At noon, I turned on my phone and found a new book review. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

@业余围观书友对于本书提出了很中肯的意见

Immediately, I went home and turned on my computer and started reading the first chapter.

I don't know if I don't read it, and when I look at it, I am shocked into a cold sweat.

Typos are flying all over the place, and even the protagonist's name is actually typosed throughout. It's embarrassing.

In terms of plot arrangement, because the outline I set is only to set the politics, race, origin, geography and the main "expansion pieces" of the entire otherworldly continent, for the "branches and leaves", there are relatively few preparations in advance, so there are loopholes in the plot, and there are even inconsistencies.

Now there are two recommended slots on the fantasy channel, and through an afternoon of reading my own works, I feel very sorry for these two recommended resources.

Shame again~~~

I suddenly realized that writing online articles is not as simple as I imagined.

From the beginning of writing, to now, looking at it in the background, the data of this book is not good, and it can even be said to be very bad.

But Panda has always been in the spirit of:Recommendation votes can be without.,Anyway, I'm okay to vote for myself;It doesn't matter if you don't have a collection.,Anyway, I'm updated less;It's okay to click on it.,Anyway, there are few people on the fantasy channel;It doesn't matter if the recommendation is good or bad.,Anyway, the results of the recommended position won't get better now;But,The content itself is written,Whether it's plot or logic,Not to mention excellent,But at least it's passable.。

Therefore, the pursuit of data is not high.

Looking at it now, the previous chapters, the standard of "at least passable", seems so far away.

If you are sick, you must be cured.

In the near future, Panda will start with the first chapter, with changes to the text and several bugs.

In addition, if you have any comments and suggestions when reading this book, please do not hesitate to give advice.

Thanks again to @ amateur onlookers.