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Seven months to finish a volume, barely making much impact, maybe newcomers like that. To be honest, the sun feels very tired, not mentally, but just on the fingers.

The sun will not retreat, the sun has no way back, nowhere to hide, except to write books, there is nothing to love......

The first volume is over, but the story has just begun......

In fact, the sun didn't really want to write the first volume, the sun always wanted to write the second volume and the rest of the story, the first volume, it's a super long beginning, after all, it's the first time to write a book, in fact, I don't understand anything, the decision at the beginning is just an impulse. But in any case, since a volume has been completed, then I have to review myself and summarize something.

In fact, since the sun wrote the chapter where Silver Dust was whipped, the abuse has not stopped, and it can really be described as a tide of bad reviews. Many readers think that the sun is too dark, and the silver dust is too wasteful, obviously they are all magicians, what does it mean to be a slave?

For these readers, the sun just wants to say, you guys are so good, you actually read books and write book reviews!

How many newcomers have TJ, and the book review section is empty?

Of course, more readers in the book review area are either urging or liking, and these readers are the power source that supports the sun to write.

For the problem of waste wood and slavery in the early stage of silver dust, the sun doesn't want to explain more, and the sun has only one explanation, that is:

Don't keep staring at the fact that Yinchen is more powerful than the hotel owner, Yinchen wants to defeat, but a whole world, a man who is the enemy of the world, can he do it without a little hardship?

Those humiliating experiences are all his anger, but after experiencing too much, his anger is hidden in the bottom of his heart, so that the outburst can last and be interesting.

The sun might as well reveal one thing here, that is, the book actually has three outlines.

The first two outlines are the white class and the black class. Bai Gang is the invincible beginning, the stallion process, the protagonist of Long Aotian, the bright ending, the black gang is the beginning of depression, the bloody abuse process, the pseudo-waste wood protagonist, but it is a dark ending that transcends everything. From the very beginning, the sun was written according to the black gang, because of the white gang, there is no plot conflict, all day long, it's either a little fresh or chicken soup, or it is stepping on the enemy, and there is no character portrayal, silver dust is a fireball launcher, and when you encounter an enemy, you launch a fireball, and then the enemy dies, it's as simple as that, overall, it's boring.

Relatively speaking, the plot of Hei Gang fluctuates greatly, up and down, but not long after uploading the plot of Silver Dust's whip, the author was threatened by a book friend to send bullets, and had to stop updating Black Gang and write Bai Gang instead, which also had a peaceful time after Silver Dust in the Demon Pavilion, but the sun knew very well that if it went on like this, this book would not go anywhere for three hundred chapters.

So while updating the White Gang, the sun urgently mobilized all the resources in his hand to concoct a new Red Gang, which is everything from the secret realm to the present. This outline combines the black and white outlines, and fills in a lot of content, so the plot is very large and challenging, and more importantly, this outline is no longer the original "write a story about a mage bullying a warrior" as the goal of a simple entertainment outline, but has a deeper outline of a certain idea or image that the sun wants to express.

Therefore, the secret realm is just a foreshadowing, and the real story unfolds after chapter 360.

That's the first question of the book.

The second question is Yinchen's age and appearance. In fact, it's mainly Yinchen's age, an eleven-year-old boy, and some people have vomited bad about this setting. So the sun decided to let Yinchen grow up, but then again, because he took care of Yinchen's sister, and it seems that the phenomenon of "early marriage" in feudal society is very serious, so the sun has not dared to directly let Yinchen become an adult, after all, his sister-in-law has appeared in the secret realm, and in terms of age, there is very little room for maneuver, so the sun will not write a 20-year-old Yinchen, but Yinchen's mental age and style must have become an adult, probably a person in his 20s, and in extreme cases, he is more sophisticated than many adults.

The sun doesn't plan to change his appearance, handsome is handsome, after all, the powerful mage with silver hair and silver eyes is the dream of the sun, for the sake of dreams, allow the sun to be willful, not to mention that in the current novel, handsome is not a shortcoming......

Of course, the consequence of this is that Yinchen will face many beauties in the future, but he doesn't dare to really accept them all.

The third problem, of course, is the various magic skills in this book, and the sun admits that this setting was not particularly perfect at the beginning, and some of the patches added later conflicted with the previous ones, so it looks a little messy. The sun is already planning to learn a lesson, through the changes in the sky, through the five books, through the last chapter of the first volume, the sun decided that the future magic skills are unified with the wind attribute, but the power of the wind has many forms, hot, cold, corrosive, chaotic, etc., etc., etc., will also be very rich, and then wind and fire, wind and water conflict with each other, fighting, it is also quite beautiful.

By the way, the sun hates the almighty protagonist, Long Aotian or something, it feels like writing a *** novel, unreal, not approachable, too perfect ability, people feel that the protagonist has no characteristics, and it is easy to stall and easy to lose shape.

The third problem,Actually, it's the magic of the protagonist.,Actually, this is the easiest place to mess up in this book.,There are a lot of patches.,There are also some inconsistencies.。 Attentive readers will notice that at first Silver Dust had a lot of magic, almost anything, but the more it went, the less magic it became. This problem, the sun has been thinking about it for a week, and finally decided, like dealing with the magic in the book, to really sort out a clue, with the least magic, to do the most things, in fact, the sun reduces magic, modifies magic, and wrote a lot of supplementary explanations of the same thing, just want to make the magic of silver dust less and refined, every move, can leave a deep impression on the reader, this, the sun intends to think about it very carefully, it will be settled, no longer changed (upgrades are not counted), and the silver dust in the future, it will also rely on these magic to mess with the world。 This will be improved in the future.

The last problem is the strength of Silver Dust, that is, the problem of "invincibility". Sun has also read a lot of novels, and most of the protagonists in them have an invincible aura, and there are three types of invincibility aura. The first is lucky and invincible, always able to be rescued on the line of life and death, either the enemy drops the chain or the friendly army rushes to help, in short, all kinds of luck are rescued, the second is the cockroach is invincible, that is, no matter how you kill it, you can't die, obviously there is only a wisp of remnant soul left, and you can survive for a long time. The third is the invincible body, which is the most in the Xianxia category, and the ghost king sect is like refining Chen Gang, Xuanyuan Sword is cut without breaking the skin, and the hydrogen bomb explodes in the arms without hair, in short, all kinds of anti-sky, such a protagonist is best written, anyway, the body is good enough, it's okay to be slashed a few more times, just play hand-to-hand combat with the enemy, it's cool, but a mage has such physical fitness, it seems unreasonable, right? Are you sure it's not a paladin wearing a robe?

Therefore, the "invincibility" of Silver Dust in the future is manifested in his prophetic foresight, in his infallibility, in his agility and powerful spells, the mage is still a mage, and if he is hit by others, it is not a matter of how serious the injury is, but a matter of directly dying. Therefore, there will be more excitement in the future, and the silver dust in the future will not be wasted enough to let the whip fall on you.

Okay, that's all there is to whining and stuff. In the end, the sun still wants to cry and beg the visitors, you can give the sun more support, the sun really wants to persevere, the sun is actually reluctant to put down this book like this, the sun doesn't want to enter the palace.

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