It's March 27, 2019, and when I knocked down the three big words "the whole book is finished" not long ago, it means that this work has finally ushered in an unsatisfactory and imperfect ending.

The whole book is more than 200,000 words, from February 28, 2018 to March 27 of the following year, it has been more than a year, during which there have been many minor repairs and major repairs, and even the outline has been demolished and rebuilt several times, and in the end, it was presented to you in this form, which is really a little sorry.

To be honest, if you are a regular reader who has been watching it from the beginning, you should be able to feel the strange feeling that the book began from about halfway through writing, that is, the plot of the previous and later texts actually has a rather huge sense of tearing, and it looks very strange.

For example, from the first volume of the "Hundred Battles of the Brave" to the second volume of the "Eden God Kingdom Chapter", it actually took a lot of pen and ink to describe many supporting characters, such as Yufeng, Hades, Luo Lan, Gu Xi, Yuno, Xia Noya and so on, but after the third volume of the "Origin of the Land Chapter", these characters were eliminated almost all at once, and it became a story of the male and female protagonists teaming up to brush the boss all the way through the customs, which is actually a very strange thing.

And if there are readers who remember the previous plot, it is not difficult to find that there are actually many, many foreshadowings in the first million words that have not been closed at all, such as Ludwig and Rahman, who don't know whether they are dead or not after becoming pseudo-gods at the end of the first volume, Wuming, who has no role after obtaining Sauron's body, and Gu Xi's "Feather Wind will bring" the ghost god "to destroy the Holy Capital" There are a large number of well-shaped characters who have not been used well, and there are many buried foreshadowings that have not been answered, but directly jump to the big scene where the protagonist faces the "ancient god army" in the later stage, which will cause the rhythm from the middle to the late stage to be quite chaotic.

In fact, Ben Xiong has always been very clear about these problems, and this is not a problem caused by a clerical error or not being conceived well, the reason for all this is actually very simple, that is, between the second volume of "Eden God Kingdom Chapter" and the third volume "Origin Land Chapter", there is also a whole chapter that has been conceived "The Gathering of the Holy Kings" has been cut down.

That's right, a big chapter with about one million words, was cut down directly, so it caused a sense of tearing in the later context, especially the "Holy King Gathering" or the first two chapters "Brave Hundred Battles" and "Eden God Kingdom Chapter" paved a lot of follow-up chapters, such a large volume will naturally have a great impact on the perception after being removed.

In the originally planned "Gathering of the Holy Kings", it is mainly about the ownership of a hundred brave men, Lyon and Aurora were originally supposed to be unlucky together under Lovecraft's turmoil before the arrival of this chapter, and then the two of them lost their strength at the same time and fell into a ten-year slumber, when they woke up, the world had become a world dominated by the ten strongest warriors of our time, and the demons had almost completely dived underground to carry out activities, and most of the demons were killed, and the scene was very miserable.

The ten heroes who command the world include Yufeng, Yuno, Luo Lan, Hades and other characters who have done a lot of foreshadowing in the first and second volumes, each of them got a primordial holy weapon and attacked each other, so that the world fell into a never-ending war, at this time, Rion and Aurora, who had lost their power, needed to gather the remnants of the crowd and destroy these ten brave kings who had lost themselves in the war, and finally a hundred "God's protection" Focusing on Yuno's body, Rion and Aurora only led to the subsequent "Xiagai Zerg" and the three "Origin Gods" after killing him........

In this chapter, all the foreshadowing that was planted before will be recycled, and then enter the final Origin Origin chapter in a relatively smooth way, so that it will definitely look much better than it is now, and it will not make people feel "Hey, aren't these characters very active in the early stage, where did they go later?, did the firewood burn?".

Yes, if it was according to the original plan, this book should have ended with more than three million words, but unfortunately, there was no way to write it down so leisurely later, perhaps because of the relationship that was written too badly in the early stage, and there were very few subscriptions after it was put on the shelves, and I could only live on subsistence every month, anyway, the situation was hundreds of times worse than I imagined.

If you look at the general situation, if you have a very low subscription after this kind of shelf, you generally have to consider cutting the book and reopening it, and indeed this bear has been thinking about simply reopening a eunuch for a long time, summarizing the previous mistakes, and doing a good job of being a bear in the future........ But whenever I think that this story is not over, even if only one reader is chasing, I have to give people an ending as an explanation, so I rushed to the end of today's two million words, to be honest, it was really a difficult and tangled experience.

Next,Ben Xiong should continue to write another new story.,It should be an urban classification.,I hope to find a hot point of the partition to pull more readers or something.,But anyway, thank you for seeing all of you here.,In the next Ben Xiong will prepare to open a new book.,While making a major revision of this book.,And then make a "collection of various stalks used in the whole book" and "The story of the four heroines", etc.,But because the latter is not good, it is easy to be 404 relations,This is still a dangerous job. ....... Well, anyway, if there's a fate, let's see you in the next story (● ̄(エ) ̄●).

Beer Bear – on March 27, 2019

w。 4m.