Chaos, mustard, stars
Book Friend 20171009110818121 Says:
"This article is very different from the trend...... There is some truth in the emergence of Fengchaowen, but novels are meant to tell stories, and those who practice all day long to upgrade are very boring...... However, there are so many chapters in this book, and there should be a little bit of the approximate degree of the protagonist's force, and there is a benchmark that begins to be associated. This way, when you meet the next boss, you won't feel abrupt. Also, what I don't understand is, how can I help a person who sells wontons and stew with so many words, do you want to develop into a heroine? Go to the country with a fake identity to be a national teacher?
This comment is very powerful, admire!
The things mentioned here are exactly what I have considered.
In fact, there are a lot of wedges left between the lines, but no one may be able to read it slowly and carefully, so let's explain.
Chu Fan has taken an unprecedented path, cultivating immortals scientifically, and everyone will understand when they look at it in the future. Because it is unprecedented, there is a lack of a ready-made frame of reference. It doesn't matter, the force value can be compared.
In his previous life, he was a young scientist, and after he crossed over, he was a young slave, and he was lonely and unheard. Therefore, during the half month after escaping from Lujiabao, the first thing is to settle the gardenia, and then to understand the world and improve the force.
His plan is very clear, as mentioned earlier, the two major dreams of men are to level the world and save the wind and dust. We can think of it as a career, a life. But the ultimate dream of mankind is to achieve immortality.
In this case, his ultimate goal is to cultivate immortals, but he has not yet been able to enter the door.
Living in seclusion in Yangwu, what he practiced was not the martial arts of his past life and present life, but the combination of the two to explore the way to strengthen his body and improve his martial arts.
There are no masters in Yangwu County, so I can't see how powerful he is. But in front of the mountain temple, Yang Qi directly pointed out, at least above the second weight of the copper fetal realm.
When Yangwu rested for half a month, his strength improvement was clearly described three times in the book. The first time I passed by, I just said that it was a higher level. The last two times are full of color, one is "refining qi", and the other is "entering quiet".
There are also two obscure depictions of strength that are easy to ignore.
First, Chu Fan suspected that his spiritual strength was far beyond ordinary people, and the next step would be to explore this aspect and transform it into strength.
I didn't write about the second place at all, it is an extraneous meaning, and you need to understand it yourself.
Think about it, the reason why he dared to be unscrupulous in Yangwu was that in addition to being well-planned and Shi Meng's ability to suppress it, he had definitely considered what to do once the situation was expanded and the master was brought out?
Then he at least thinks that he can run through Qingyun County. Even if a master emerges from an out-of-the-box branch, he is not too afraid, and he can be a litmus test to judge which line his level is.
At present, TV dramas and online novels are becoming more and more foolish, because the audience has low requirements and is unwilling to use their brains. In fact, there are some things that can be quite interesting when you think about it a little. Just like a glass of wine, the way to get drunk in one sip is to get drunk quickly. But if you taste it, it will have a different taste.
It was said that the next big boss is about to surface.
After Chu Fan escaped from Shanyin County, because of the short time and mixed in the bottom of the society, he did not encounter a strong opponent. This will be the first time he will face a life-and-death showdown.
The plot of a good book should be harmonious and self-consistent, so this big boss is not a prop that pops up out of thin air to make Chu Fan upgrade, but an important part of the plot. In the book, I've already laid an ambush several wedges in advance, hahaha.
As for making such a big move for Li Su, it was out of men's appreciation and pity for women, but Li Su's understanding of Chu Fan seemed to be skewed. It will be interesting to see how it develops.
Also, Chu Fan's psychological age is twenty-two, and his actual age after crossing is only fifteen, which belongs to the transition between teenagers and young people, with romantic feelings and ability. Seeing those people bullying Li Su, of course, she had to do it to the extreme, so that she raised her eyebrows.
Teenagers have blood, but teenagers are not utilitarian......
Let's talk about it casually, why Li Su opened a wonton stew shop instead of a dumpling shop. It's because I used to accidentally brand "chaos theory" into "wonton stew theory", ha.
Life must be lived, but life is not life, at least not all.
Please follow Chu Fan's footsteps, you will definitely see something you have never seen before......
The power of the book friend Digital Jun is also that one of the last three problems actually hit the right one. If you meet in the future, you should be a big white!
Another very clever book friend, who doesn't remember the name, discussed with me "Mustard Seed Stars, how to get out of them". I did have this sentence in my initial introduction. Later, I was afraid that everyone would not understand it, so I deleted it, and he still remembered it.
As a reminder, the stars have already appeared, but the mustard seeds will not appear until many chapters apart.
In addition, I have seen the most messages urging me to change.
I'm a little sorry for this.
There is no manuscript for this book, and it is basically written and sent one chapter at a time. In addition, the Spring Festival time is often not able to control itself, so there are really not many updates.
But I will try to add more later.
After that, the first watch was fixed at 12 o'clock at noon.
There may be a second watch at nine o'clock in the evening, and if not, then there will be none.
I just found an interactive management in the background, and it turned out that Edgeworth Riding the Wind in the Sky, Saint Linyuan Envy, Quan Sicheng and other book friends sent a lot of greetings and support. Of course, the most important thing is the problem.
I really don't know how to operate interaction management. If you have any questions in the future, you can post them here.
One is the use of copperware, some book friends mentioned that copper is a heavy metal and poisonous.
In fact, bronze ware has a long history of use in China, and copper bowls and kettles are still used. I didn't think about it so much when I wrote it at the time, I just thought about it, and I didn't ask for verification, and my personal understanding is like this. The surface of copper is very easy to passivate, resulting in the amount of copper penetrating into the human body is not too large, and the liver can be detoxified. Once the dose is overdosed, there is a problem. The same is true for tin pots and aluminum pots used in modern times.
The second is the background of the setting.
There is no such specific era in history, but you can find almost all the shadows of the past, good and bad.
Therefore, big countries compete for hegemony, and there are many small countries, which is very much like the Spring and Autumn Period. But papermaking and printing appeared, not on bamboo slips. "Spring River Flower Moonlight Night" appeared......
There is not much to say about burial and slavery, which is less than a hundred years away.
There is an important setting in the book - the national teacher, which actually existed in Chinese history. Before the fall of the Northern Song Dynasty, Tokyo was besieged, and a birdman was appointed to ask the divine soldiers to fight against the Jin soldiers. Later, of course, there was no later......
And the national teacher in this book is really powerful.
Why did Chu Fan later fight the world, not simply to survive for the world and prove immortality for himself, but because there was a much deeper reason......
One of the most concentrated questions is whether it has passed through fifteen years or fifteen days.
I think you should have seen a lot of this kind of writing, passing through the possession of the dying person. This design is simple, and it has formed a mindset, which is very easy to understand.
But that's not the case with this book.
Chu Fan had already crossed over fifteen years ago, but his memory was sealed and he was alive in a blur. On the verge of death again, memories awaken.
So Chu Fan = Afan, not Chu Fan taking away Afan.
Why do you want to go around like this, it has a lot to do with the whole setting and plot direction.
Please take your time.
Thank you for your support!