Chapter 4 Random Gift Pack for Beginner Achievements
When Yang Fan said the words that he couldn't give up, at that moment he suddenly felt extremely tall, and at that moment he was moved by himself.
"Since you've decided, there's nothing I can do to change it. Lan helplessly spread his hands and asked, "Will you regret it?" for the sake of those twenty readers, you have to pay more than a year. ”
"No regrets. Yang Fan said seriously.
Congratulations to the author for reaching the junior hidden achievement of "Never Give Up". The system rewards a random bundle of primary achievements. A crisp voice rang out.
Then a mysterious chest appeared out of thin air.
"Hey, how can there be an achievement system. Yang Fan asked in surprise.
"Of course there is. The Writer 2.0 system is the most complete system for cultivating first-class writers and supergods. The more you'll know as you become a one-star author, so go open random packs. Lan urged with wide eyes, and Lan was also very curious to see what this gift package could offer.
Yang Fan cautiously opened the box. There are only two mysterious items with question marks in the chest. Then the question mark vanished, turning into a potion and a pair of gloves.
"Test potions and code gloves!" Lan cried out in surprise.
"What's that?" Yang Fan was at a loss for what to do with these two things.
"Codeword gloves can increase the speed of codewords by 10%! If you want to redeem, the prerequisite is to become a one-star writer, the price is 3000 points, and the test potion can only be purchased by a one-star writer, and the role is to allow the writer to enter the experience of his work, which requires 5000 points! Basically, these two things will not appear in the beginner package, I didn't expect you to be so lucky!" Lan explained jealously.
Hearing Lan's explanation, Yang Fan looked at the things in front of him in disbelief. He touched the glove, the material of the glove was very special, as soft as silk, and a sentence appeared in his mind.
"Is the time-limited codeword glove binding. ”
"What?" Yang Fan shouted in surprise.
"It was originally for a limited time, so it's no wonder it's in the Starter Pack. Lan suddenly realized.
Yang Fan put away the code word gloves, because it was a limited time, he kept it for future prevention and unnecessary, he picked up the tube of test potion, the test potionist exuded an amber luster, which made people love it and was reluctant to drink it.
"Time to test the potion, there are 59 minutes and 11 seconds left" The prompt sound in my head sounded again.
"Drink it down, or it will be wasted!" Lan said in a panic as he saw the remaining time, "This countdown is also counted into the time to integrate into the experience of his own work. ”
After Yang Fan heard this, he quickly uncorked the potion bottle, and then drank it with a grunt.
"Well, it tastes a little sweet. This is how Yang Fan felt after drinking the potion. Then his figure began to blur, and he merged into his work.
Yang Fan saw a young man walking towards him, sword eyebrows and starry eyes, dressed in white, with a wicked smile on the corner of his mouth. Although he hadn't seen this young man, he immediately recognized this young man, and this young man was Murong Aotian, the male protagonist of his "Looking Up at the Stars".
Yang Fan excitedly watched the protagonist he created slowly walk step by step. looked at Murong Aotian with loving and relieved eyes.
Murong Aotian walked up to Yang Fan and knelt down with a pop, yes, he knelt down. Then hugged Yang Fan's thigh.
"Big brother, let me go!" Murong Aotian said crying.
Yang Fan looked at Murong Aotian with a confused expression.
"You wrote me Linggen too badly and was dismissed, I admit it, anyway, I will definitely find a better heroine for me in the future, you wrote my best brother to death, I admit that maybe I can be resurrected in the future, but you are addicted to writing, and I wrote to my master to death, the sect was written to die, and I finally met the girl I liked and wrote it to death, I have a grudge against you!" You gave me such a domineering name, how can I be like a broom star, whoever treats me well, who dies, finally goes out to the auction and meets the second ancestor, kills the little one and comes to the old one, and is hunted down every day, Nima! Don't you feel tired? I look tired! I run for my life twenty-four hours a day. Run for your life every day!"
Yang Fan said bitterly and gently, "Aotian, how can you see a rainbow if you don't experience wind and rain? Now that protagonist doesn't grow up after a big setback? It's normal to die some people, and besides, I'm not a cruel person, you see your parents and I haven't written to death yet?"
When Murong Aotian heard the last sentence, he looked at Yang Fan in horror, "You still want to write my father and mother to death?"
"I..." Before Yang Fan's words were finished, he saw his body slowly merge with Murong Aotian, and then he couldn't move, like a marionette, forcibly integrating into the character and experiencing the plot of the novel he wrote.
Murong Aotian, born in the Heavenly Mandate City of the Qingxin Kingdom, is one of the four major families of the Heavenly Mandate City, originally a peerless genius, but he was completely lost in one night, and was proposed to withdraw from the marriage by Dugu Wan'er, who was also born in one of the four major families.
Murong Aotian was ostracized and framed because of his complete loss of cultivation, and was expelled from the family. When he was wandering, he met a mysterious old man, and it was a pity that he entered the hidden world, which has a handsome pretending elder brother, a fat best friend who will appear in most novels, and a beautiful little sister. The senior brother pretended to be alive and dead, and was defeated by Murong Aotian. made Murong Aotian the leader of the disciples, and the scenery was infinite.
The Hidden World Sect offended a mysterious organization and destroyed it. Only Murong Aotian escaped because he went out on a mission to carry out the sect. So Murong Aotian, who was determined to avenge the sect, roamed this world alone.
The auction was leaked, offended the second ancestor, the second ancestor made it difficult for him, he killed the second ancestor with his backhand, and the old one came naturally after the little one, and the father of the second ancestor began to hunt him down. In desperation, he began to escape.
finally killed the father of the second ancestor, and the grandfather of the second ancestor jumped out again and began to hunt him down...
The picture comes to an abrupt end here and there, as the novel progresses to this point.
Yang Fan's old face turned red after experiencing all this, and he only had one feeling that if he was Murong Aotian, he would also kneel down and beg the author to stop writing.
The plot is vulgar, the plot is old-fashioned, the protagonist is too aggrieved, and there are too many pits dug up, and some routines and pits are forcibly added to make it illogical.
For example, in order to make the protagonist a waste material, he was forced to scrap for the sake of waste materials, and why the Hidden World Sect did not say it, and finally forcibly destroyed the door. The actor has been chased and killed, but he is running away, and finally he can't bear it anymore and kills his opponent. The image he wanted to create slowly blurred because of too many pits he had dug and vulgar routines.
For the first time, he reflected on his work.
People can only grow in continuous reflection, especially in the professions of writers and writers, who must constantly reflect and revise.
The time for the potion had come, and Yang Fan's figure appeared in front of Lan.
"How's that?" Lan asked curiously.
"It's a cliché and a failure. Yang Fan sighed.
Talking to your own character and putting yourself into the role often reveals a lot of loopholes.
Yang Fan walked to the computer and calmly began to update the next chapter.