Chapter 39: Loopholes

Late at night in autumn, it is easy to feel sad. It was almost four o'clock when Yang Fan got home from work, and when he got home, he sat in front of the computer and looked at the computer in a daze.

Although he refuted Liu Ning's words, he didn't know why Liu Ning's words kept echoing in his ears since he got off work.

"What's wrong?" Lan asked, looking at Yang Fan, who hadn't started writing for a long time.

"It's okay... I just remembered what someone said to me when I went to work today. Yang Fan relayed the conversation between Liu Ning and himself to Lan, looking forward to seeing Lan's answer.

"It's true that they write online articles at the best of times. At that time, when writing online articles, as long as the plot was smooth, the content was rich, and there were no typos, even in Xiaobaiwen could become popular. Then Lan said with a mockery on his face, "If you put a person's success and failure all on the times, although the background of the times is one thing, but those successful writers, which one of them did not write millions, or even tens of millions of words of work, to achieve success? Don't follow his example, be down-to-earth, I believe that as long as you pay, you will be seen one day. ”

After listening to Lan's words, Yang Fan's heart suddenly brightened. He nodded, and began today's update.

When Murong Aotian was on the verge of life and death, Li Qingshan made a move and helped him contain Ouyang Yunhai's attack, and Li Qingshan mocked Ouyang Yunhai while showing his mastery, saying that he didn't even want a decent face. Fairy Lotus watched Li Qingshan make a move, frowned, then stopped the offensive in his hand and stood aside.

The duel between Li Qingshan and Ouyang Yunhai was quickly decided, Ouyang Yunhai was no match for Li Qingshan when he was in his heyday, let alone in his injured state now. Ouyang Yunhai admitted defeat and stood aside, and Li Qingshan didn't hurt the killer.

Murong Aotian thanked Li Qingshan, and at the same time, after this battle, Murong Aotian also understood his shortcomings, that is, he did not have a hole card that would kill with one hit.

Li Qingshan accepted the thanks with peace of mind, and secretly sneered at Ouyang Yunhai. made Ouyang Yunhai hate Murong Aotian even more. Although Murong Aotian knew that this was a killing, after all, Li Qingshan was sending charcoal in the snow, so he could only accept it with a wry smile.

At this time, the owner of that voice appeared, and it was none other than an elder of the Tsing Yi faction represented by Ouyang Yunhai. Just now, the elder was borrowing the Mingyue Sect's alchemy room, and he couldn't spare time to meddle in this battle, but in the end, because he cared too much about his beloved junior, he made a furnace and failed in alchemy, and he vented all his anger on this Murong Aotian.

This battle attracted the attention of the top ten decent high-level leaders, and the elders of the Tsing Yi faction naturally couldn't teach Murong Aotian a lesson again, after all, Ouyang Yunhai had already given the Tsing Yi faction a bad reputation for sneak attacks, and he didn't want to fall into a reputation of bullying the small with the big.

He strongly asked Murong Aotian to participate in the Ten Sect Rookie Competition. After all, although Ouyang Yunhai of the Tsing Yi Sect is the chief disciple, he is not the disciple with the strongest combat power, and the strongest combat power is the head disciple of the dark and innocent.

At this point, Yang Fan stopped updating and began to conceive the following chapters.

"Why would Li Qingshan help Murong Aotian? If he said that he only helped if he had a good character, why did he write that he killed Murong Aotian later. Lan saw that Yang Fan stopped updating and hurriedly asked.

Because the previous chapter showed that the ten decent sects are not as harmonious as imagined. Such a good opportunity to step on other people's sects to increase your prestige, why not seize it?" Yang Fan said.

Through constant updates, Yang Fan constantly discovered the loopholes in his book. In order to close these loopholes, he had to keep thinking and keep closing those holes.

The current loophole is the problem of the protagonist's combat effectiveness, eighty percent of rookie writers will face this problem, basically all fantasy fairy tales and martial arts novels, the protagonist will defeat the strong with the weak, and readers also love to see the weak defeat the strong, but the weak defeat the strong, there is also a bottom line. Moreover, it is written that the weak defeat the strong is too much, and the situation of combat effectiveness collapse is the most likely to occur.

And the protagonist defeats the strong with the weak, and he can't defeat the strong with the weak brainlessly, he must have a powerful one-hit killing move, and that trick must be reasonable, Murong Aotian in Yang Fan's current works. Facing this problem, he doesn't have a one-hit kill, and he also has a problem with the combat power setting.

At this time, Yang Fan is making up for this problem, he is thinking, the rookie ring competition, Murong Aotian must participate, this is the key to open part of the main line, the problem now is that he is so difficult to face the lotus fairy who did not show his hole cards, there are other strong opponents in the ring competition, how should he fight.

After thinking about it for a long time, Yang Fan had no clue, so he could only finish this chapter head-on, and as for the nirvana, he could only think about it after writing it. He then went on to write

Fairy Lotus committed herself to apologize to Murong Aotian, saying that she was only afraid that Murong Aotian would be impulsive and kill Ouyang Yunhai and get into trouble. She tried her best to invite Murong Aotian to participate in the rookie ring competition, and Li Qingshan also opened her mouth to invite.

Murong Aotian heard Fairy He's apology, but he was vigilant in his heart. After going through these few things, he has seen through this woman. But he still thought about it for a while and agreed, not only to test his strength, but also to make it easier for him to find someone.

Writing this, Yang Fan was a little dissatisfied. It's a bit too rushed here. He saved the draft of the chapter and turned to discuss it with Lan.

"I'm not happy with this ending. Do you have any thoughts?"

"I think, it's a bit too far-fetched for you to test your strength, so it's better to portray the protagonist in more detail if he has to participate in this competition. Lan frowned and said his understanding. "Moreover, there is also the reward of the competition, which happens to be something that the protagonist must need, wouldn't it be better?"

When Yang Fan heard Lan's words, his mouth suddenly opened, indeed, he could make some detailed descriptions on the prizes of the competition, and Yang Fan hurriedly revised it.

Murong Aotian originally wanted to shirk it, but the prize of this competition was the necessity for the advancement of the alchemy technique he had cultivated, the Ice and Fire Fruit. Thinking of this, Murong Aotian agreed.

After writing this chapter, Yang Fan checked for typos and chose to publish it.

He looked at the time and saw that it was already six o'clock in the morning, and it was dawn outside. He looked at Lan apologetically and said, "Trouble you again, stay with me for so long." ”

Lan pouted and said arrogantly dissatisfied, "Don't be so polite, you can only live up to my expectations when you get up early to become a god." ”

The whole room was filled with a homely atmosphere.

In fact, rookie writers are prone to loopholes and stuck, rookie writers are often lonely, their works have to rely on their own efforts and thinking to write, no one to discuss, no one to help, whether signed or not signed a rookie writer is like this, sometimes, a rookie writer without readers, without the help of editors to complete a book, that kind of person deserves respect, because he works hard to write, and strives to finish each chapter with heart.