When Yang Fan woke up, it was already three o'clock in the afternoon, he hurriedly washed up, didn't care about eating, sat in front of the computer, opened the writer's assistant to check his data.

Sure enough, as he expected, the 800 collection was reduced by 100 in less than 24 hours.

Sure enough, many collections are just for watching their own jokes, Yang Fan thought with a wry smile.

For a rookie writer, if you ask him what is the most uncomfortable experience in the process of writing a book, I believe that basically 90% of new writers will say that the most uncomfortable experience is the reduction of collections.

Collections represent a kind of recognition, especially for new authors, and every collection is hard-won without any website promotion and recommendation. According to online statistics, 80% of newcomers write their first book, and even 100,000 words, which is less than 100 collections. Among the 80%, there are 40% of the writers' collections that are just over double digits. For them, sometimes you cancel a collection, it may not matter to you, but for new writers, it can feel like the end of the world.

Although Yang Fan was mentally prepared, he still suffered a big blow, and this was the second time he experienced a reduction in his collection.

It took Yang Fan a lot of time to calm down, he turned off the work information, breathed a sigh of relief, and started a new update.

Hearing that someone dissuaded him, although Murong Aotian was reluctant, his main purpose was to find the dream man from twenty years ago for the store manager, and he didn't want to delay his big event because of this, so he stopped. But Ouyang Yunhai not only lost face in front of the lover of his dreams, but was also defeated by a nobody in front of his biggest competitor Li Qingshan, he was furious, did not listen to dissuasion, and attacked Murong Aotian one after another. Murong Aotian was caught off guard and was injured.

Writing this, Yang Fan stopped and began to think about the plot after that. His original outline plan was that Murong Aotian would kill his opponent and directly cause a conflict.

But the role of the shopkeeper was joined by him on a whim, and he also poured a lot of heart and soul into this role. If it is as originally written, then the request of the store owner will not be easy to handle.

This is the impact of adding additional independent new characters on the whole book, the entire outline, and generally experienced writers basically write honestly according to the outline to maintain the coherence of the whole book, and will not easily add new characters, and only new writers will add new characters on a whim, and many books are like this because there are too many new characters on a whim, and they have to reimagine the outline.

Yang Fan changed and stopped, and wrote less than 100 words in half an hour.

"It's time to eat. A familiar voice sounded in Yang Fan's ears.

Yang Fan reluctantly got up from the computer and went to the living room.

Dinner was still instant noodles, and I don't know how many packets of instant noodles Lan bought, but there was a fried poached egg in the instant noodles, which added a lot of color to it.

"Stuck?" Lan asked as he looked at Yang Fan with a sad face.

"yes, because of the addition of characters and the plot, the whole outline is a bit broken, and I'm thinking about how to continue to connect the plot and the outline. Yang Fan expressed his distress.

"Why do you want to connect them in series. Lan answered Yang Fan's question while eating noodles, "It's not okay to separate these." The new plot only needs to be consistent with the theme of the work, and the work is originally composed of countless short stories. ”

"But what about the conflict between the two stories?" Yang Fan understood something after listening to Lan's words, but the problem he was currently encountering was that the two stories clashed together.

"Either it's discarding the secondary story, or it's separating the secondary story and putting it before and after the main story, though. Lan frowned and continued, "Although it is divided into main stories and secondary stories, your story must be coherent and prominent. ”

After Yang Fan listened, he quickly devoured the noodles in front of him, then ran to the computer, and then updated.

Murong Aotian was injured unexpectedly, Ouyang Yunhai did not stop, but prepared to kill him, the voice of dissuasion did not appear again, and the lotus fairy and others on the side turned a blind eye and did not make a move, but looked forward to it.

As long as Ouyang Yunhai killed Murong Aotian, the reputation of him and the sect he represented would plummet, and the ten major sects would not have as harmonious relations as they imagined.

Under the crisis of Murong Aotian, he burst out with extraordinary strength, defusing Ouyang Yunhai's attack, he started his own counterattack, Ouyang Yunhai was naturally invincible, that voice appeared again and asked him to stop, he had already played out his anger, regardless of it, and then killed the killer.

Fairy Lotus naturally couldn't see Ouyang Yunhai die, so she took action to stop Murong Aotian.

Murong Aotian had already discovered that Fairy Lotus was not as beautiful as he imagined, and he didn't give Fairy Lotus face, but instead fought with Fairy He.

Fairy Lotus was reluctant to expose his hole cards and Murong Aotian played evenly with him. Ouyang Yunhai also did not change his life, and attacked Murong Aotian. Murong Aotian is on the line of life and death.

Writing this, Yang Fan left another suspenseful ending, and finally named the title of the chapter a raccoon dog.

"How did the protagonist resolve this mortal situation? Lan, who was silently observing from the sidelines, asked anxiously.

Yang Fan looked at Lan's anxious look, and then said seriously

"Secret. ”

Under Lan's white eyes, Yang Fan smiled, looking at the time, it was already eight o'clock in the evening unconsciously. Yang Fan hurriedly changed his clothes and went to work part-time.

On the way to a part-time job, Yang Fan inexplicably had a passion, and he couldn't figure out where this passion came from, perhaps because he had solved a problem in his work, or perhaps because he began to have a new expectation for his work.

"This book is getting better and better. At this point, a little fat man with a tired face on his face picked up his mobile phone and finished reading the update of "Looking Up at the Stars" in one go.

Wang Zhipeng, who is already in his third year of high school, can only enjoy his few rest times on Sundays with his mobile phone and computer.

The pressure of going to school has overwhelmed him, and he is not good at studying, and he has to bear other things, such as the unfavorable eyes of teachers and classmates, such as the disappointed eyes of his parents, he is also slowly catching up with the footsteps of people with better academic performance than him, he has worked hard, but his pace is a little slower.

He chased seven books at the same time, many of which were written by great gods, but the first one he chose was Yang Fan's book.

Originally, he was going to give up chasing the book, but because he was moved by the author's attitude and the continuous improvement of his works, and saw that the book was getting better and better under his expectations, he felt an emotion called moving from the bottom of his heart.

It seems that this book is also following Wang Zhipeng himself, constantly advancing, although he is not favored in the eyes of many people, although his progress is very slow, but he is moving forward with himself, thinking of this, he has a smile on his face because he has endured too much numbness.

Wang Zhipeng finished voting for the recommendation, he didn't click on the other six books, he turned off his mobile phone and computer and walked to the table, swept away the fatigue on his face, cheered up, and started a new round of review.