About the protagonist [related to the work]
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First of all, the author is actually a rookie author, and his mind is wild, but for cultivation has always been in a poor state, many people understand this problem, so I won't say much.
After the protagonist obtains the inheritance,The ability he has,Fire spirit beads,And so on will be slowly revealed.,I handled this very poorly before.,Maybe it's more anxious to write.,Didn't think about it.。
And then there is about the protagonist as a person, in fact, a book also reflects the author's own thoughts, and the protagonist in this book is just like the author.
Those who read the book carefully know that the protagonist has always been very affectionate and righteous towards his friends, but he is more self-oriented, and he is good at everything. There is some cynicism towards his family and the elders of the academy.
But for the enemy, he has always been not soft-hearted, but he will not cause trouble for no reason, etc., at most give some lessons, as for killing, unless someone else wants to kill him, it is possible to kill people if he is angered by the bottom line, which is also normal. [This kind of killing refers to the violation of the protagonist's scales in the human race, so that it is possible to kill. But like the kind of person who kills blood and has no life, if he kills it, it is normal. 】
And finally, about the heroine.
I don't understand why some people feel that this is more heroines, it may be that seeing the protagonist see a girl with a good posture, it is a little flattering, and it is related to the ripples in my heart.
In fact, the protagonist's inner dedication to cultivation goes without saying. But for the love of children, imagine a 15-year-old boy, although he has been inherited and has an extraordinary heart, but this cannot be changed, his love for "love" is beginning to open, and the yearning in his heart.
Cultivation taught him how to stick to his heart, but it didn't teach him how to deal with such things as love. That's why the protagonist sees a beautiful girl, and he likes it, but he just likes it, and liking doesn't mean love.
Because only when you have grown up will you understand, and the protagonist is also the initial stage of growth.
He himself is not a strong man reborn, just ask a teenager, why doesn't he feel ripples when he sees a beautiful girl?
The original text of chapter 31 is as follows:
["I don't know who this is?" And just after this thought fell, Feng Lin finally found a beautiful shadow on the side.
In sight, the girl is elegant and vulgar, delicate and delicate, and a set of cyan robes hides the perfect jade body, making the girl look like a fairy in the painting.
Looking at the girl in front of him who looked quite amazing, Feng Lin felt that his heartbeat involuntarily accelerated a little.
After all, he is the kind of young man with strong blood, although his heart is not in line with this age, but after all, he is in his youth, and he has little resistance to this kind of fragrant scene. 】
If a teenager who has no experience in personnel can always maintain a calm attitude without showing a trace of turbulence when he sees such a girl, then there is no sense of substitution.
He was deceived by Xue Mengru because he was defenseless against her, and Xue Mengru herself was very strong. Later, the protagonist will know Xue Mengru's identity through some things and so on. You'll know you've been deceived.
Therefore, the experience of growing up will change a person, and the protagonist has not experienced some setbacks, so why should he become a strong man in the world?
Just the inner refusal to admit defeat and strong will can make him go farther and farther, which is a bit far-fetched.
The protagonist's growth experience, the furnishings of the plot, and the firmness of his heart and yearning for the strong are the driving forces that guide him to keep going.
As for the inheritance, it has just begun, and you have to eat things slowly, how to eat them in one go.
Also, in fact, the ancestor worship conference itself is a fighting match, and the protagonist has not even cultivated the ancient trick now, nor has he entered the inner courtyard, how can there be many means! It's just that he fights with others in the ancestral land a lot, so there are too few moves, and it's a little obvious.
Summary:
Because the author is a newcomer, in general there are definitely flaws, but as they improve, they will also rise, and some problems will no longer be a problem.
Also, thank you for your support~