Chapter 16, the thorn is not exciting, and it is not unexpected
The beginning is really hard to write, and I can't think of any good beginning when the wind scars brain cells are dead. (I'm dying of all my brain cells.)
Ordinary normal beginning, although there is nothing wrong, but there is no such eye-catching feeling.
A good beginning is a good story, the beginning is all spicy chicken, and there is no need to say much later. However, there are also a small number of spicy chicken at the beginning, and really good-looking novels at the back, but this is too few to represent most of the situation.
Suddenly, Wind Scar has an idea, and the style of his novel is decisive and decisive, so you can make a plot according to this style at the beginning.
The protagonist is a freshman at XX University.,The name is Wind Scar - this Wind Scar is also very helpless.,Spend countless brain cells still can't think of what to call it.,Under the flicker of the spicy chicken system, it's directly named Wind Scar.。
Anyway, he thinks the word wind mark is quite good - his own name, can it be bad!
The protagonist's name is not as important as the title of the book, as long as it is passable.
Wind marks continue to tap on the WPS, and the text action is on!
"Chapter 1, the bloody sky.
On November 1, 2017, at five o'clock in the afternoon, the end broke out.
The sky turned blood-colored, countless black holes appeared in the sky, and in the panic of the people, various creatures appeared in the black holes. There are mosquitoes that are several meters long, cockroaches that are several feet high, skeleton warriors with only bones in their bodies, and bad demons that come out of the abyss...
The human world was invaded by various creatures, and countless casualties were killed and injured at one time...
Just when the human race was desperate, countless colorful points of light floated under the sky, and the people illuminated by the light points were mutated, and they faded into mortal bodies, and they were called - Evolutionaries!"
...
The book does not use zombies and elements of the mutation of creatures on the original earth like ordinary post-apocalyptic novels. Zombies are actually fine, but if the animals of the world really evolve as well, then the whole world of humanity will be wiped out in just one day.
There are hundreds of billions of animals in the world, and if nothing else, an evolved rat tide will destroy a city in a short period of time, unless missiles or nuclear weapons are directly used.
But if you really use missiles, the city will be destroyed...
If the elements of animal evolution are really adopted, the people on the earth will be killed and injured all at once, what else is interesting about the story?
Therefore, Wind Scar avoids this element and uses the element of otherworldly teleportation creatures. If you control the number of creatures that teleport over, you'll be fine. Anyway, the purpose of the 'gods' in the novel is not to destroy humanity.
And in the first chapter of Wind Scar, in order to reflect the decisive setting of his protagonist's killing, he wrote a plot that would cause a lot of controversy-
The protagonist hides in his bedroom, and someone outside is being chased by monsters, and when he comes to the protagonist to ask for help, he hopes that the protagonist can open the door to save him. But the protagonist refuses, watching him get killed by monsters.
This plot is expected to cause a lot of controversy in the future, and the virgin must have scolded him for being cruel and cold-blooded and not saving that person, and he could save that person by opening the door.
Actually, it's not really that you don't save people.,It's what if the creature runs in when the protagonist opens the door?At first, the protagonist didn't get the power of the Sage.,It's a weak chicken.。
Putting yourself in danger in order to save others is something that only a fool would do.
But the doesn't care about you, in their world, the world is full of love and peace, and all disharmony does not exist. They want to make the world peaceful, and everyone should be harmonious and caring.
Although this one is very controversial at the beginning, so what's the point?
There is no novel that can satisfy people all over the world, and how can a novel be liked by people all over the world if it is not a world currency?
Writing a novel itself is a controversial thing, every plot will cause discussion, and no matter how perfect the plot is, some people will disagree. All the author needs to do is make a subset of readers like it, and that's enough!
The audience for which his novel is intended is the kind of person who likes this selfish, cold-blooded, murderous and decisive style.
Our Lady was not in his consideration.
The first chapter of the novel was finally hammered out two hours later.
In just 2,000 words, it took two hours of wind marks, and the hand speed and brain speed were still too slow.
Only practice can make perfect, and more masturbation every day...... Novels can improve your hand speed, and so can your brain speed, just write more.
What's more, in the future, the author's level has been raised, and the person is powerful, and the hand will naturally become powerful, and the novel will fly fast!
Wind Scar, he was now feeling the benefits of his strength increase.
After eating Uncle Wang's black stick-like thing, the whole person was furious. Picking up the novel with both hands is much faster than before.
In the past, when he was on Earth, the speed at which Wind Scar wrote novels was only a little more than 2,000, and this was because he wrote more essays that he was good at to achieve this speed.
And this time the novel is not the same quality as before, every word and every sentence has been carefully pondered in the brain, and the high quality is explosive.
2000 words in two hours is not bad. (The hand speed data is calculated according to the data when the wind marks passed over in the past, not the speed when writing the book now)
After writing the first chapter and checking for typos, Wind Scar posted it with a nervous mood.
Although he feels very stable in his heart, he is not a stable batch, a little floating, and he will overturn at any time.
It's not the kind of old driver who can get by by writing......
"The gods of the sky, the Buddhas of the West, the immortals of the Heavenly Court, and the mysterious power of the East, please give me the power!" he pressed the review button in the midst of the wind scars.
Fengji immediately closed his eyes, "Spicy Chicken System, if it is reviewed, call me, but let me close my eyes, I'm afraid that tears will fall when I open my eyes." ”
After a few seconds, the spicy chicken system went silent. Wind Scar's heart tightened......
Don't......
"Spicy, spicy chicken system, what's the result?" Wind Scar's nervous voice trembled a little.
"Hahaha, master, your nervous appearance is so cute, in fact, it has already passed, are you surprised, not surprised?"
Silence, deathly silence.
The wind mark sat on the chair like a piece of wood.
"Spicy chicken system, let's die!!" After a few seconds, there was a loud roar from the wind scar.
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One more digression.
1. This plot is really boring, and it's not interesting for me to watch, and I believe the same is true for readers. But there is no way, it's such a story, it's not a copyist, and the sense of substitution is very low when you write a book by yourself, and if you don't write it in such detail, the sense of substitution will be gone. I can't help it with a detailed writing.
But I know that what readers like to see is this bizarre society of authors. I like the story of the main character's novel killing all sides. I like the protagonist's awesome hair, all kinds of funny jokes, and interesting plots.
So immediately after the end of this plot, there will be some cheerful and funny content.
2. Thank you for the question raised by 'People, please kneel down'. I'm really very vague about the description of the item level, this is a problem I didn't think of before, and if I put it forward, then it will be solved, and I will sort this idea out tonight, and strive to write this item level better, at least so that the reader can understand.
Thanks again to this reader.
And because it's the first time I've written this kind of creative idea, I'm sure there will be this kind of question in the future, and I hope you will bring it up to me.
It's also uncomfortable, but I don't seem to have encountered this kind of thing when I was writing a book before......
This is probably the first time that a reader has taken the initiative to discuss the setting with me.
Happy!
It also made me see the future of this book, which is really not comparable to the previous books!
So this book needs to be written even more.
To be honest, I will be happy for a long time when I read every book review in this chapter, which proves that although I write spicy chicken, there are readers who are reading it! But don't spray brainlessly, brainless spraying is uncomfortable. If it's really my mistake, then spray me, I accept it, but I have to thank you, although I sprayed, I also gave me advice.
3. Tell me about the update time. The first should be before 12 o'clock - 2 o'clock. I started class at 11 o'clock at noon, and it was already 11:30 after eating, and then it took me an hour and a half to write a chapter, so it was no surprise that the first update time was in this range. If there is no update during this time period on a certain day, then something is delayed. The second shift time is not accurate, 4:30 p.m., about 5 o'clock after eating, then 6 o'clock to school, to 8 o'clock, so under normal circumstances, it is updated at 8 o'clock in the evening.
4. If there is a problem, tell it in the book review, so that I can find the problem, I also read the chapter, but there is no book review to be obvious. So I hope it's best to ask questions in the book review, thank you for your understanding.
5. That's all I have to say, thank you for watching.