Chapter 40, teach Liu Piaofu to write a book
"I'll give you another myelin cleansing pill!" Liu Piaoxu smiled and continued to add a bombshell.
The Wind Scar of the Cleansing Pill is known, this thing is the same as the black item I ate last time, and it has the ability to improve physical fitness.
Wind Scar doesn't need this thing, but it can be given to Tang Wan!
After thinking about it, Wind Scar said to Tang Wan: "Tang Wan, there was a murderous author yesterday, the flame bomb is enough to save your life, and this marrow cleansing pill can help you improve your physique." Don't care about her crazy words, I only have you in my heart. ”
Windmark continued to ask tentatively, "Did I agree?"
Although Tang Wan didn't really want Wind Scar to agree from the bottom of her heart, these things were very tempting, and Wind Scar gave her all these things, which was enough to see her status in Wind Scar's heart.
Why didn't she want Wind Scar to teach Liu Piaofu? Not that she was afraid that Wind Scar would really run away with Liu Piaofu.
And from this incident, it can be seen that the wind mark is really good to her, and her worries are too much.
On the contrary, she should be ashamed, Wind Scar is so good to her, she still doesn't trust Wind Scar.
Tang Wan lowered her head, "Well, it's good for you to call the shots." After thinking about it, she added, "I believe in you." ”
"Thank you. "Wind Scar said.
"No, I should thank you. You're thinking so much about me, and I'm worried about this, worrying about that. I'm sorry. ”
Looking at the ashamed Tang Wan, Fengji only had one sentence in his heart: Woman, can you really think about it......
He originally wanted to agree, and he had to win an opportunity to absorb additional ability.
What he did was just to get Tang Wan to agree, but the stupid girl agreed and didn't say anything, and she was extremely ashamed......
Women, it's so easy to deceive!
"That's it, I'll come to you in the afternoon, and you're going to teach me. Liu Piaoxu smiled playfully and sent the things in his hand to the hands of Wind Scar.
"Come to the principal's office in the afternoon to find me. Feng Scar nodded, and then sent the things in his hand to Tang Wan.
However, Tang Wan refused, "You need these things more than me, I can't ask for them." ”
Although it was said that Wind Scar was already the author, Tang Wan felt that he still needed to wash the marrow pill, but she didn't know that Wind Scar had already eaten items with the same medicinal effect.
And although the murderous author is dangerous, Tang Wan's family lives in the imperial court (those two words can't be said, harmony) building, and there are guards around to check it, and they are not afraid of the murderous author.
She felt that Windmark needed a flame bomb even more.
"No, I've already eaten the Cleansing Pill, and this Pill is for you. Windmark smiled: "And the flame bomb is of no use to me, I have a better means of survival." Take it, good, don't refuse!"
Under the tough attitude of the wind scar, Tang Wan finally accepted those things.
Liu Piaofu snorted a little unpleasantly when she looked at the wind marks, and left to see her in the afternoon.
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After a short break in the classroom, Windmark continued to the principal's office.
After arriving at the principal's office, Liu Piaoxu sat in his chair and played with his mobile phone.
"You're here. After seeing the wind scars coming, Liu Piaoxu said to him happily.
Wind Scar nodded faintly, "Come, give way." ”
"Master, can you go and get a stool yourself?" asked Liu Piaofu.
Wind Scar didn't speak, and came to Liu Piaofu, intending to pull out his chair.
Liu Piaoxu consciously stood up and muttered, "I don't understand the amorous feelings!"
Wind Scar sat down and asked with a solemn expression, "Say, your purpose?"
Liu Piaoxu made an innocent expression and asked, "What is the purpose? I just want to find you to be a master." ”
"Heh, the person who can take out two fourth-level items will be a simple person? Don't say that you bought it, the two items add up to almost 100 million, and if you can take out this money, are you afraid that you won't find the author to teach? I'm just a first-level author, and I can't compare with those old authors who have been writing for many years, isn't it better for them to teach you?"
"It's worthy of writing novels, and this brain is good. Yes, I can indeed find better authors to teach me, but I like to ask you to teach me. What's wrong? No, you have accepted it, but you are not allowed to refuse it. ”
Wind Scar stared at Liu Piaofu and did not speak.
I know that this chick is not good, and he is not Long Aotian, and any beauty is upside down. This chick definitely has other intentions, but it doesn't seem like there's anything wrong with it now, at least just how it looks now.
However, Wind Scar also felt that she really didn't need to hurt him, did he have any qualifications worthy of being killed?
Except for Li Jiawei and his father, no one will really come to him.
"Okay, don't talk about this, you write male frequency?"
Liu Piaoxu rolled her eyes, "I still came to you when I wrote female frequency?"
"What type?"
"Sci-fi, starry background. ”
Wind Scar nodded, it should be a novel of the "Devouring the Starry Sky" type, this kind of novel is actually difficult to write.
The starry sky is unknown after all, and it takes a lot of imagination to write about it. And how huge the whole starry sky is, with all the races and the various races fighting each other, it is necessary to write that feeling of immensity.
But basically, it's hard for newcomers to write about that feeling, it's too hard.
"How many words have you written?" asked Windmark.
"In 2000, I didn't pass seven audits. ”
"I haven't been seven times......" Fengji touched his chin and pondered, seven times not to show that the problem is very big, and it is very troublesome to revise.
"Show me. "If you take the benefits, you must help, don't you? If you finish it early, you can let her leave quickly.
After logging in to the writer's area with a computer, Wind Scar clicked on what Liu Piaofu wrote.
Ten minutes later.
I've read it, but what are the shortcomings in it, and the wind mark is still thinking about it.
He is not a professional critic who revises novels, how can he find mistakes after reading them.
Because of the many revisions, the problems that can be found at the beginning of Liu Piaoxu's novel are very small and basically non-existent. It's just a little worse, so it hasn't been reviewed.
Windmark took a look at it and finally found her problem.
"The beginning of your book is wrong, the protagonist is a slave, but there is no slave life, where is there a slave so good?"
At a glance, the wind mark knew that this girl had not experienced a hard life, and she must have grown up with a golden key in her mouth. Although he has rarely brought his wealth to the novel, the slaves he writes about are like ordinary people.
It should be that the problem lies in this place, so it can't pass the audit.
Liu Piaofu thought about it with the wind marks, and it seemed to be true!
"Then I'll revise it. Liu Piaofu said.
Windmark nodded, "Hmm." If it's not right, I'll keep bringing it up to you. ”
Half an hour later, with the help of wind marks, Liu Piaofu was revised.
"Request a review. Windmark loosened his shoulders.
Teaching people novels is really tiring, but fortunately, his two lives combined with more than ten years of reading experience are not in vain, writing is definitely not easy to say, and it is not for her to write, the difficulty of talking about mistakes is acceptable, and it is still within the scope of his ability to accept.
Liu Piaoxu nodded and sent the application.