Hello everyone, I am a loyal reader of this book - "Shiratori Dream".

Because the author entered the palace during the New Year, everyone must have forgotten the plot of this book, plus the author two days ago, the text was revised, but it is impossible to let the reader see what has been changed from the beginning, so my little brother, I serve everyone, stole the author's account and posted, after reading this chapter, you all have an impression.

The book begins with a flashback, about the Crusader expedition to Persia, and a chess tournament in which the land is a bet, followed by the appearance of the protagonist (the Traverser)

Gender: Male

Status: Earl:

Looks: Sven scum

The protagonist was born in the year 400 of the new calendar, which is in the year 42X of the new calendar.

After that, it brings the protagonist's point of view, starting with his time travel (400 years), and in the first few chapters, it is introduced that the protagonist has a princess fiancée who is going home to marry.

Actually, I prefer - the "surviving series"...... , if it is a virgin-widow it is even more perfect.

In the first few chapters, some kingdom geography and world settings are introduced, and the author is very lazy, he directly says that this world is called "pseudo-medieval", Gaul corresponds to the franch chicken, and Ciri corresponds to pasta...... , but the area is different from the coastline......

In this way, the world does not look fantastic, I prefer the vast world system, and I hope that the author will use dim sum, open up more maps, and professions.

When the protagonist passes by a village in Chapter 4, he discovers that Chapter 1 appears and kills a nobleman's "thug Lyctori", feeds him and leaves.

In this paragraph, the author added some more paragraphs when he was revising the text, pointing out from the side that the protagonist is self-satisfied when he is gracious to others...... , compared to the old version, add a little personality description.

After hiding from the rain, he carried out science popularization in several famous cities on the continent in the middle, and finally entered the territory of a kind baron.

His full name is "Ebourmin-von Gercy", this baron is fooling around in the territory, and his eldest sister-in-law is "Afkana", who is known as the "witch".

After bidding farewell to the baron, the protagonist arrives at the castle of Duke Prê (one of the only two dukes in the kingdom).

A big event happened here, the protagonist was blackmailed when he entered the city, and the younger brother thought it was a "happy to see" slap in the face plot, but he didn't expect that after the protagonist said a bunch of, he left and paid the money.

Yes, seeing this, I almost had an "X" in the upper right corner, I felt that the protagonist was a coward, and then the author forcibly explained a wave, probably an elephant was bitten by ants, and some elephants may not be angry, and will be too lazy to bird these ants.

This explanation, I reluctantly accept it, after all, there are fewer and fewer books to read, and he is a new author, so give him some tolerance.

Then he was going to go out of the city, and when he encountered the second blackmail, the protagonist rose up and turned back to find the duke, but it caused a tragic accident later.

I don't want to talk about it here, I feel that the author forcibly fed the, and he deliberately disgusted the reader.

The author also gave an explanation, "The protagonist is not omniscient and omnipotent, there is no system in this book, and some small things may trigger big dangers behind them, how can he know ......." ”

I'll keep this explanation for now.

After entering the city to meet the Duke, he and the Duke exchanged business licks for a while, and when they returned to their room, they met Afkana, and the woman climbed into his large, comfortable bed.

The two did go to war, but they only moved their mouths and hands, chatted for several hours, and played several games of chess.

This unfolds really...... ,I originally wanted to spray the author.,I couldn't help it.,And when I saw the later plot, I understood.,It's not a beast here.,It's not a match for the people behind.,So I made up some details for readers.,The reason why it's not on is because I'm afraid of .......。 ”

The text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the peace, the author continues to make trouble, the night is destined to be unpeaceful, the duke's nephew "Aubrey" and the kingdom's famous robber - "the fire wolf of the fire fruit" appear.

There was a burst of slashing, the protagonist's subordinates, died until one was left (Rafa), and ran one (Weber), the protagonist did not show his might, he simply admitted defeat, and his right-hand man was stabbed in the back and died.

“WHAT THE HE......”

And Webber saved him because of his lustful and gambling habits, fled to move the rescuers, fell into the water halfway, and met Rictor.

The author's words, "I am sure that doing good deeds will be rewarded, so this gives the protagonist a glimmer of life"

I drank this bowl of chicken soup, and I give you a thumbs up, because even though I'm not a good person, I also want to be a good person, and after continuing to watch it, there is no wit plot I want to watch, but the protagonist is kidnapped, arrested, intimidated, and sent to the boat.

It makes sense, but I'm not happy with it, and Afkana was slept with by the fire wolf...... , I feel a little green on my head, I don't want to read it, take it, but next week, this book is strongly pushed, I accidentally clicked on it, and decided to give him another chance.

Chapter 24, "Count Penny" appears, and his subordinate "Jebel" appears, this article mainly writes about Jebe's force value, "Shoot the divine arrow across the river, and destroy three people with one arrow"

Fierce! God! Fierce!

And the protagonist uses his "head" to slam into the sword body of the fire wolf, and finally ...... Blind.

"The male protagonist is blind?"

"Blind male protagonist?"

At this point in the novel, the style of painting has changed suddenly, it is difficult to say how I felt at the time, and I have mixed feelings in my heart

However, this development is rare, less than the "sexual transformation body", so I decided to continue watching it.

In 25 chapters, the author changed a large paragraph, and wrote more than 2K at the beginning, and after the modification, he wrote more than 3K, which strengthened the interaction between Afkana and the protagonist.

This chapter is supposed to be a message from a storyteller in this chapter.,That's why it's been modified.。 The author is good here, and he is considerate and respectful of the opinions of book friends.

After that, several forces were named, the royal family, the Norman archdukes, the Vikings, the British Peninsula, etc.

30 chapters of writing about scientific and technological reform, graduated from 589 Polytechnic University postdoctoral me, I am very sure that the author has no goods, so I talked about it, and gave me such a paragraph, and also wrote that science and technology need to accumulate slowly, which is really "the shame of the traverser", if I go back, three years to build artillery, five years to make a manure machine.

After that, I wrote some psychological stories about my subordinates, and the appearance of the protagonist in the front of this book is not very long, and the supporting role is about 6 to 4.

After the story, it advances slowly, and the main contradiction is that the protagonist has a corruption problem, and here the author says that he points out the ugliness of human nature, and most of them make profit for themselves, even if he has the aura of a traverser, he is not useful.

I looked aggrieved, uncomfortable, annoyed, and my kidneys ached.

After 39 chapters, the storm rises across the shore, and the lion rises to Aragorn.

This is very similar to a travel record, it would be better if you could send it + a photo, the protagonist found the Said-Envoy of the Xitai Kingdom here, the two swore goodbye, met his future wife under the peach tree, and was bitten by a dog at the palace banquet.

Why don't you turn over the table here???

It is obvious that when the soul is pierced, the protagonist hurts his heart and lungs, and the five elements are missing - "gall".

After collecting it, I thought about it or forgot it, and the public chapter doesn't charge money, so my tolerance is higher, so I clicked it back again.

The characters in these chapters appear very closely, and the protagonist also talks about a treaty that is superficially lost and secretly beneficial before returning home.

But here comes the problem, the princess turned out to be dumb (close)

There are those who like NTR cuckolds, there are those who love-women, LO-LI, and the author is you...... Is it "disability control"?

I'm going to be an immortal version of you.

After reading it, it turns out that the princess has a story, and the reason has not appeared in chapter 84, but looking at the text, it is likely to be related to the protagonist Lao Tzu.

And this is a political marriage, and after the two return to the territory, they hold a family banquet, at which the protagonist's subordinates are introduced.

At the same time (chapters 52-53), the author also writes about the kingdom of Cili and the port of Nice (I guess the prototype is Venice), and the two sides are at odds.

The Pope braided, and the two groups of people made an appointment, each pushing a representative, and biting each other.

The name of Siritui is Aganting (former deputy head of the White Priesthood), and the name of Nice Port Tui is called Bashi (former second cardinal)

And this battle, which will become a world war in the future, "Dead Sea" and "Crusades to the South" are also related, seeing this, this is connected to the first chapter.

After writing about revenge, at this time, the male protagonist suddenly gave the princess a strong P.,It's quite decisive.,I hate ambiguity the most.,I hope that when the author writes about women in the future.,It's all forced.,Don't mess around with love.,That's the truth.。

As the saying goes, "with boundless rivers and mountains, there are at least 100 lovers".

At the same time, it is also a foreshadowing of the first chapter, and the protagonist fills in by the way, catching a member of Infernal Affairs.

The traitor has been removed, and he began to send troops, because the male protagonist is blind, he stays in the territory, and his father goes out to fight, which is really a cheat

I'm not interested in low-level hand-to-hand combat, and I've read it in ten lines at a glance, but the more the author writes, the more outrageous it becomes, and I can't bear it, I'm going to spray!

Chapters 80-84

Break the speed of sound

The power of the field

Walk with the light

Cock Excalibur

Is your hand shaking, or my titanium alloy dog is blind, this battle has just begun, and all bulls, ghosts, snakes and gods have come out.

I feel that the author is very happy to write, but I also feel that my IQ is being teased, and it is really uncomfortable to read these chapters "with my brain".

Fortunately, the author is lost and knows that if he writes like this, the force system will collapse, so he broke his wrist and held the dick sword, only lived three chapters, and went away from the void.

Hey, it's such a bull B nickname.

In addition, this author always writes nonsense, for example, there is the word "blood clan" in the first chapter, and it is also mentioned once in chapters 14-15, and there is a creature like Yunlong, but then it is gone, God knows, what will become in the end?

By the way, there are not many chapters that the author has changed this time, mainly in the typo part, and some text that has been deleted by the system, recolored with other words, and certain chapters, adding the inner emotional impact of the main and supporting characters.

In addition, I watch the stars at night.,The author should continue to pick it up in a few days.,Friends who forgot the plot.,Just read this chapter.。

About three minutes, don't you remember it all, it's good, a few days later, everyone will see you again.

2018-03-01

The reason why I want to revise the text this time, thank you for being still (the chapter says that the big one) and Tangmen (pointing out the typos in the front, there are really a lot of missing words.) )