First of all, I would like to thank you all for your continued support and for accompanying me to finish this book while I am so immature.

As for whether the finish is good or not, I still have a bit of a B number in my heart. . .

Then I would like to thank the editor for his recommendations to this book, thank Bohan for signing the book, and thank Vinnie for his unsparing support of this book.

For a new author who signed a contract for the first time, even if I don't understand it, I understand that the recommended positions I got are already very good.

After thanking myself, I summarized some of the shortcomings of this book, or the shortcomings of the author.

I'm sure you can see it.

In this book of biological alchemy, I have mixed in a lot of hodgepodge content.

There are reasons why I experimented with many ways of writing, but it also made the book not pure enough, and a lot of the content was overwhelmed.

And some of the content seems to be rich and colorful, but it fails to grasp a degree, the detail is not deep enough, and the conciseness is too procrastinating.

Secondly, the writing is highly emotional, that is, the mood is strange when writing, and I can't adjust a way to get into the state quickly.

The mood is good and the motivation is strong, and the mood is not good, and the lazy is boneless.

And the root problem of this book is that there is no perfect outline, not a few paragraphs, but from the main line to the background, from the world view to the main characters, from the layer-by-layer story shaping to the full plot of all aspects.

This should be a tree-shaped diagram that outlines the main stem and the veins of the branches and leaves throughout the book.

I'm ashamed to say that this book has been in a state of no outline since the middle of the year, and the depth of the plot is completely dependent on me to edit it in the evening before I write it!

This leads to a lot of very abrupt plots, or a lot of plot transitions that are too fast.

Because I want full attendance, for this book, I can't abandon full attendance, so many times in order to ensure that the update is enough numbers, the plot will be suddenly changed, which greatly affects the coherence of the whole book.

Because there is no outline of the overall situation, some plots will even be forgotten, including some creatures that should be heavyweights in the book.

Of course, this can also be boiled down to the drawbacks of insufficient main lines and outlines.

This also leads me to my most serious problem – laziness!

Indeed, the preparation before the book is extremely important, especially for a novice like me who has no experience and readership.

Is there really no way to remedy it?

Not really.

I've been saying I'm busy, busy.

This is true, I am a construction designer, specializing in steel structure envelope system, such as metal roofing and curtain wall, working overtime all year round, a plan changed dozens of times, the leader let the change have to change, Party A let the change have to change, the design institute let the change have to change, the owner let the change have to change, it is my kind of hard work.

But being busy is no excuse!

In fact, squeeze it, there will still be time, but in most cases, because I want to rest, I waste it on games, lazy sleep, film and television, and only a limited part of the time is used to think about improving the content, and occasionally think of the next part of the continuous link and immediately slack off.

Phew, shame on you!

The progress of this book is too fast, on the one hand, it is inexperienced, it does not grasp a degree, many plots are not enriched, and the big plot is over-foreshadowed and insufficient.

Among them, the lack of in-depth description of the characters, the portrayal is not sharp enough, and the flesh and blood are not enough, which is also a major failure of this book.

The first dozens of the most criticized by many book friends are said to have made many Shennong's lives return to Huangquan~

Of course I've noticed this...

But I'm just making a small change to the front, not because I don't want to make a big change, but because it involves too much energy, and I don't have such a luxurious rich time.

Just leave a wake-up call for me in the future!

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After summarizing a lot of deficiencies, I also boasted a little, lest I lose my confidence by myself.

In a serious state where the rest is guaranteed, the author is still a little confident in his control of words.

I believe that I can do it whether it is in the shaping of the horror plot, or the necessary realistic substitution, or the rendering of the atmosphere such as funny and serious!

It would be a shame to boast that I am an all-rounder, but I am confident that I can make great progress by making up for my shortcomings again and again, and finally form my own writing style!

I also hope that everyone can continue to support me in the future, and I am still worth looking forward to.

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By the way, let's talk about the content of the final chapter.

At the end of the ending, a young man and a middle-aged man appear.

Young people are naturally a fate clone of the protagonists, and the world they live in is obviously not the universe where the protagonist Wu Wei is located, otherwise the protagonist would not be able to be a private detective.

And the middle-aged man is actually not the creator of the system, but the existence behind the main god, and the props that are "amused" are the "main god" and not the system.

After all, if you are the creator of the system, you don't need to go to a parallel world or a plot world to find the protagonist, just go directly to the universe where the protagonist is located, and the system is not stupid, but torn apart.

As for the system creator, uh, just as Wu Wei speculated, he has already burped!

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"Biological Alchemy Notes" is actually a product of patting the head, and when the signing of "Return to the Terran" was hopeless, two chapters were directly sent out, and I didn't think I could sign the contract at that time, which is also a big reason why the preparation is so insufficient.

As for "Return to the Terrans", I probably won't continue to write it directly, after all, the book has been broken for more than half a year, and the signing potential is exhausted, even if I want to write it, I will delete it and resend it later.