With the knocking of the last word of the first volume on the night of June, this represents the first volume, and the "Hundred Battles of the Brave" has come to an end.

First of all, I want to congratulate myself on the author who hit the street, although I have stumbled along the way, and the results are ugly, but I finally finished the first volume of this book "Hundred Battles of the Brave" in more than three months, there are no eunuchs, and there is no self-abandonment, so I still have to sprinkle flowers and celebrate.

In this first chapter, there are actually many, many situations that are completely inconsistent with the original setting, resulting in constant revisions and reversals in the middle, and if you look back, you will see that some places are not so smooth, nor are they so reasonable, and they are more or less regretful.

Originally, the first article mainly wanted to tell the story of the growth of the "Demon King's Brave" Feather Wind.,Mainly while cultivating Feather Wind.,While gradually rolling out some settings.,So that readers can understand what kind of world this is.,Introduce some characters and organizations along the way.,And then this part of the matter is over.。

But it is written, but it makes the endogenous things of "Jiehai City" more complicated, but this is not actually the original intention, the original "Competition" chapter is really simple in the setting, there are not so many moths, and the "King" champion is actually Lighthard....... Well, at first, I wanted to set him up as a "Satan"-like character, although he didn't have any skills, but he gradually mixed up to the champion position with shit luck.

Ben Xiong has always believed that the characters written by humans have souls, and sure enough, the "souls" of the characters in this book still look quite strong, and unconsciously, all kinds of demons and monsters have run out, in fact, I didn't plan to write so many characters at all, but it was very natural to change it to a conspiracy plot dominated by Andre, so as to lead to the "Feather Dragon God" and Zorro, The power of the kingdom of God to which Tehasa belongs, so it dragged on a little unconsciously, resulting in a somewhat anticlimactic follow-up, which can be regarded as self-inflicted......

When Yu Feng and his party left the "Boundary Sea City", the plot of this chapter has also come to an end, and then it will enter the second part of the "Eden God Kingdom Chapter", which will return to the situation from the perspective of Lion, and this is also the most complex one in the three volumes of the book.

Most of the foreshadowing that was buried before will be recycled in this chapter.,The real heroine will also appear.,The protagonist will also encounter many enemies stronger than himself.,And begin to find a way to improve your strength.,Basically, it's much more satisfying than the "Brave Hundred Battles Chapter".

Now if you look back at the "Hundred Battles of the Brave",As the first volume,Ben Xiong thinks it's still very immature.,In the way of writing,In fact, it's not so much a web article.,It's more like a fantasy that pays tribute to "One Piece".,Why is "One Piece" mentioned here? This book doesn't seem to have anything to do with OP, right? Indeed, it's okay in itself, but in fact, there is a certain reference component in the creative technique.

In Ben Xiong's view, "One Piece" is most admired by Ben Xiong is the foreshadowing and the foreshadowing and recycling of the characters, when watching the OP, we will show that the foreshadowing of the OP is buried very deep, and it is also very long, and there are many characters and the span is extremely high, such as Wei Wei who appeared in the early Alabastan chapter, although she rarely appeared directly, but she continued to show her face in various places, and now she has appeared in the World Conference chapter, this kind of "making the best use of things" of the characters is relatively rare in online articles, or it is a very wasteful place.

In quite a lot of online texts, the supporting characters are almost packaged with the "map", for example, the protagonist met the supporting characters ABCD in map 1, and became friends, enemies or other relationships with them, but after leaving this map, so many supporting characters will hardly have any roles, and occasionally they have become a foil when they appear again, which has no effect on the plot promotion, and acts part-time as a background board for "Wow! Why did the protagonist become so strong!

But in view of the fact that the characters carefully portrayed by Ben Xiong will "manifest", Ben Xiong does not want to do this, so he deliberately imitates the creative technique of OP, and most of the characters who appear in the first volume will continue to appear in subsequent chapters, and serve as the key characters to promote the plot, so the new characters added in the second volume of "Eden God Kingdom Chapter" will be relatively limited, but will "use" the characters that have appeared or mentioned before to the end, including Hades, Luo Lan These "villains and braves" There will still be a lot of scenes in the second volume, which can be regarded as a kind of responsibility for one's own role.

Speaking of the situation that this book has been written to the present, it can basically be described in two words, "hitting the street", whether it is a collection or a subscription, it is very small, Ben Xiong has actually considered why this situation occurs, and in addition to the fact that the audience of "fantasy works" at the starting point is getting smaller and smaller, the biggest problem of this book is that "it is not cool when it should be cool", "it is not cool when it should not be cool", in general, it is "not cool" ,At this point, Ben Xiong has carried out a deep reflection.,I hope that the next work can catch more cool points.,Let you look happier.。

As an aside, the same period that Ben Xiong likes very much is actually the same eunuch.,It's just a mouthful of poisonous chicken soup.,When I saw these two works that ranked first and second in the same period as this work are eunuchs.,The results are not as good as one-tenth of the first two.,It's also thanks to several book friends who have been giving encouragement in the book review area.,Otherwise, it's estimated that this book would have been in the palace a long time ago.,Every time I see those book friends,,There will be a feeling of "not working hard and not being worthy of them". ....... Then I thought of the guilt that I might feel after the eunuch, and I couldn't get off this self-cutting knife.

Since you can't cut it, the follow-up story can only be written as well as possible, of course, although the story outline has been set a long time ago, but whether the next more and more complex plot can be written as smoothly as possible, it depends on the next state of the bear, and I hope you can support it a lot, even if it is a subscription, a book review, a recommendation, a monthly pass, for this bear is something that can increase the power of the code word.

So dear book friends, if there is a fate, let's see you in the second volume of "Eden God Kingdom Chapter", bow ~~~~~~~~~~

Beer Bear on 2o18-6-24-2:22

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