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I had a good chat with my family today, and I went back and read all the recent book reviews, and finally made this decision: stop changing first, and plan to go to the hospital for a full body examination in the near future.
Objectively speaking, this book is not popular, but it will not hit the streets.
At present, the average order of two thousand five, the normal situation is five or six thousand, and the average order has always maintained a little slow upward trend every day, if you can adhere to the 22nd big seal push, it is very stable to enter the boutique, which is good in the context of the overall malaise of fantasy.
This book has not been written.,Whether it's the power setting.γThe character setting.,Or the world system.,I think it's always stable.,There are many foreshadowing lines and points that can be cut into.,Among them, there are not a few plots that can be written.,There is no situation where Jiang Lang can't write from the story itself.γ
Personally, I really like this story.
Although this book does not earn as much as the manuscript fee of the old book, the amount of updates and time are far more than the old book, so it will make such a decision, and it has nothing to do with the grades, content, likes and dislikes, so I must apologize to every reader here, and I also hope to write it properly to the end, because once you give up all the effort and hard work, it will be gone.
But the ultimate fuse is still the body.
Insomnia, severe insomnia, I have slept less than a few months in the past two days, and I have slept for less than six hours in the last two days. Every day, I feel as if something is blocked in my chest, and my heart is very uncomfortable.
Sometimes this happens when I stay up all night, but recently it hasn't been good for several days in a row, I'm worried that something will go wrong, I'm not even twenty-four years old, and my family has been worried about me lately, so I really need to pay attention to it.
This book is planned to be pushed on the twenty-second starting point.
But later this month, due to the old book, there were several business trips, so the time was very tight.
I negotiated with the editor and confessed the situation in all aspects, and it was indeed impossible to guarantee stable updates before and after the closure, and the editor withdrew the book after my consent.
I don't want to write too many sensational words to prove how difficult it is to prove myself.
If it doesn't work, it won't work, if you can't bear it, you can't bear it, and if you retreat, you can't retreat.
Accept all criticism.
A few days ago, I just posted a million-word testimonial, which was meant to cheer myself up, but it doesn't seem to be very ideal...... Finally, I would like to share some of my feelings about writing this book.
The saddest thing about this book is not that it can't be popular, but that as the process of creation, some places are more and more deviating from my original intention, and I know that there are many fellow authors who are watching the Immortal Demon Daqin, so I hope my next feelings can bring you some help.
Diao Chan is positioned as the first heroine in this book, but she has become the worst character who has been sprayed.
It's just because Diao Chan appears as an assassin and thinks that the protagonist is a faint king in the early days, so he is hated by many people, and the current mainstream readers' tolerance for female characters is so low that I really didn't expect it before.
Because the characters weren't likable, I had to cut out some of the plots that created the characters. This also leads to the fact that the characters are not flesh and blood enough. I don't know if this book can write about her and the protagonist to the end, it's really a pity, and the part of the crescent moon spring is an explanation for my character from the author's point of view.
It's not just female character blunders.
I overestimate the limits of what readers can tolerate today.
My original intention was to write every supporting character with flesh and blood, even the villain should have his spiritual core and behavioral motivation, and there should be ups and downs in love and hate, and there should be a process of climbing to the top and then falling, rather than being guessed as soon as it comes out.
Therefore, whether it is Liu Bang or Xiang Yu, I originally planned that both of them had their own peaks, Xiang Yu was before and after Pengcheng, and Liu Bang would almost recognize the protagonist and almost counterattack before defeating Xiang Yu, and finally was defeated by the protagonist.
Xiang Yu's emotional line is undoubtedly on Yu Ji.
And Liu Bang will later portray the interaction with Lu Pheasant.
Everyone should not be the same, they should have their own growth, emotions or characteristics.
Judging from the more than 20 chapters that have been sprayed, readers can't accept that even if they are temporarily suppressed, if every opponent in the back is as dangerous and difficult as dealing with Zhao Gao, they will definitely be sprayed to death, and Xiaoyu has to compromise.
Since defeating Zhao Gao, the road has basically been smooth, and Liu Bang and Xiang Yu have indeed been deliberately weakened, which looks really cool, but it is not quite in line with the original intention of shaping the role.
I was also bothered by the setting of the world.
Xiaoyu's original intention was to depict an imaginary fantasy empire that spanned the world, but it was only after writing that I realized that the plot outside of Huaxia was not very attractive to readers, and I had a lot of brains and ideas that had nowhere to go.
The solution I came up with was to promote the plot on multiple lines, insert tasks into the plot of the Central Plains, go to Tibet and Hexi, in order to adapt the reader to the world view and prepare for the full-scale development of the book in the middle and later stages, but every time I write to these places, the subscription will decline significantly, and as soon as I return to the Central Plains, it will immediately rise.
In the middle and late stages of the book, almost two-thirds of the content is in foreign lands.
But now it seems that the main line of conquering the world is not as attractive as imagined!
The setting of Goldfinger is also one of the most controversial places, and I didn't deliberately add the balance element, but I did think about writing a temporary confrontation between individual historical characters and the protagonist, in order to write a more exciting story.
Because some characters are under the command of the protagonist, there is actually no way to fully exert the light and heat, from the perspective of character building, it is very helpful to be temporarily neutral or even antagonistic, and it can also make the plot of the whole book more brilliant, but from the perspective of reader feedback, 90% of book friends are the most unacceptable to this setting.
A reader once told me that if Xiaoyu changed the beginning and wrote it in a cool text routine, the subscription to this book would at least double.
Noncommittal.
I rely on literature for a living, and I have to consider the market, but I also hope to write something different within the scope of my ability, mix more private goods and sincerity into the routine, and write both storytelling and commerciality.
I don't think this defeat was a mistake in my thinking, in the final analysis, it was my lack of cultivation and lack of heat, and this book is destined to be a regret in my creative career.
Now, I can no longer ignore the feelings of my family and friends, nor can I completely ignore the protests of my body. I will recuperate for a while from today, and I have thought about ending the Central Plains War quickly and ending it at the defeat of Chu Han and the restoration of Great Qin, but I carefully believe that it is better to put it on hold than to end it hastily.
I'm not sure if I can come back and pick it up, because in the case of non-gods, once the network stops, the popularity will quickly disappear, but if possible, Xiaoyu is still as unsupervised as possible, and I apologize again to all of you who have subscribed: But Xiaoyu must leave for a while!