Chapter 24 Details Decided?

The next morning, as usual, he got up on time before seven o'clock, washed up, and finished eating breakfast, he opened his laptop and, as usual, glanced at the reader's book review. This is his habit of writing books for ten years.

However, today he has been reading book reviews for a long time longer than in the past. He trembled with the mouse and pulled down the book review.

"Ungrateful. ”

Unfavorite

"Books are average, and neither are people, water every day. ”

"Hurry up and go to Lewen, don't write books on the xx Internet. ”

"I thought you were a writer of conscience, but I didn't expect you to be such a person..."

“...”

The book reviews at the bottom are basically one-sided scolding him, and there is a trace of viciousness between the lines, and every word is heart-wrenching. There are also some readers who are desperately refuting, but they are overwhelmed by these vicious book reviews, and they seem lonely and helpless.

I've been tired of writing books for ten years, and I've seen all kinds of vicious book reviews. But this is the first time he has encountered such a book review that scolds him intensively.

None of the book reviews discuss the content of the book, but count his character in one color. He hurriedly logged on QQ, ready to find the official to ask them to delete these malicious book reviews quickly, but he was tired of logging in to QQ but found that his official fan base had been disbanded, and he took a breath of cold air in surprise.

Countless private messages are questioning him, loyal readers, and friends who are concerned about him. There are classmates who haven't been in touch for a long time.

He didn't click on the messages, he silently turned off QQ.

He opened the xx net, only to see that for the first time today, the front page banner did not put recommended novels and contest activities, but only hung an article.

The title of the article is eleven large bright red characters, so bright red that it makes people feel glaring. The headline of the eleven big characters is:

"On the Ten Deadly Sins of the Great Immortal Writer Who Wears Writing!"

The matter of pen-weariness has detonated the entire writers' world, whether it is a forum, a website or a Weibo, at this time, there are fierce quarrels around the character of pen-wearing.

Yang Fan didn't feel anything about this matter, he finished reading the article that the website hated the pen god, and after reading it, he threw it aside, the god, the things between the websites are too far away for him, a small writer. He was troubled at this point.

It's not the problem of updating or your own work, it's worrying about tomorrow's class reunion.

He was a little looking forward to the class reunion, and he was a little scared, looking forward to the fact that it was the first time he was invited to the class reunion, and he was afraid because after graduating from high school, he basically cut off contact with all his classmates in high school because of the confession. If you go, it won't become embarrassing.

Yang Fan was uneasy in his heart, and everyone longed for friendship, especially the friendship when he was a student, which was even more cherished.

"You sat in front of the computer for half an hour and didn't move, what's wrong with Kavin?" Lan, who was wearing a set of pink pajamas and had just walked out of the bathroom, looked at Yang Fan and asked curiously.

"No, no, I'm hesitating about tomorrow's class reunion. Yang Fan grabbed his hair and said embarrassedly.

The pajamas were bought last night, and Yang Fan felt that Lan always had only one piece of clothing, and it was a particularly eye-catching dress, so he took Lan to buy a few clothes after dinner last night.

"Go ahead. Seeing you like this, I obviously want to go very much. Lan pursed his lips and looked at Yang Fan with disdain. "It's really hypocritical, you can go if you want, men, don't think so much. ”

His careful thinking was seen through at a glance, and Yang Fan grabbed his head embarrassedly and smirked.

"Hurry up and update, just like you, I don't know when I will be able to become a star writer and really open the road to the gods. Lan looked at Yang Fan's stupid appearance and complained angrily.

Yang Fan slapped his face hard, finally calmed down, stared at the screen, and began to code.

In online novels, a villain must emerge from time to time for the protagonist to pretend to be a slap in the face, especially Xianxia online texts, which are called cool points, and are often small climaxes that can be seen everywhere in a book.

In the new chapter, under Chen Xin'er's stalking, Murong Aotian had to take Chen Xin'er with him, Murong Aotian's purpose was very clear, that is, to go to the Mingyue Sect, one of the top ten decent factions, to find the Xiuzhen woman that the uncle met twenty years ago, and personally handed over the jewelry to that person, and he decided to tell the Xiuzhen woman that there was a mortal who had waited for him silently for twenty years, and asked about the goodbye of the year.

Coming to the restaurant at the foot of the Mingyue Sect Mountain, Chen Xin'er was a little panicked, after all, there was no contradiction between good and evil, she was doubting whether Murong Aotian knew her identity, handed her over, and was about to escape secretly, when she met Li Shu, an elite disciple of the Mingyue Sect.

Just at the meal, the whole restaurant was full of guests, as a disciple of a famous sect, he was naturally a little arrogant, seeing the overcrowded restaurant, he was unwilling to share a table with those who were not worthy of his identity, and it happened that Murong Aotian and Chen Xin'er were sitting in a good position, and they happened to be next to him, so he showed his identity as a Mingyue faction and asked them to go away, Murong Aotian was unwilling to make a difference, so he beckoned Chen Xin'er to leave together. Chen Xin'er was born noble, and she held the moon from a small number of stars, so she was naturally a little unhappy, muttered, and then was heard by Li Shu, Li Shu questioned Chen Xin'er, Chen Xin'er pointed out that Sang scolded Huai, and sarcastically ridiculed Li Shu as a dog, Li Shu couldn't get over his face, and was ready to teach Chen Xin'er a lesson.

Murong Aotian saw Chen Xin'er being bullied, so he stood up to protect Chen Xin'er. Li Shu and Murong Aotian duel, and finally were slapped in the face, so they cried and shouted You wait. Then go to Mingyue to send rescuers.

This is a very common face-slapping routine, Yang Fan wrote this chapter very quickly, it only took less than an hour, after he finished writing, he reviewed it for typos, and then prepared to click publish.

"Wait. Lan looked at Yang Fan, who was about to release this chapter, and stopped him.

"What's wrong?" Yang Fan was startled, then looked at Lan in confusion and asked.

"This chapter always feels weird. ”

"No, isn't it like this for all online articles to be forced to slap their faces? Especially to hit the face of the kind of person who is on top. The name of this chapter has been thought of, called a bloody case caused by steamed buns. It will definitely be a hit with readers. ”

"Please, you write a bit of intelligence about the villain. The disciples of the famous sects are also people who have conducted higher education, so they are not so brain-dead. ”

After listening to Lan's words, Yang Fan looked at the computer hesitantly and thought.

It's true that Lan said that he wrote the villain too brainlessly, but how to write it without being brainless?

Lan looked at the pensive Yang Fan, so he whispered, "Or add some details?"

"Details?"

"For example, he was in a bad mood that day, or was he angry?"

"Hmm..." Yang Fan looked at the computer screen and suddenly thought of a good idea.

He began to revise, and it happened that an exchange meeting was held between the decent sects, and Li Shu took a Xiuzhen fairy from another sect and swore to introduce this shop, saying that it was the most delicious restaurant near the Mingyue faction, and then it was full of seats, and he took a fancy to Murong Aotian's location, which caused a conflict. In the end, she was about to lose, and the Xiuzhen woman made a move to solve the embarrassment, and then the Xiuzhen woman revealed her identity, and it was the most outstanding disciple of another sect, the famous lotus fairy in the Xiuzhen world.

Just a little bit of detail. The whole chapter felt different, Yang Fan looked at Lan worriedly. Lan nodded with satisfaction, he let out a long sigh of relief, clicked publish, and then said with a sad face

"I'm getting farther and farther away from the outline..."