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Treasure grabbing

The so-called "treasure robbery mode", this "treasure" may be wealth, or it may be a very powerful weapon or martial arts classics, or it may be a panacea.

Subduing demons, fighting for power, and resisting violence

In addition, there is the "subduing demons" or "fighting for heroes" mode: an evil force in the martial arts rises, repeatedly kills decent people, and has the potential to dominate the rivers and lakes, and the hero protagonist acts as the leader of the alliance and leads the heroes to win the decisive battle with the evil faction. There is also the "anti-riot mode", that is, upholding justice, resisting tyranny, and opposing the abuse of the weak.

Mood change

Duplex suspense, interlocking

, especially the martial arts detective class that is good at stories, must set up and use suspense. However, the level of achievements in the meantime cannot be calculated. Suspense is often used in classical Chinese texts, and it is often used between two episodes or in the middle of a story, which is related to the storyteller's appetite for the audience. Jin Yong's suspense is the usage of modern artists: not only in the middle of the story, but also at the beginning. "Chivalrous Journey" and "Dragon Babu" are all contradictory at the beginning, which is worrying. "Smiling Proud Jianghu" has an extremely tense scene as soon as it comes up: Lin Pingzhi, the young master of the Fuwei Prostitution Bureau, fought with others, and after being forced to kill a Sichuan man surnamed Yu helplessly, that night, people continued to die in the drifting bureau, and one by one the prostitutes were killed, and there was no scar on the body. More than 20 people died in succession. The enemy wrote bloody words on the ground: "Death to those who go ten steps out!" Lin Zhennan, the chief prostitute, dissected the body of the deceased, only to find that the opponent turned out to be a master of the Qingcheng faction, and he used a very powerful "heart-destroying palm": it can shake the heart into many pieces without hurting the appearance of the skin. Lin Zhennan and his wife had to abandon their home and flee in this situation, and were soon arrested by the Qingcheng faction, leaving only the young master Lin Pingzhi to escape after being rescued. In the first chapter, a lot of suspense is presented: What is the reason behind the emergence of such a tragic situation of the Lin family's prostitution situation? What will be the result of Lin Pingzhi's escape? Will he be able to practice martial arts in the future and take revenge on Xue?—— These suspense prompt readers to read on and understand what is going on. In the process of unfolding the story, the original suspense has not yet been completely solved, and the author has created and arranged a series of new suspense: Liu Zhengfeng, a famous master of the Hengshan faction, washed his hands of gold and wanted to get rid of right and wrong on the rivers and lakes, but was resolutely blocked by the Songshan faction and other Wuyue sword factions, and even Liu Zhengfeng's entire family would be killed. In this way, the link is so tightly linked that the reader has to read it nervously. Therefore, being good at setting up suspense is a major feature of Jin Yong's plot. Some works are still in suspense until the end. A reader asked Jin Yong: "Did Hu Fei's knife cut down in "Snow Mountain Flying Fox"?" Jin Yong smiled and said: "Even I don't know." ”

Jin Yong also seems to be particularly good at raising suspense through sudden turns. In "Heaven and Dragon Slayer", Zhang Wuji, Xie Xun and others went through hardships and dangers, and finally returned by ship from overseas, and the situation suddenly changed overnight: the dragon slayer knife and the Yitian sword suddenly disappeared, Zhao Min and the Persian ship were also scattered, and Zhang Wuji and Xie Xun became weak and powerless. This is a sudden and major twist in the plot. Who stole the Dragon Slayer Sword and the Heavenly Sword? What does this matter have to do with Zhao Min or the Persian ship? How did Zhang Wuji and Xie Xun become weak and powerless? From then on, they entered the realm of confusing detectives solving cases, which made people want to stop.

The suspense in Jin Yong's works sometimes exists in the form of "enigma". Enigma, in fact, is also suspense, but sometimes it is already clear, sometimes it is not picked out or realized by the reader. The mysteries in Jin Yong are often multiple: there are dark and bright, big and small, combined with each other, and they are interconnected. Take "Knight's Journey" as an example, it is a big mystery with a small mystery. The poem "Chivalrous Travel" and the atlas of "Taixuan Sutra" on the stone wall of Xia Ke Island contain a set of supreme martial arts, which no one can decipher, which is a big mystery. This mystery gives rise to a sub-mystery: because the owner of the chivalrous island has to send people to punish the evil and persuade the good every year, once a few years to invite the gang leaders of various gangs to the island to drink wax porridge, the people who go are there to go and never return, so it causes panic in the martial arts gangs, everyone is afraid that the gang leader will lose his life, and the Changle Gang will rob a little beggar to be the gang leader in this case. There is also a mystery below: Why did the Changle Gang rob this little beggar to be the gang leader? It turned out that he looked very similar to Shi Zhongyu, the gang leader who had disappeared before. This Shi Zhongyu was originally a playboy, and after he was praised as a helper, he just got what he wanted, hunting women. He had already caused a lot of trouble before his disappearance, and the consequences of it were borne by a little beggar who looked very much like him, and many embarrassing things were done. And this little beggar has his own mystery of life experience, which slowly leads to the love triangle contradictions of Shi Qing and Min Rou when they were young, the love contradictions of Bai Zizi and Shi Po and his wife, and so on. The plot is so complex, but it is like peeling off bamboo shoots layer by layer, and it is very tightly organized and neat. Until the end, it is a semi-open ending: due to the suicide of the little beggar's adoptive mother Mei Fanggu, the mystery is clear, but the author does not stand up to solve it.

The plot composition of "Dragon Babu" is similar but different. The three protagonists here have three mysteries of their life experiences. They are three rings that form a set of three rings with each other. Duan Yu's father, Duan Zhengchun, showed mercy everywhere, so that Duan Yu met several girls he liked one after another, and later found out that they were all his sisters, which is a big mystery. Among them, there are some small mysteries, such as Duan Zhengchun's wife Dao Baifeng had a relationship with Duan Yanqing in anger in order to take revenge on her husband, which solved the mystery of Duan Yu's life experience. The mystery of Qiao Feng's life experience and the tragic ending brought about by it are the most moving, containing many social contents during the period when the contradictions between Song and Liao were sharp. It is through the marriage between Duan Yu and Qiao Feng, the relationship between Duan Yu's half-sister Ah Zhu, Ah Zi and Qiao Feng, especially through the relationship between Duan Zhengchun and Mrs. Ma Kang Min, and it is connected with the previous big mystery, and it itself contains a number of smaller mysteries such as Ah Zhu and Ah Zi. The third big mystery Xuzhu's life experience is revealed through the gradual unraveling of the mystery of his sworn brother Qiao Feng, the perverted character of Ye Erniang, who is called "doing no evil", and why Xuzhu was born as a monk was only explained at this time; In this way, the structure of the whole book, which seems to be a bit scattered at first, feels that it is quite compact when I look back on it later, and it does reflect a relatively deep and rich ideological connotation, which is really the so-called "all sentient beings are evil, and no one is unjust" (4). One can have such a complex plot structure, which may really be an excellent creation that only Jin Yong can achieve, which is difficult for other martial artists to do.

Often some authors are very entangled with me: "The editor is big, I can't write ambiguity, I can't write H, is it because of this reason that my essay is pounced?"

Often some authors, seeing that other works are subscribed to high grades and getting better and better, say with envy and hatred: "He became popular because of writing Huang." ”

But, dear authors, is it true that only pornography, vulgarity, and ambiguity can make your work successful?

In fact, online literature is the same as other commercial entertainment behaviors, the first thing is to attract attention, and the second thing is to buy it. However, looking at all the business activities, it is not necessarily eye-catching, and users buy it (for example, we download some ***** on the Internet). Just like the various big waves of Shogirls before the domestic game on Cj, it always attracts countless onlookers, but the final ending is still bleak.

Commercial entertainment behavior, how to want users to be willing to pay for it while feasting their eyes, depends on their own content and continuous coolness. Therefore, this article will talk about the cool points of business online articles from the perspective of an editor, and guide some writers who have gone astray.

Before saying the word "cool", let's list the things that human nature needs: money, power, sex, respect of others, desire for social recognition, and so on. These, because they are based on normal human desires, can easily resonate with readers when they are extracted. And among these desires, sex is undoubtedly the simplest, and it is also the easiest way to trigger the reader's fantasy.

However, if you only base the cool point on sex, it is undoubtedly shallow and cannot produce sustainability. Of course, it is precisely because of its shallowness that it blinds the eyes of many authors.

The so-called cool point is actually a resonance based on human nature. As long as it is something that can resonate, it can be called a cool point, and it is precisely because of this resonance that we see that the blood is simmering, the angry youth is simmering, and the rebirth is simmering. It can be said that when you are in your work, as long as it can resonate with readers, your writing will have enough cool points.

Therefore, we often tell the author, don't slow down, don't drag the plot, etc., all of which we hope that the author can resonate with readers in the work as soon as possible.

Some writers may say, life is varied, who knows if what I write can resonate with readers? In this case, it is better to choose the commonality of all people, start with sex, and write yellow essays at least to earn eyeballs.

However, after earning eyeballs, can you earn a lot of money? Is it contrary to your original intention of trying to find a way out in the business network?

In this case, how do you create cool points to inspire resonance, and how to make your cool points sustainable and rhythmically displayed to readers?

It's very simple, life, experience, every inconspicuous little thing around you can become a source of coolness.

I got up early to eat breakfast, and when I met the chengguan pushing the hawkers, I pretended to be forced. This is the cool point, which is based on the reader's dissatisfaction with reality.

Surfing the Internet at noon, I was added QQ by a MM. This is also a cool point, which is based on the reader's expectations of sexual encounters.

Playing games at night, I accidentally played a superb equipment. This is still a cool point, which is based on the reader's yearning for windfalls.

Going bigger, the upgrade of the fantasy text and the treasure hunting of the Xianxia text are all based on the reader's resonance for personal heroism. When we discover the essence of cool points and then resonance, we will find that we are all ordinary people, and what we have experienced is actually similar to what all readers have experienced. We have had youth, blood, and pure love and fearless moments, so it is cool to show readers what we think and expect in our hearts.

I have ten to say:

One is called YY

Second, imagination

Three stories

Fourth, the characters

Fifth, knowledge

Sixth, it is said that the writing is written

Seven said experience (the reflection of the flow of world affairs and human feelings)

Eight said style

Nine said structure

Ten thoughts

These 10 standards are like a scale

If you score more than 3 high scores, you can stand out in the online article

More than 6 high scores are the top works in online articles

All high scores, people who can write such books can be called great masters and are on a par with Jin Yong

Moreover, the lower the riba, the more the score is focused on the previous ones

The more sunny and snowy it is, the more the score focuses on the next few items

I would like to start by asking you what you are writing for

A: Write a satisfactory piece and write it for the people you like.

B: Be famous, publish, make money.

C: It's written to play, it's best if you can make money, and it doesn't matter if you can't make money

I have three words for you for the author who chose A

1. Perseverance

2. Persistence

3. Indifferent

A: Write a satisfactory piece and write it for the people you like.

This choice is the most difficult way, because you want to be satisfied with yourself, others may not be satisfied, and writing it to people you like will limit your readership

Therefore, the person who chooses A must have a good mentality, and your readership group is chosen by yourself, and you also need to exchange it with your own efforts.

And because this option is more idealistic, it is very, very important to stick to it

If you choose this, you must remember, steady, persistent, indifferent, that's all.

The person who chooses B

Very utilitarian,

But in this society, it is good to have a utilitarian mind

But those who are utilitarian are easily deceived,

I don't know if you feel it, or if you ask yourself: why do I have so few click-to-recommend collections?

This feeling and this question is that utilitarianism is influencing you

And this kind of utilitarianism will make us find bottlenecks

1. Creative bottlenecks

2. I found that I didn't get good results when I clicked on the recommendation

3. I often can't write halfway through writing, and my mood is confused

4. The author doesn't know how to continue the plot that follows

5. The author suddenly loses his passion for creation

Therefore, for the author of Pick 2, I send him six words: Don't worry, basic, read more

Many authors aim to become famous, publish, and make money, but in today's online literature, there are more monks and less porridge

There is only one person who really succeeds in becoming famous and profiting

Today, I looked at the starting point collection list, the total number of books [486486] signed works [5500] 11.3‰ of the odds, of which more than 15000 collected works, there are 1068, close to 20%, calculated to write the Internet can make money, is a 2 in 1,000 chance. 15000 collection of works,Basically, the level of a monthly salary of more than 1500,Although there are more earnings below this number,But after all, it is a minority,15,000 Collections also have no money.,It's almost offset.

Of course, everyone who writes has a literary dream, and not everyone writes for money. But the original intention is to make money for the authors who write, especially the newcomers who think that they can make money as long as they write, and the students who are still studying, seeing the two-thousandth chance of success, may have to change their mentality, not everyone may get a million remuneration, this proportion is at least two in 10,000...

And most of the authors do not have a solid foundation, which leads to their expectations being too high, and when they encounter setbacks, they have some bad psychology

I think, how many people here know the conditions for traditional Chinese publishing in Taiwan?

Published in Taiwan, 5 per 10,000 typos, no punctuation logical errors, 65,000 words per book, about 10 to 15 chapters, each book must have a high and low and a small ending,

Think about it, how many of you who know about Taiwan's publishing requirements have really done?

And these, just the basic things, there are many people, three thousand words in a chapter, at least a dozen or twenty typos

Therefore, those who choose the second point must continue to change themselves according to the requirements of the market

Because our goal is to become famous and make money, we will not give up any blow