Chapter 9: Resonance
Yang Fan began to cheer up and code words seriously. There are only three hours left until the golden hour.
Meng Yang, a migrant worker in Beipiao, came to BJ alone when he was 16 years old. Now he has been working for ten years, and his hard work for ten years has made him change from the title of Meng Xiaozi to Boss Meng. Although his shop is only a small Lanzhou ramen shop of less than 30 square meters, although he has only two employees.
But his small shop is very popular, the taste is great, and the reputation is excellent, but in the end, he is busy and does not get a lot of money except for rent, water, electricity, and labor. He doesn't have too many hobbies, only reading novels. Because of saving money.
Today, I don't know why, but the store that is always overcrowded has few customers, and he sits bored at the cash register reading novels.
He has read novels for more than ten years, and he basically reads all kinds of novels. But lately, there have been more and more routine texts, and it is difficult for him to find a novel that resonates with him.
There is a novel on his novel shelf, "Looking Up at the Stars", which he hasn't read for half a month. Today, he finished reading all the novels on his bookshelf, and only this one was left unread, so he flipped through it.
He looked at it with a blank face, because the novel had always been too cheesy, so vulgar in everything, and he had an urge to remove the book from the shelves until he saw the latest chapter.
He looked at it and suddenly cried, and the little clerk on the side was a little helpless when he saw the boss suddenly crying. Meng Yang wiped his tears and remembered the past.
When he first came to BJ, he was cheated out of all his money by the intermediary and was desperate, but he met a master who made Lanzhou ramen, and the master saw that he was dirty and asked about the situation, and the master made him a bowl of Lanzhou ramen at that time. He will never forget the taste of that bowl of noodles, and then he became the master's apprentice, until finally the master retired and quit, and he went out on his own and opened a small shop with the money he had saved.
His desperate redemption is just like the protagonist of this novel. The original idea of abandoning the book is saved by a chapter of the book. He silently put the book on top, it should be said that because of that chapter, he saw what he used to be, and after resonating with him, he put himself into it, and he was very much looking forward to the follow-up plot.
Yang Fan didn't know that the chapter invisibly resonated with a reader and escaped the fate of abandoning the book. Now he's concentrating on writing. When he finished the first chapter of today's update, he was not satisfied. This chapter writes that after Murong Aotian finished eating noodles, in order to repay the noodle money, he worked in a small shop, and he should follow the normal routine of the online article, and the store where the protagonist works should pop out of a person who is not long-eyed, and then be slapped in the face by the protagonist. Or maybe that boss is a peerless master who can't hide in the world, and he can't help but teach a few tricks when he sees the protagonist's bones and amazing talents. Yang Fan wrote a combination of the two, but after writing it, he felt that he was not satisfied with this chapter, and he couldn't say why he was not satisfied.
"It's so cheesy, the reader can guess it. Lan saw his doubts and said, "But everyone likes to read this kind of thing, aren't all the routines of immortal cultivation novels like this? ”
Yang Fan felt that it made a lot of sense when he heard it, anyway, this kind of immortal cultivation novels didn't all have this routine, but he hesitated when he ordered to release it.
"What are you still hesitating about?,It's a little now.,It's time for everyone to rest.,If you send it now, the number of readings and collections will increase a lot!"
Yang Fan was still hesitating. Lan couldn't help but rush up and help him press the release button.
"Are you tired, I look tired. Yang Fan's mind sounded the cry of Murong Aotian, who had used the limited-time experience potion, and remembered his work.
"You can't write like this, what is the difference between writing like this and the protagonist of an ordinary novel. Yang Fan gritted his teeth and said to himself. "I'm going to write about flesh-and-blood character. He deleted all the updates he had written in three hours. Rewrite.
Seeing that the chapter that was finally written was deleted like this, Lan was a little distressed, and she was even more distressed that it was released at three golden points in one day, and Yang Fan's actions missed two at once.
Yang Fan didn't care, he was writing according to his own ideas.
Murong Aotian finished eating the bowl of beef noodles that he remembered, so he went to help the shop owner work to pay off his debts, and the shop owner said no, but at the insistence of Murong Aotian, who had a favor to repay, the shop owner agreed.
The shopkeeper is portrayed as a simple and honest mortal, and there are many shining points in him that ordinary people have, such as pragmatism and kindness, Murong Aotian gradually turned his anger and sadness of the collapse of the sect into peace under the influence of the shopkeeper's character.
Immortals have different paths, but immortal cultivators were all once mortals, but the power they possess is different. Mortals are not necessarily inferior to immortals.
This chapter, Yang Fan wrote quickly, it only took an hour, and when he finished revising it, it took a total of an hour and a half.
"This chapter is also very vulgar. Lan complained after reading the chapter.
"Vulgar is vulgar, but it writes what I want to convey in my heart. At the same time, he also gave an explanation to Murong Aotian. Yang Fan said with a smile. He clicked upload. Then I went to the bathroom and washed my hands and prepared to continue writing, after all, I have to ensure the progress of two chapters a day, otherwise the reading volume and collection will not rise, and I will become the Mediterranean.
Unexpectedly, Yang Fan wrote for so long, he didn't feel tired and hungry, and Lan, who had been greedy, didn't urge Yang Fan to take her to eat, and the two fell into a state of frenzy.
Yang Fan then wrote, with the help of the shopkeeper, he gradually became peaceful, the shopkeeper is also a person with a story, when he was young, he met a Xiuzhen woman he called "fairy", and then knew each other and fell in love, and finally one day the two of them secretly tasted the forbidden fruit, and when he woke up the next day, he found that the "fairy" disappeared, lost her shopkeeper, as if he had lost everything, and the shopkeeper was for the "fairy" I built an inn here and waited silently for her to come back, but I didn't expect to wait for twenty years, and now I have arrived.
This chapter, he wrote for a long time, he stopped writing, writing, writing, he sighed.
Although the story is bloody, it can highlight the helplessness of mortals, as well as the suspense of the story, writing and writing, Yang Fan feels that he has become the honest and honest shopkeeper, as if he has experienced that period of meeting and then separating from the fairy, waiting for twenty years. His mood suddenly became lost.
The story of a shopkeeper who was unintentionally added made him overturn his outline. This is a bit uncost-effective for professional writers. Writing according to the outline can maintain the speed and the plot, and few people will overturn their outline because of an insignificant little character. But Yang Fan is not a professional writer, he is a novice.
It was eight o'clock in the evening when he finished writing this chapter, but he felt satisfied, for the first time he felt that writing was so enjoyable, and for the first time he felt that a writer could experience a different life.
"This chapter is good. Lan smiled and patted Yang Fan on the shoulder, praised him, and then continued, "Go out to eat, I'm hungry." ”