It is necessary to say something at the end of the volume (2)
After it was put on the shelf, it entered the main battlefield in the setting, two ancestors and three emperors, four heavenly pure lands, five holy lands, seven heavenly demon gates, and nine outer sects...... Although it was not grasped at the beginning, it was not too in-depth, and all readers were encouraged by the novelty of their eyes.
The Lord's World is better written than a copy, which is the most appreciated in the book review area. Due to the setting, the overall situation of the main world should also be unveiled at this time, so after the foreshadowing of the star palace volume, I used the two volumes of "Shenzang" and "Heavenly Emperor" to slowly unveil the main world world.
Because the Shenzang scroll is sold as a setting, although there are occasional criticisms from readers, there is no great dissatisfaction.
The Emperor of Heaven volume is the volume I look forward to the most, and it is also the volume that hit me the most.
Because this is the only time I've put aside a copy in a big plot and carried it out coherently, but it ushered in a lot of scolding.
Many people are wondering that my level is regressing more and more, and I no longer have the same sophistication and novelty as before, and the routine has become the same as most novels.
All the readers who care about me have told me to control the power of the main world, and don't write about it.
Probably because I'm addicted to the game myself, I can't see what's wrong with this volume. Looking back, I can't help but sigh.
Writers can't overestimate their abilities, because of the existence of the original work in the copy, the characters are plump, and each has a fixed image. I just need to lead all the characters and plots, grasp the main line, the branch line, and control the overall situation.
Even if it is a completely original Chongyang roll plot, because the characters all exist in history, there are shadows to be found, and the depiction is divided into three parts.
I wrote two-thirds of the Heavenly Emperor volume according to the original outline, and in addition to everyone's scolding, I was also tired.
If you don't do it well, you have to introspect, the mid-term collection of the Emperor of Heaven volume declined, and the subscription slipped, which made me know that there was something wrong with the story I wrote.
Maybe it's too abrupt, and it doesn't completely harmonize between the main world and the dungeon. I've been looking for questions these days, and I've been asking some friends, hoping to find out what's wrong with this volume and revise it.
After reflection, I feel that there is still a problem with my control, and there is not enough experience and portrayal power, after all, it is my first fantasy novel. The first prince is, in a way, also a fanfiction, and the characters in it don't need to be set by themselves.
For the first time, I gave up the copy to write a large section of pure fantasy Xianxia plot, which made me realize my shortcomings. Thank you to all the readers who have been with me until now.
Having said all that, that's actually what I want to say!
Finally, the next volume is called "Maha", so I think I can guess it.
And most importantly, tears for monthly passes, tears for subscriptions! Subscription is the key to a book, and it has only recently rebounded and is on the rise, and I hope you can help break through a boundary. Due to the bad results, the main station has not been recommended for three consecutive weeks, and there is no next week, and the tears are broken!
The monthly pass is a single-digit gap from the previous one, and every time I go up, I am snatched back by the other party the next day.
This time, I beg you to vote for a few more monthly tickets, so that the stars can completely sit in the tenth position of the classification.
Tomorrow, as long as it is tenth in the Xianxia category, and the gap with the latter is more than fifteen monthly passes.
Four Changes!(To be continued......)