fact, this pit I opened when I was young and ignorant (I wrote more than 30 chapters at that time, and later deleted it), and I didn't fill it in for three years. And then...... I was fortunate enough to think about it this summer, so I rewrote it with a handful of snot and tears.

But! It's good to be able to finish it. So what do we talk about? Let me think a little bit about myself...... emm, problem? (Yes, I'm going to finish all the grooves that exist in the novel, so that you have nothing to spit haha, please believe in the author's demonic attributes.) In fact, this is also a self-reflection??? ）

So, let's get started.

The first point: about the character design.

Actually, I'm really not distracted. Would I say that I don't even have an outline, a character and anything like that? It's been a long time, and I've almost forgotten the first plot of my life... In addition, I planned to finish writing it in the summer vacation, so I was in a hurry, and some details were not processed, anyway, I just wrote it where I thought of it (some of the later plots were also written when I thought of it)...... The ability to shape characters is also weaker. will cause the feeling that the protagonist's behavior does not match the character.

This was my mistake, apologies (bow).

The second point: about writing.

emmm…… Some of my primary school students' writing is really contemptible, and their knowledge is shallow, and their experience is still shallow, so that some places are not properly connected, and some places are inappropriate in words, and so on.

The main thing is that I read it after I finished writing, and only! Hair! Appear! I repeat a lot of words. How to break the word poverty...... Like what, ah, ah, over there...... There are also those who describe weak feelings in the later stage, almost all of them have a cold word???

However, there are some places where I also carefully check the Internet for relevant information, such as how long the moth lived... I also picked a long ...... What's more, writing isn't something that comes from training? I believe that if I read more books, learn more, and practice more, I can get better and better (is this a mouthful of chicken soup 233).

The third point: about emotional processing.

I also have a lot of questions about this, mainly where is the turning point more blunt? I think that's how they like it? Why did you suddenly have a heart-to-heart? That! True! It has to do with my writing. This has to mention my current personality.

When I rewrote this, I originally wanted to create a cold and rational male protagonist, but as a result... Gone forever, as if my writing could have plastic surgery, he instantly became a loyal dog of a heroine??? Okay, then I'll change the character again. I also determined the image of respecting the elders, having faith in my heart, and protecting the heroine for some reason. It is also because of the need to protect that emotions arise......

But! Be! It's still too blunt, I didn't even have any life and death and help each other in the same boat, and it ended directly. emmm… Blame me.

Then I want to mention my daughter's personality, which is a bit difficult to explain. Actually, I'm a real mother, really. You can also see it from the content of the novel (believe me).

What about her? In fact, I haven't changed my personality all along! What kind of person do you think she is? My original intention was to create a girl who studied hard and made progress every day, and the result was ...... I feel like this ooc should not be wanted. Forget it, it's all a handful of bitter tears.

Let's talk about the emotional line of the male and female protagonists, I think that the female protagonist saw the strength of the male protagonist and worked hard, and regarded him as a chasing target. That's why I always think of him in my heart.

And the male protagonist is by the female protagonist's side all day long, and he still wants to help improve her strength, so he naturally has a good feeling. The heroine recalled some things at this time, and reality and dreams were entangled, making her unable to distinguish between truth and falsehood. This feeling is regarded by her as a liking.,And because of her awakening.,Because of her identity.,She'll be closer to the male protagonist.。 Is this also an illusion? emm, anyway, in the end, she didn't recognize it.

Then there were some twists and turns between her and the male protagonist.,The male protagonist was stabbed several times in front of her.,This stimulation,Natural dopamine secretion.。 And then I went through it a lot, and I had a mental breakdown. And only His Royal Highness was by her side, giving her a strength. So this emotion is getting deeper and deeper.

and the subsequent repudiation...... It's a bit like the heroine is anxious to find something to prove her identity (no identity is like losing the value of existence, which makes her very confused, even if it is still the same).

Guilt and self-blame, and because of the long-term relationship, it has evolved into the last good feeling, and desperate. That's about it?

And then the male protagonist, because he guessed the identity of the female protagonist, because he had been with him for many years, he was very happy to find it. And I went through a lot of things with her,...... That's what it looks like.

Result, result, QAQ, my writing is too spicy, so I didn't write this process well!

In fact, at the beginning, there was no love at all, and they were only together because of His Highness's responsibility. Hugs are also only due to the fact that they have lived for a long time, and the closeness has allowed them not to reject each other. Didn't awaken until the end...... Such an emotional line is still very exciting?? Ahem, let's not mention it for now.

The fourth point: about the plot of some supporting characters.

This is actually because I'm lazy, and I plan to finish this book in a summer vacation, but as a result, it only took me more than ten days (I really don't have time)...... Some plots have shrunk in a straight line. The plot lines of some supporting characters are not explained clearly at all, only slightly introduced, and the others are not clarified.

For example: What happened to Luo Beihuan and He Yuchen, and why was He Yuchen so reluctant to stay in the elf clan? What is that love tree, what will she do when Luo is sad and uncomfortable? The above is the story of Luo Beihuan and He Yuchen (I may write an extra story in the future and explain to them, after all, my daughter).

Then, another example is Fu Jingshen (my own son back then, I didn't want to write as a villain at first, but then the character collapsed...... What happened between him and Shen Qing? Shen Qing originally loved to learn, why did he go directly with Fu Jingshen? And then Fu was defeated and imprisoned, will Shen Qing go to see him? The above is the story of the Shen family and the Fu family.

And why do our roommates who have only appeared once want the flowers of the blood clan? In the end, it was given to Tang Sheng, but he gave it to his sister, what would he say? The above is the history of blood and tears of the Tang family.

and Shen Fuqing, this person is very incomprehensible??? Actually, this is my own son (crying QAQ), I personally like that kind of humble and polite gentleman, so I also want to write one. I didn't expect it to be the most powerful ...... So, what is Shen Fuqing thinking, what is his purpose, and why does he want to go to the divine realm? When and when was the deal made with Ye Lishuo, etc. The above is my own son's history of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

Also, the last one I want to mention, and the one I didn't deal with at the end. It's the key itself, she's intelligent, but she doesn't seem to care about anything. Why did you finally agree to let him come to see him after he was in prison? Please watch the key - an in-depth analysis of the heart of an innocent and cruel baby.

I have to mention again, in fact, I have a lot of foreshadowing and cookies...... If you look closely, you will find it! Again, please tap the sneer. Maybe, I'll write about it later......

Point 5: About my ...... after me

I probably won't be writing for a long time, which means I'll probably be out of touch for a long time... (Next time it's probably winter vacation??? And this is my first work? Although many places in it have not been done well, I am not careful......

The reason is that I want to settle myself! Maybe someday in the future, I will come out with a new work, and I can't guarantee anything, after all, there are many, many variables in the future. Instead of waiting, it's better to strike preemptively (wait what I'm talking about?!). ）。

But at least, in the next article, I will take the lead in writing the outline, try to improve each person's design, try my best to write everyone's story, and make the whole article complete. How do you have a sense of immediacy in the form of a guarantee?!

Ahem, I won't give up on this one! I'll take the time to revise some of the things I'm not satisfied with in the future, maybe it will be much better then? It's not that in the end, the heroine will become a posthumous independent double standard white lotus (I personally don't mind the article Su, but the plot must be more sensible, hey, but my plot seems to be a little irrational...... ）。

In the end, I still hope to be kind to me and my poor babies, and thank you little masters~

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