Hey, gentlemen, I'm still here. As I said before, I've made a lot of changes to the first volume of the book, and I've made a lot of changes in terms of fun and expression, such as highlighting the playfulness of the male protagonists in their teens

"Childish", I hope that you will see a group of boys with a real sense of youth. On the girl side, or rather all the characters in general, the descriptions are more focused on the characteristics, and I hope that the part I added will be interesting to you.

In fact, I have really changed a lot this time, the added supporting characters and even the celebrities and brands from other worlds have tried to create a sense of realism and freshness in the fictional world, I hope I will succeed!

Then I would like to focus on the Sword of Shirovra, which will be an important chapter in the first part of the new edition, and which means to me the formal expression of the local customs.

Although it has always been equally serious, the first map Bai Shi really did not set the customs carefully, perhaps this is one of the important factors of the boredom of the first volume and the second volume.

The serendipitous idea of wanting to supplement the special cuisine led to the collection of material for watching a documentary on Mediterranean cuisine, and then extended to the North Sea fishing grounds and Viking customs, so I could finally add more things this time, such as the style of food, the retreat of Warcraft, the control of pollution, the fire festival of warships, the procession of saints, the storm tide, and a small place like Shirovra can write more and more real things.

This time, I finally see the characters in the virtual world as real people, and I hope this renovation will make the fantasy world I imagined more real and beautiful.

I didn't think much about using the first map as a springboard for upgrades, but this is exactly where most of the main characters were born and grew up, and it was my arrogance and laziness that overlooked the human touch, and this time I want to give them a world with their own customs.

Having said so many bits and pieces, what I actually want to say the most is that I have never been mature enough, but I have never given up, I want to improve, I want to share my story with you, and I hope to get a response from you through my efforts, knowing that you are still happy to see it, and knowing that my efforts are not all useless.

So, see you in June! The revised draft will be released in the form of a new book, and I will come back to you with the follow-up news, so ...... Thank you and hope to see you again in a new book with better grades!