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Nalan Yanran squirmed her mouth, although she was so angry by Xiao Yan's evaluation of her that she was so angry, but she couldn't argue, what Xiao Yan said was indeed the truth, no matter how wasteful he was now, when he became a fighter at the age of twelve, it was true, and Nalan Yanran at that time was only an eight-stage fighter...
"Miss Nalan, for the sake of the old man Nalan, Xiao Yan advises you a few words, thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully the young man to be poor!" Xiao Yan said coldly, making De Nalan Yanran's delicate body tremble slightly.
"Okay, don't bully the poor boy! My son Xiao Zhan is extraordinary!" On the first place, Xiao Zhan's eyes lit up, his palms slammed on the table, splashing tea and spilling it.
Here, is the first climax of the book, the seventh chapter appears, about 20,000 words!
Again, the climax is not a fight, but the culmination of the contradiction, or the resolution of the contradiction!
Xiao Yan's words are bloody, every sentence is heroic, has the contradiction reached its peak?
The phrase "don't bully the poor youth" directly expresses the hearts of all men, and it is this sentence that lays the foundation for potatoes to become great gods and to break through the sky to become a divine book.
It is also here that the big contradiction of the million words before the break is brought out, and the direction of the entire plot is guided.
At this point, it can be said that the plot of one million words before breaking the sky has been set, and the ending is already doomed.
After the plot was officially introduced, until the battle of Yunlan Sect, the whole was divided into three lines.
The first one is the old medicine line.
The second is the family line
The third is the Yunlan Sect Line.
The following is said separately.
The first medicine line is the partner + exercise + skill line, which can also be said to be the most important line in the entire Dou Po, through this line, it leads to some ancient families such as incineration, different fires, and even the Soul Palace, which runs through the whole book.
Therefore, we can see that after Nalan and Ge Ye and others left, and the protagonist began to prepare for the three-year covenant, the first thing was to draw out this line.
Moreover, there is another advantage to this, after the outbreak of the first big contradiction, when the reader is still reminiscing about the protagonist's enthusiasm and the sentence "Don't bully the poor boy", he immediately shows the protagonist's skills, which directly makes the reader go from one climax to another, being smashed to the ground, and at the same time full of infinite expectations.
It can be said that from this time on, readers have begun to officially look forward to the battle three years later, 30,000 words, guide readers to wait for 1 million words, this is the mass grave dug by potatoes, waiting for everyone to jump!
Under this line, it is subdivided into the old medicine line, the different fire (incineration) line, and the medicine practice (deputy position) line.
After the three-year covenant is confirmed, in order to pave the way for the final climax, the protagonist must obtain enough strength, and the entire Yao Lao line, including the three subordinate lines, all serve to improve the protagonist's strength.
Whether it is Yao Lao helping the protagonist, or harvesting different fires, including alchemy, it is all to improve the strength of the protagonist and prepare for the protagonist to become a strong man to defeat Nalan, in fact, in many places later, we can see the plot pulled out by this line, there are too many of these examples, I won't list them one by one, and you will naturally understand after reading Dou Po.
The second family line is partner + harem + power line.
This line is divided into three routes: Xiao Xun'er, Yafei, and Family.
First of all, Xiao Xun'er, needless to say, as the heroine, she has had a role since the first chapter, and the family behind her has guided the big plot in the middle and late stages of the book, and in the early stage, she herself also provided great help to Xiao Yan, directly guiding the direction of the plot, including a lot of pretending plots, which also happened to her. Because of her excellence, it brings out the extraordinaryness of the protagonist, and an excellent person is willing to stay by the protagonist's side, which in itself shows the excellence of the protagonist.
Speaking of the Yafei line, this is also a very important woman, in order to achieve the success of the Yunlan Sect's battle, in addition to the necessary strength, it also needs strong financial resources and power, and Yafei plays this role.
Whether it was the business cooperation with Xiao Yan in the early days, helping Xiao Yan accumulate financial resources, and even meeting Hai Bodong later, and meeting Queen Medusa through Hai Dongbo, and then through Concubine Ya and Hai Bodong's Mitre family, he got acquainted with the high-level and top masters of the Gama Empire, making it the support behind it, in fact, when the Yunlan Sect was fighting, there was a Douhuang Hai Bodong standing next to him to suppress Xiao Yan's formation, and when the Yunlan Sect was exterminated, there was the shadow of the royal family of the Gama Empire behind him.
That's why I've always said that when writing about women, don't write them as vases, any woman who appears, you must guide the development of the plot, so that you can write women vividly, instead of moving a woman to the protagonist, such a paper character is no longer pleasing.
Then let's talk about the family line.
The whole fight breaks through the sky, the bright line is the protagonist standing at the peak of the continent, and the dark line behind it is the protagonist's family, so this is also an important line, which has existed since the first chapter and runs throughout.
Therefore, we can see that the initial small contradictions started from within the Xiao family, starting from the ridicule of the protagonist by Xiao Yu and several other genius children, including the later relying on the family to enter Canaan Academy, all of which were plots led by the family, and Xiao Zhan, Xiao Ding, and Xiao Li, who were extremely important to Xiao Yan, were also important factors in guiding his behavior. Everyone knows that when Xiao Ding and Xiao Li were injured and Xiao Zhan disappeared, Xiao Yan didn't care about anything, and the rationality of the plot that happened like this was also guaranteed, but it seemed very hot-blooded.
The third Yunlan sect line is the harem + contradiction + BOSS line.
And under this line, it is subdivided into three lines: Nalan, Yunyun, and Gama Empire.
Speaking of Yunlanzong, the first thing to bear the brunt of is Nalan, it was she who led out the plot of the first million words, creating the first stage of the big contradiction and climax, it can be said that without this character and the plot of repentance, the whole Dou Po would have lost at least half of its color.
If the protagonist wants to grow, he can't just pretend to be forced and kill one enemy after another, he must set up a lot of geniuses around the protagonist and become the protagonist's long-term enemy, so as to constantly cause trouble for the protagonist, and use this to contrast the protagonist "more genius than genius".
To put it simply, defeating a mentally retarded protagonist is also mentally retarded, and defeating a genius protagonist is awesome.
And the line of Yunyun can also be said to be handled exquisitely, many novices always go very extreme when creating contradictions, the wicked are all wicked, and the evil is in the clear, so the word "wicked" is written on the face.
And Tudou was very smart when dealing with this role, which made Yun Yun and Xiao Yan have an ambiguous affair, on the one hand, they were opposed, and on the other hand, they were entangled, and the love and hatred in the middle gave birth to countless highlights.
I have always said that the plot should have conflict, what is conflict, this entanglement is conflict, last time I gave the example of the book sword enmity and enmity, Chen Jialuo and Kangxi, it is also this kind of entanglement, on the one hand, the emperor of the Qing Dynasty is the leader of the anti-Qing Dynasty, on the one hand, he likes a woman at the same time, on the other hand, he is a brother, so a completely opposite hedge, it produces a highlight, and in the fight to break the sky, the potato also used this trick very cleverly.
The above two women guided the early plot, and at the same time, it also led to the first stage of the general boss Yunshan, and in the handling of the ending, the potato is also very ingenious, deliberately leaving a defect, neither of them died, but they temporarily left the protagonist, tickling the reader's heart, speaking of pit people, potato is definitely a top master.
The Gamma Empire line is actually led by many branches, including the Canaan Academy, including the Nalan family, which is the nobles of the Gamma Empire, including the Mitre family.
In dealing with the big contradiction with the Yunlan Sect in the early stage, Tudou is determined to kill them all, and to eradicate such a big tree, the great force of the Gama Empire is indispensable, but his cleverness lies in the fact that he did not write how the protagonist climbs, but through countless foreshadowing, including knowing Concubine Ya, knowing Hai Bodong, including entering Canaan Academy, he subtly achieved this goal.
In the middle, the reader does not feel the slightest abruptness, everything develops logically, and in the end, he accepts the result with such peace of mind.
The reason for all this is that so many of the above lines do not exist alone, but are interspersed with each other, but they have a strict causal relationship with each other.
Because of the three-year covenant, the protagonist has to look for a different fire, and because he is looking for a different fire, he knows Hai Bodong, and everything is interspersed like a chain.
So, to sum up how to navigate the plot!
First, find the result (climax)
Second, set the beginning (the birth of contradictions)
Third, divide the middle plot into three lines, and choose from elements such as skills, exercises, potions, harems, and forces.
Fourth, each line is divided into three components.
Fifth, set key points to intersperse and organically combine the plot.
and the thirty-six classic plot modes of drama
class
Main characters
Other necessary characters
Breakdown
1. Appeal
Supplicants
Persecutors
A: (1) Help him deal with the enemy
(2) Permit him to do something that he is supposed to do but is forbidden to do
(3) Give him a place where he can live his whole life
B: (1) A person who has been in trouble by the boat and asks for help
(2) Misbehaving, being banished by one's own people and asking for mercy from others
(3) Pray for forgiveness
(4) Request for collection of burial bones and retrieval of relics
C: (1) Intercede for your loved ones
(2) Interceding for another relative in front of a relative
(3) Intercede for your mother in front of her lover
2. Rescue
Unfortunate people
1 rescuer
2 days to send a savior
A: (1) Rescue a person who is considered guilty
B: (1) Children assist parents
(2) Those who have received favors repay their kindness and are not saved
3. Revenge
avenger
Evildoers
A: (1) Revenge for the murdered ancestors or parents
(2) Revenge for the murdered children or descendants
(3) Revenge for the murdered wife or husband
(4) Revenge for the insulted children
(5) Revenge for the insult (or almost insult) of the wife
(6) Revenge for the victim's mistress
(7) Revenge for the killing or damage of a friend
(8) Revenge for the rape of a sister
B: (1) In order to do the right thing with the intention of intention, deliberately embarrass and take revenge
(2) In order to take advantage of the absence of people, secretly seize and take revenge
(3) Revenge for deliberate murder
(4) Revenge for sin
(5) Revenge for rape
(6) Revenge for the sake of taking everything
(7) Vengeance against the whole group for the treachery of one or two people
C: (1) The occupation of the pursuit of the guilty
4. Flesh and blood recovery
avenger
Evildoers
A: (1) The father's death is revenge on the mother
(2) The death of the mother, the revenge is on the father
B: (1) The death of a brother is avenged on the son
C: (1) The father's death is revenge on the husband
D: (1) The death of the husband is revenge on the father
5. Fugitives
Fugitives
The forces that hunt down or punish
A: (1) Violating the law (sometimes as a last resort) or fleeing due to other political acts
B: (1) Running away because of the fault of love
C: (1) The hero's struggle against this great power
D: (1) The struggle of semi-crazy people against the rectification of the conspiracy
6. Calamity
Woe to the victims
Victorious people
A: (1) Defeated
(2) Death of the country
(3) The demise of humanity
(4) Natural disasters
B: (1) The throne was taken away
C: (1) The ingratitude of others
(2) Unfair punishment or hostility
(3) Encountering rebellion and atrocity
D: (1) Abandoned by a lover or husband
(2) Loss of children
7. Unfortunate
Unfortunate people
Constraints
A: (1) Innocent people, sacrificed by the conspiracy of the ambitious
B: (1) Innocent people are harmed for the sake of those who are supposed to protect him
C: (1) Capable people, powerful people in the midst of poverty and poverty
(2) A person who has always been favored, or who has always been affectionate, finds that he is forgotten at the moment
D: (1) Lost the only hope
8. Revolution
revolutionary
Atrocities
A: (1) A person's rebellion
(2) The rebellion of many people
B: (1) One man's revolution has affected many people
(2) The revolution of many
9. Feats
Courageous leaders
enemy
A: (1) Prepare for battle
B: (1) War
(2) Fighting
C: (1) Snatch an object or person you want
(2) Take back the objects and people you want
D: (1) Adventurous expeditions
(2) Take risks to get your loved ones back
10. Kidnapping
Abductees
1 kidnapper
2. Protector of the kidnapped
A: (1) Kidnapping a woman who does not want to be submissive
B: (1) Kidnap the obedient woman
C: (1) Recapture the kidnapped woman, but not kill the kidnapper
(2) Take back the tied woman, but kill the atrocity at the same time
D: (1) Rescue the kidnapped friend
(2) Rescue a kidnapped child
(3) Rescue a person who has a false faith
11. Interpretation
Explainer
enigma
A: (1) Someone must be found, otherwise he will be put to death
B: (1) The riddle must be explained, otherwise disaster will occur
(2) Ibid., but the mystery was made by the woman he loved
C: (1) Offer a bounty to find the person's name
(2) Offering a bounty to find out the gender of the person
(3) Test whether a person is crazy or not
12. Demand
Seekers
1. Refusal
2 judges
A: (1) Use force or deception to obtain targets
B: (1) Use clever words to get the goal
C: (1) Move the judge with words
13. Hatred of flesh and blood
Haters
1 The hated
2. Those who hate each other
A: (1) One brother is the envy of everyone
(2) Brothers hate each other
(3) For the sake of self-interest, relatives hate each other
B: (1) The Son hates the Father
(2) The Father and the Son hate each other
(3) The woman hates her father
C: (1) Ancestors hate Sun
D: (1) The father-in-law hates his son-in-law
E: (1) The mother-in-law hates her daughter-in-law
F: (1) Infant killing