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When I finished writing this testimonial, I imagined a lot of feelings, sadness, frustration or relief.
Until the time I wrote, I was calm, and I was done when it was time to finish, and I was in no mood, thousands of books, and this one was not missing.
I started writing my testimonials on March 4th.
When I started thinking about finishing this testimonial, I had this intention a month ago.
Before I finish this testimonial, let me talk about the results of our book.
The book opened on August 5, 2016, and lasted more than 6 months and 1.5 million words to March 11, 2016.
Onmyoji has a total of 4.8 million hits. A total of 32,000 people have come to our genuine website to watch the secret record of the Onmyoji, and 13,000 people have chosen to chase the book, and half of the people have seen the genuine version.
The results of our book can only be said to be average in Heiyan, and it is not even as good as the results of a new book.
But this book is indeed the most serious and successful book I have written, for this book, I stayed up all night until almost all night, and the next morning I got up, sleepy, unable to concentrate on work, and gritted my teeth to persevere. For the sake of this book, I
How many times have I been so tired that my head is dizzy, I have nosebleeds for no reason, how many times have I not written the manuscript when the time is up, my hands are shaking in a hurry, how many times I have put myself in the shoes of the plot, I am frightened, or I have cried so much.
So, as a reader, you can say that I am slow in writing, but you must not say that I am not serious in writing.
I'll talk about the ending later.
"The Secret Record of Onmyoji" does not have a pivotal position in the Black Rock Network, which I am still self-aware of, it has not created an era, nor has it had any proud achievements.
The best result was the second place on the new book list during the new book period, and it was brushed down in two days, and the best sales were only the ninth place, and the rest were fixed between the names, and even many people were reluctant to click on it when they saw such a Lo name.
A lot of people praise me, and a lot of people scold me.
I gained not only recognition and success, but also gradually learned a lot of things, some things that I didn't know before.
And this book has changed my destiny and lifestyle, and it is not an exaggeration to say that a book changes a person's destiny.
It's not just about income, it's about vision.
Of all I got, the only thing I'm most grateful for, is Black Rock.
Some people say that what you are most grateful for should be the readers, the readers are your food and clothing, and without the readers you will have no income.
In fact, if there is no website, no matter how good the book is, it can only be buried, including ours, without the website, readers can't see the current book at all.
I can see clearly who has put in the effort of our book.
During the writing of this book, I saw too many readers leaving and staying, in my opinion, readers are guests, my book is a meal, the food is well done, many people praise, it is tasteless, so I slap my ass and leave, and I don't forget to scold the boss for being a bad pen.
There are not many people who have really turned me from guests to friends, that is, die-hard fans, in addition to the common management and readers in the readership, there are also some people who often sign in in the early and middle periods, but here, I also want to say thank you to all the people who have subscribed to our books, thank you to all the people who have read our books and maintained our books.
At the very beginning, I said that the success of a book is not enough for me to work hard alone, the author and the reader are mutual, when the income of a book plummets, it means that it will be over, or finished, even if there are still hundreds of genuine readers who have been silently supporting, but the results represent everything, whether many people turn to see pirated copies or not, the book is indeed no achievement, and there is no motivation to write it again, not to mention much, and it is also a long-term torture and injury to their hardcore fans.
When I first started writing books, I didn't understand a lot of things, and I had to ask some of the predecessors of the website, and at that time I was always wondering why they finished with more than a million words, and I thought that everyone's books were getting better and better. It wasn't until I also experienced such a thing that I realized that my book had the same fate as theirs, even if I felt that my book could become more and more exciting in the later stage, and the scene became more and more grandiose, but more and more doubts and abuse made me more troubled in the difficult to control, and made me write weakly and boring in the long-term torment, and I had to finish the book ahead of schedule.
Many readers have asked me why I finished the book in such a hurry, which is not good at all.
Brother Bird admits that it's really not good, it's just an outline.
In fact, if this book is to be written, it can be written for another 3 million words, but it must be finished here, I don't even want to write an extra chapter, and I don't want to write it. ”
Now I can say to some of you who have read my 1.5 million word book, as you wish.
When I wrote 100,000 words, some people said I couldn't write, and I ended up writing 500,000 words, and more people said I couldn't write anymore, and I wrote 1 million words, 1.5 million words, until it was overwhelming with negative comments, and I didn't think it was necessary to prove that I could write 2 million words, 3 million words, or 5 million words.
Basically, it can be said that the book was destroyed on the post bar that I built with my own hands.,As soon as the page of the post bar is opened.,You can see.,The people who speak inside.,It's basically all trolls.,Occasionally there's a defender of the author and.,After being scolded a few words, I didn't bother to say it again.。
At the beginning of the establishment of the sticker,Because of the improper use of people too much trust in others,There is no predecessor to remind,In the end, the main position of the bar was taken away.,Reduced to a place where trolls gathered.,The troll rate is so much that there's nothing to say.,I've seen too many trolls every time I finish writing a chapter.,Scold the plot.,Continue to watch after spraying.,What I don't understand is,People with a little backbone.,See a work that makes you so angry.,What else do you watch?
So this also taught me a lesson, and it's better to take many things into your own hands.
Later, think about it carefully.,The results of the Onmyoji Secret Record are so average.,How can it be so much more than other trolls gathered.,Think about it's actually a matter of type.,This one,It's the plot flow (1% author),Not the upgrade flow (99% author),Many times,Two people of the same level fight.,The result of victory and defeat is different from what the reader thinks.,The design of many plots,For the sake of novelty, it has to be unimaginable.,Otherwise, there's no point to watch.,This is the meaning of existence.。
There are also those who say that food is tasteless, all kinds of verbal attacks and curses on me, those who say that I am mentally retarded, whose writing is rotten, who say that I am looking for ghostwriters, who say that they are the worst in history, and who fake them to your grandmother's house, I don't understand what real abilities these people can have in addition to being a keyboard warrior and insulting others.
Including this testimonial I wrote, the trolls will also scold while reading it, saying how cheap the author is, just like the kind of person who scolds the actors in it while watching an A movie.
Reading a book that you don't like to read, a piece of garbage, and seeing 1.5 million words, how few books should there be in the world.
There are also people who say that I want to beat me to death if I write a film so rubbish, how and how I want to die, that I have a wrong outlook, that I am **silk, what kind of grief has I suffered, and the society is so unbearable.
First of all, the secret record of the onmyoji, is a step about friendship, family and love, mixed with a lot of things, I have to check a lot of information when I write, what do you see, maybe you are what kind of person, a slightly mature person will not hold the mobile phone all day long and complain about a finish
A person who doesn't know anything at all, complaining about something completely useless.
And as for the fact that I am **silk, I am indeed **silk.
I haven't been to a bar, I've never been to a nightclub, I've never dyed my yellow hair, I've never pretended to kill Matt, of course, I'm not attacking these people, I'm just saying that I'm a very ordinary person, sometimes a little pessimistic, sometimes not talkative.
I didn't say that I was rich and handsome, nor did I think about what my readers were, and I didn't understand what others were trying to prove by their scar-like momentum.
Readers who support us, there are boys and girls, mothers, single-parent families, office workers, micro-businessmen, sellers, comrades, Internet celebrities, but they haven't said that they are rich and handsome, and I have broken off, that is, I am simply unwell, have a headache, or am really depressed to the point that I can't come out, nothing else.
We are all ordinary people, I am too, I have my own temper, I have my own life, if you like me, I like you, you don't like me, you scolded me, do I still have to smile and say thank you?
For example, I grew up watching Xingye's movies, and watched all his movies, the recent mermaid, I don't understand such a good movie, why would someone scold it, and scold others for making pirated movies, some people will jump out and say, I went to the cinema to buy a movie ticket for 40 yuan, it is really not good-looking, the garbage is dead, and I will never watch his movie again next time.
Some people also say, is it worth spending money to watch the secret record of the Onmyoji, the garbage is dead, I don't read it when I see 1 million words, the more I read it, the more rubbish it becomes, I just want to know what will happen next. Compared to so-and-so's god, he's a fart. Ridiculous or not?
However, the words of many trolls are also true.
The truth is so true that you can't refute it.
For example, it is said on the news that Ma Yun has a supercar worth 10 million, and normal people are very envious when they see it, but the first comment below is, what is the comparison of loading, if you have money, you are a bird, no matter how good the car is, the truck will die.
Do you think this troll is telling the truth? Yes, the truth is so true that you can't refute it, and even the best sports car you drive will only die if you crash into a truck.
Later, someone invented a super off-road vehicle, this kind of car and train can't be damaged, let alone a truck, but after you open the comments, it says that no matter how good the car is, a missile will kill if it explodes.
Is it the truth? Also.
But the question is, why do sports cars collide with trucks?
Why did the Supercross get hit by a missile?
Onmyoji Secret Record, why do you want to compare it with the ghost blowing the lamp, why do you want to compare me with the third uncle of the Southern School?
Having said all this, I don't want to shirk anything, but the rush to the end is of course up to me.
I'm just just going to finish, on the one hand, to end the infamy of this book, let the trolls die far away, and on the other hand, I'm really tired of writing, and I feel that there is no need to write after five months of writing and watching the readers lose day by day, which hurts the readers who defend us, and it hurts me. Some people don't need to say anything cool, say that the author Jiang Lang is exhausted, or they can't make it up at all.
People in the world don't have the saying that Jiang Lang is talented, but their minds have changed at a certain time.
Some people who have never looked at the genuine version at all find my number in various ways at every turn, saying that the author has something to say to you, and what to say that I will not read your next book, as if announcing my great achievements to the whole world.
Okay, that's all for the reason for the end of this book, the first book with some results, it is inevitable that there is some resistance to negative things, and my readers don't have to speak for Brother Bird, so as not to attract innocent saliva, Brother Bird's strength can protect himself.
I won't say much about complaining, let's talk about the rest of the plot issues.
Onmyoji Secret Record Power Ranking. (Except Wang Yang)
First place: Wu Zhenren. Second place: Wang Daosheng. Third place: Zhang Dasheng. Fourth place: Yuan Menyin, fifth place, first generation Daozun, sixth place, Heavenly Emperor, seventh place, ghost Rulai, eighth place, Xiao Shusheng, ninth place, Shi Xiaoxue.
About the mystery of Wu Zhenren's life and death:
Wu Zhenren, the only person in the early and middle stages of this book who is close to an immortal, is the first in the world in Taoism, and he deserves it. His strength will always be the first in the Onmyoji Secret Record, and no one can surpass him. He is not only Wang Yang's master, but also everyone and I have hoped that we have since we were children
A master, whose character prototype is the Qing Dynasty monk Wu Qingyun, there is also the shadow of Shi Xuyun, the first person in modern Buddhism.
Wu Zhenren's master as the protagonist, a master outside the world, wrote him in the later stage and almost turned him into a jade figurine, all of which set off the suspense, and then I want to say that I am sorry that the master is indeed dead, and I don't plan to resurrect him. The battle of the jade figurines was not described, and writing it also caused the arrogance of the saliva army, which was thankless. Write it again to the sky, in the outline of the idea, the master may become the trump card jade figurine, the last killer, and the master of the old master, two generations of the master of the Taiyin view and Wang Yang to do it, but the master is one of the most perfect characters created by our onmyoji, so I won't make fun of his old man. I have a thought after reading Onmyoji to everyone.
Wang Daosheng:
Wang Daosheng, the king of soldiers, was targeted in the barracks on the first day of enlistment, and the entire barracks were knocked to the ground, and he only said one sentence, you only need to give me the task, let me kill or protect whom, and I don't need to know the rest.
Wang Daosheng is an absolute big figure throughout this book, he is Wang Yang's grandfather, and many readers have been excited, including myself.
A lot of times, when I write to a certain point, I naturally have that kind of picture in my head, and I'm just a narrator.
Wang Daosheng's ultimate state is that the Yin and Yang Orders are fully opened, half Yin and half Yang, but the battle immortals, I am really sorry that I didn't let everyone see the excitement of this scene.
Zhang Dasheng:
The secret record of the onmyoji is the most awesome onmyoji, has lived for six thousand years, and is an absolute big boss, in the original setting, he resurrected the jade figurines, slaughtered the human race, controlled Wu Zhenren, Lao Guan and a large number of masters and Wang Yang and others fought, Taoism was flying, earth-shattering, he almost could
Knowing everything, he is Wang Yang's number one enemy, and even at the end he did not die, because he would also reach the heavenly realm.
Yuan Menyin:
A man as powerful as a god, he was finally resurrected by his own woman, lost his memory, and many years later met Wang Yang's son, Wang Changsheng, who was the biggest main force when Wang Changsheng conquered the Sky City and fought Xiaobao, and died in order to save Wang Changsheng.
Ghost Rulai:
The prototype of its characters is in the Thunderbolt puppet play, and it is also the story of becoming a ghost, super powerful, and Wu Zhenren can fight for a long time, regardless of victory or defeat. Ghost Rulai, Emperor Rulai, two states, when this chapter was written, I received a lot of scolding me, what to say to scold the Buddha
It's not good to die or something, trolls can be so brainless, and I'm out of line.
Xiao Shusheng:
Xiao Shusheng, as the younger brother of the fat man Li Xiangyu, became a villain in the later period and destroyed the world, I believe some readers still remember that there is a chapter that mentions that after Wang Yang entered Longhu Mountain, he found that there was a sun totem in the forbidden land of Longhu Mountain, that's right, Xiao Shusheng's big trick is about
Sun. This technique is well-deserved, and it is as perverted as the technique of time reversal, refining the sun.
Refining the sun can shorten the distance between the sun and the earth, so that the sun can shine on the earth at close range, causing the destruction of the earth, because it involves modern times, you can only use the earth, otherwise it will be a Xuanmen plane such as the Five Elements Continent.
So Xiao Shusheng, a distressing child, is ridiculously powerful.
Shi Xiaoxue.
Demon King Shi Xiaoxue, in the original outline design, she was Wang Yang's only wife, and later Long Ke'er's inconvenience, she was also the eldest wife, Wang Changsheng was her and Wang Yang's child, disappeared in the world and the heavenly realm, and Wang Changsheng's story began to find his mother Shi Xiaoxue
。 Although Shi Xiaoxue is a cow, she does not have the power to destroy the world, and she is the absolute king alone.
Sister.
An incomparably mysterious character, and later gradually described her, everyone can see his beauty.
In the original design, my sister and Wujie were in a life-and-death relationship, Yu Hangliang became a god, killed her sister, Wujie died to save her sister, her sister was heartbroken, and she only ascended to heaven after many years.
The above is the ranking of the power of the characters that appeared, and below is the ranking of the hidden strength, which is the ranking of future abilities:
First place: Wang Yang, second place Li Qingshan, third place Liu Xiangfei, fourth place An Xiaowu, fifth place Dugu Yu, sixth place, Xiaobao, seventh place Miao Zhong, eighth place, Dasha.
Wang Yang:
Time stands still, magic sword, the power of aging over the years, divine sense attack, global teleportation, instant headshot without CD, the protagonist's power can be adjusted at any time, it's boring if it's too strong in the early stage, and it's not interesting to be a second immortal in the later stage, and a second Zhang Dasheng in the later stage, isn't it also interesting? It's grown too fast, and I'm so fast that I'm confused.
Li Qingshan
The military advisor of the underworld, the ruler of the six realms of reincarnation, the power of the fingers, the sky and the earth are cracked, three years of ghosts, three years of people, three years of demons, three years of immortals, three years of demons, and three years of gods, before they can be cultivated. Once cultivated, it will be invincible in the world.
Liu Xiangfei
As a schizophrenic person, in Kunlun Mountain back then, a class of people went in, and only he came out, in fact, the person who came out was not Liu Xiangfei.
It's Liu Xiangfei's good side and evil side, and the real ontology is dead.
It is a kind of Taoist divine art, which can be split into the same person as the ontology, and in the later stage, it is an absolutely invincible thing, infinitely devoured, in the heavenly realm, he will become a great emperor, the strongest person in the universe, and the strongest one like the empress, that is, the one who released the black paper boat, Wu Zetian in the heavenly realm, that is, the empress who splits the sky.
An Xiaowu
After ascending to the heavenly realm, An Xiaowu is the most rebellious person among the protagonists, because every team has a fat man, and the original design of Li Xiangyu's death was because he occupied Xiaowu's position, the aura was too dazzling, Li Xiangyu had to die, and I was also very sad when he died, after all, he was a plump character in the spiritual world.
Dugu Rain
As Wang Yang's big apprentice, in addition to his divine sense, he is almost a combined version of Wang Yang and Zhang Dasheng, who can know the past and the future, and is almost invincible in the later period.
Xiaobao
It was when he was writing, in order to increase Liu Xiangfei's role, a character suddenly appeared, he was later caught on Death Island, 10,000 children brutal competition, only one person can survive, and Xiaobao is very young, he can't fight, but he is the only one who survives in the end, in order to take revenge, and to realize his brother's wish back then, he single-handedly established the steel city of the future world, a huge steel continent floating above the earth to block sunlight, called the dream world. His upbringing was cruel and bloody.
Miao Zhong
As mentioned in a single chapter before, three hundred and sixty-five swords, practiced into one sword, is a sword trick, one sword slashes a hundred people, this is a sword trick inspired by the sword skills of the sword god Ximen Chuixue. The Emei faction will be destroyed by mysterious people in the future world, and the purple and green swords are the swords of the future Wang Changsheng and his little girlfriend.
Dasha's son and Dasha.
Here, I would like to introduce the whereabouts of Dasha Dragon after its transformation.
In the Battle of the Pure Land, Dasha disappeared with the pregnant Bai Rong in his arms, Bai Rong died, but was stabbed in the chest, Dasha has the qi of a true dragon in his body, even stronger than Wang Yang, so his child's vitality is extremely strong, and Bai Rong's life was saved.
Bai Rong was sent into the Snow Mountain Ice Palace by Dasha, and his child was born a year later, but Bai Rong did not wake up, Wang Yang flew to the heavenly realm ten years after the opening of the Yunhai Heavenly Palace, and Dasha led his ten-year-old son to appear in the rivers and lakes, and he had no defeat in his life, and finally went to the heavenly realm.
And Bai Rong suddenly woke up from her sleep one day, and after hard work, she also ascended to the heavenly realm to reunite with Dasha.
Summary: The first-person and third-person mixed perspectives, plus the pure plot, the development of multiple main lines without tasks, it's troublesome to watch, let alone written.
Explanations of other pits and memes:
The black paper boat, this is a ship released by the empress, it says that there is only me, it is actually her distress signal, her personal strength is already the real first in the universe, and she was jointly suppressed by other rulers at the edge of the universe in the heavenly realm, and wanted to forcibly kill it with the power of the universe contraction, she was waiting for a son of the sky to save her, and released her own distress signal on many planets. Wang Yang was one of the people chosen. Just the setting of this character can extend the number of words indefinitely.
Dao Tian Ruler, Wu Zhenren said, Dao Zun Ling is a symbol of Daomen, in fact, it does not have much effect, he is the condensation of the soul of the first generation of Dao Zun, which can ensure that people live a long life and are not affected by any negative state, and Dao Tianqi is the real Daomen holy relic. After Wang Yang arrived in the heavenly realm, the Dao Tianqi is a BUG-level artifact, it is the treasure in Lang Huan, the real place where the Emperor of Heaven collects books, and a certain generation of Taoist Tianzun stole something from the Emperor Lang Huan, in the world, he is the first artifact It is no exaggeration.
Yu Xuanliang, it began to come out at the beginning of the plot of Wangjiacun, the design of this character, both good and evil, and finally when he woke up, he had a special function, genetic mutation, no need to practice Taoism, no need to recite formulas, completely alien, because many articles can reflect the changes in his person, so he finished the book in a hurry, and didn't mention this character much. Including Bai Haisleeve beside him, he is a doctor, a conspirator, and a hidden supreme man.
Snow Ape, the Lord of Changbai Mountain, in the battle of the Jade Warriors, the Snow Ape vs. the Ancient Daozun level Jade Warriors should also be exciting, but he will definitely die, only if he dies, Song Gang can get the ability of the third eye, our story allows Wang Yang's mutation to solve everything, so that the Snow Ape will not die according to the plot I designed, for readers who like him, it is also a kind of luck.
Like many readers, my favorite characters in the book are Sugar Wa'er and Chen Shisan, I've always said, I'm the author, and I'm also a reader, the only difference is that I don't read my own work to know what the whole story is like, even then I have a sense of expectation, some places are not written satisfactorily, and sometimes I can't think of the new plot It seems that the plot has some water, I also know, the high-intensity dense ** stacking, I can't control it for a long time, but it's not to the point where I can't read it, and the general plot direction is like this.
Again, I apologize to all the readers who love and hate it, and I am deeply ashamed that Brother Bird has not been able to fully unfold a virtual grand world.
At the same time, I would like to thank all the people who have made efforts to our book on the Black Rock Network, thank the Black Rock Network for cultivating and supporting me, thank my editors for the three thousand, and thank you for letting me come to the Great Gods of Black Rock and Maitreya.
After writing this testimonial, I wrote it for more than ten hours, and I wanted to talk about myself, but forget it, so as not to fall into the mouth.
All the readers who support me
Thank you, Stuffy Oil Bottle, Dandan, Huai Zai, Xu Zherui, Fanfan, Shaoshao, as a readership management, you are the most ironclad group of people, and you are a little better for the readers who support Brother Bird。。。。。。
Everyone is also responsible for entering the group, they are all young people, this book is over, I am really happy to know you, thank you for your support.
In addition, SpongeBob SquarePants, low-key old man, the third, spontaneous combustion, Ouyang Ni, Jin Zhu, Lotus Qingqing, private custom cigarette shop,., Supreme Yangyang, and so on There are many familiar faces, thank you for not giving up on Brother Bird.
The next book is still open in Black Rock, next month, I will take a break for a while to adjust myself, my body has collapsed a little, and I will open a new book in a few days.
The subject matter of the new book is uncertain, and it is all in the first person. If you are suspenseful, it will turn to fantasy, but the background will not be designed so big, and the school part will be removed, and the style will not try to change. If you are urban, you will start from school, and there will be no Bai Fumei, stupid Bai Tian and Mary Sue.
If nothing else, the next one may be about an orphan's story, adapted from some things that I have personally experienced, this time, it is still the plot flow, there are joys and sorrows, which will move you to cry, and be so cruel that you doubt the world.
In addition, please write a sentence to commemorate the completion of the book, I opened the book review area. Write a sentence that is the most memorable favorite in the book, write a sentence that you want to say, and what type of book you want to read, Brother Bird will consider the thoughts of old readers and adjust the direction of new books in the future.
As for those who come with an angry mentality, you go, I don't force you to stay, you come, you are still friends. I have said everything that should be said, and I will say everything I don't understand.
Let me start with something I like: you are facing an unknown world, and you don't know how many people are working day and night, waiting for the future to come one day.
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