Just finished the content of a big chapter.,There are only the last two plot points left in the second volume.。 Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 infoRecently, I have read a lot of feedback from readers, so I would like to give you some feedback.

First of all, I would like to thank Meat Bun Sun, ace talents, and pioneers for their continued support and feedback.

This book is my first book, and there are many things that can be left to be desired in terms of experience, and I hope to learn, reflect and summarize some experiences through this book, and the feedback from you in the process is important. First of all, to answer the question that Meat Bun Da pointed out in the previous volume, which may also represent the feeling of most readers. In fact, the style of each big chapter is different.,In the plot design,The strength of the protagonist's opponent has changed.,In order to avoid the situation of crushing all the way in the previous volume,I tried to add some light-hearted and funny plots.,But in terms of spoof and plot control,I'm not handling it well at this stage.,It's my responsibility.,And I felt it myself when I wrote a big chapter of the plot.,After that, I'll try to separate the funny and the plot of the main drama to avoid confusion.。

The second is the design of the villain. In the process of designing villains, I generally set up two kinds of characters, one villain is the villain on the position, that is to say, just for some reason, temporarily because of the different positions, it will be hostile to the protagonist, but in the case of the same position in the future, it may also become the protagonist's help. For the treatment of this kind of character, I don't want readers to be disgusted with this character, so I also designed some funny plots similar to lowering IQ, generally the characters with this kind of plot are less important villains; 。 The above is what I want to explain to you in terms of characters, and if you have comments, you are welcome to point them out, and I will read the comments at any time.

In addition, I will think more about the creation of the protagonist in the future. Previously, because too much consideration was given to the integrity of a supporting character, the performance of the protagonist was also weakened to a large extent, and this should be improved in later chapters.

As the first new book,There are a lot of places that need to be tried and explored.,I'm not sure about it myself.,Sometimes it's inevitable that the plot design goes wrong.,It's my responsibility.,I'm sorry if it affects your book-reading experience.,If you think there's something wrong with that plot or that aspect, you can also leave a message at the end of the chapter.,I'll basically read it every day.。

In addition, I can only guarantee stable updates and no rotten ending, no TJ, please rest assured that this book will at least finish a story from beginning to end.

Thank you again for your support.