Testimonials
The end is very abrupt, but it does come to an end, the intention should finally stop, the original outline was thinking of Xiao Meng and Xiao Sang's anger at the Golden Emperor, ending with a bloody battle, but when I wrote most of it, the more I wrote, the more I felt the horror of the Golden Emperor's scheming city, and the firmness of the pursuit of the avenue, such a boss on the other side, it is impossible to let yourself fall into such an ending, the mechanism is too smart, and it should be his destination to ask for the heart to be like iron on the road, so the final climax can't get up, and it can't end heartily, for a creator, it's too painful to not be able to take care of the fish and the bear's paws。
However, I finally decided to respect the character of the Golden Emperor, the villain who supports the second third of the story, and the character and setting of the character, which is also the original intention of my writing of the Honor of the First Life - in every book, I will consider what aspects of my shortcomings I want to improve and improve.
Doom is a complete story of mental cultivation, there is no rest I write my heart by hand, so I wrote the fairy intention, but there is too much missing, writing, plot design, rhythm control, character building, these may have flashes, but overall it is still too ordinary and too thin, so the Arcane Constellation is dominated by the decryption of the world view, the rhythm control is very good, the degree of fine structure exceeds that of Doom, and the characters have also improved, but it is not enough, and the fighting is also weak.
With these summaries, the original intention of the first life is to write people and ideas, and when the first half of the happy rivers and lakes is happy, I feel that the characters, fights, conflicts, secrets, suspense, ideas, blood, Joy and so on have written a new level, breaking through the previous self, but after stepping into the location, first the fight began to become empty, Gao Wuliu's confrontation has too many problems I haven't encountered unexpectedly, writing is very painful, slowly falling into a bottleneck, with the relatively gray and heavy world view gradually revealed, the conflict of the early style, the integration of the past characters, is a new problem, and a grander background, more character games, more fine clues to pave the way, and need to rack your brains, it is difficult to take into account the other, unless you can use a more chapter in two or three days, so in the case of maintaining the main body is good, many advantages in the early stage are gone,
These things are not something that can be thought of at the beginning of the preset outline, only when you write it will be understood, and you will know how to solve it in the future when you encounter it, which is very good, but there are indeed many problems that need to be summarized.
Fortunately, the powerful game was written to the end, and finally ended successfully, which I am very satisfied with, and the content of nearly 4.5 million words can be done to this extent, and I feel good, I just hope to summarize more, and improve in the next book.
And the most satisfying characters in this book are Xiao Meng, one is the Golden Emperor, one is Xiao Sang, Xiao Sang was originally a girl I knew before, and there was only one request, written as a female villain, I looked at the setting of Yulong Zi, and suddenly felt that the neuropathy was also quite cute, so she became schizophrenic, and then let me extend a series of inspirations, with the layout of the Golden Emperor, if it weren't for this accident, maybe the life you see is not like this.
Xiao Sang's character may not be liked by many people, but at least for me, I think she is the best female character I have ever written, not the most favorite, the most satisfying, the best, at the end of the seventh volume, Xiao San and the Golden Emperor face each other, was a little bit stripped of pride, I even have a feeling that this character is alive.
To summarize this, let's first answer some of the holes that were not filled in the text:
First, what did Zhu Bajie know? With a certain lustful intuition, it was keenly aware that Thor and the Demon Saint had an adulterous affair, so as to peek out that there might be something wrong with Thor's true identity, so the old pig must die.
Second, Han Guang, Wang Siyuan's shaping is based on the resourcefulness of the early stage, and the last resort is exhausted, to show that the will of heaven after the real unveiling has been difficult to ask since ancient times, so there is no scene, Han Guang's ending has long been doomed, the original owner of Luo Shu is the Eastern Emperor, Wang Siyuan thought that he got it back by preliminarily figuring out the monster of the Heavenly Dao, but in fact, it was the arrangement of the Demon Buddha, and his resistance has always been under the control of the Demon Buddha.
Third, the escaped Ka Ye relics are to show the terrifying needs of the Supreme True Buddha, and he was taken away by the Monkey King, leaving a blank space behind, and imagining for himself whether it is possible for him to turn into a relic in the new era and find a new heir.
Fourth, why did no one rush to carry the relics of Tang Sanzang after the battle of Lingshan? Because the other side was balanced and involved with each other, no one dared to move first, until they all entered a chaotic sleep, waiting for the end of the calamity, Lao Jun did nothing again, and he couldn't memorize it until the legend, so in the end, he relied on the sand monk to return ahead of schedule.
Fifth, the golden cicada carapace was originally used by Meng Qi to prepare for dealing with the Supreme True Buddha, but the Buddha was not truly detached, so he could not use it.
Sixth, the Buddha is not really detached from the pit, there have been hints in the early stage, Daozun's products are very powerful, there is Huang Laojun, Huang Laojun is split into the East Emperor and the Heavenly Dao Monster, all of them are on the other side, there are ancients, and although the Supreme True Buddha is indeed powerful and weird, but Tang Sanzang is much weaker, Meng Qi thought it was because of the improvement, and when he found that the traces of Daozun were empty, but the Buddha's imprint still existed, there were some doubts that the Buddha was not detached, and Daozun did not make a move, the Buddha had a record of shooting, and there was a secret of the Demon Buddha's cooperation with Yuan Shi Tianzun, so the final battle was predictable, not a whim。
Seventh, as for each epoch is only detached from one, the Buddha is detached, why doesn't Meng Qi doubt what the other side is fighting for? Here I forgot to write, he thought that this was the end of the calamity, the great end of the previous eras, not a single era, maybe there is still a chance.
Eighth, why can't the Yuan Shi Lingbao do it, but Amitabha Buddha and the Golden Emperor can? That is, what the Yuan Shi said in the last chapter, they have already transformed their state, eliminated cause and effect, and waited for the opportunity, and they don't need to hurry up like the Golden Emperor, which is equivalent to being half a step ahead, and there is a seventy or eighty percent chance of winning, forcing the Golden Emperor to use the Six Soul Banners to cut morality.
Nine, the state of the demon emperor is slightly equal to that of the Buddha, but she is not restricted, but she is afraid that her previous efforts will come to naught as soon as she shows up, and she is waiting for the opportunity, as long as there is a next era, she is not afraid of the end of the world, which has been hinted at in the words of the demon saint.
Ten, the timeline sequence of the Journey to the West, etc., first the gods, the Emperor of Heaven proved the other side, and pressed the first life, and then gradually centrifuged with the beginning and morality, and there was a journey to the west, and then the demon lord was instigated by the thunder god to hit the heavenly court, and indirectly pierced the secret of the Jianmu fruit, and it didn't take long for the heavenly court to fall, and the other side joined forces, and the monkey took the diamond circle given by Laojun, and at the last moment, the seriously injured Heavenly Emperor even the heavenly court was knocked down to the fairy world, giving him a glimmer of life, maintaining the continued existence of this era, and finally the battle of Lingshan, Amitabha Buddha, Bodhi intervened in the Demon Sage, Daode and Yuan Shi and other ancients later, and the Vajra Circle and the Seven Treasures Wonderful Tree were all damaged in this battle.
Of course, after all, it's nearly two years of serialization, and some details before and after will inevitably have confused memories and inconsistencies, such as Liuluo obviously saw the picture of the demonic blood peach painted by Meng Qi, and when he explored the top layer of the heavenly court, he said that he didn't know, of course, it can also be explained as Xiao Meng's painting ability "ghostly workmanship", which is breathtaking, and the painting of children doesn't even know their mothers, well, these don't involve the main plot, they don't involve the direction, if you have the opportunity to publish it in the future, you can proofread it again.
The others are all pits for the endings of some characters.,Some will be outside the fan.,Some of them will be left blank.,By the way,I saw a friend in the book review area who said it was best to serialize it in the book.,In order to take care of them.,It's also serialized in the book.,In the form of free.,Rest.,There is the first character outside at seven o'clock on Friday night.,But I also hope everyone can add me*prestige*.,There will be good jokes.,There are all kinds of brain holes.,There are waste manuscripts to read first.,It's also put there outside the fan that has nothing to do with the first life.,For example, tonight's "If it's a city" In short, there will be time to maintain updates three times a week in the future~ You can search for my pen name, and I don't add the dignity of the world......
After summing up, it's time to talk about the new book, as I mentioned before, the new book is an urban ability, and today I can say it more clearly, it is the King of Fighters type of urban martial arts or fantasy, and the power level will be lowered, so that I can better write characters and write stories, and use the things summarized in a lifetime, and this type is written by fewer people, relatively fresh, and it will be very creative passion to write~
Of course, everyone will say that if I don't die, I won't die, change the theme, and change the field, to be honest, I know that this is not good, it will definitely lose a lot of readers, every time I see others add hundreds of thousands of subscriptions, tens of millions of copyright adaptation fees, I don't envy, that's impossible, but I can't write what I don't want to write, I can't force a smile and pretend to climax to write a story that I have no inspiration, no idea, no creative passion.
It's okay to be naïve or stupid, but I still remember the original intention when I first started coding words, I wrote my heart by hand, I felt good about writing the story, I couldn't wait to share it with you, and I enjoyed the satisfaction of creating a world and writing a character.
I'm not young, but I feel that I still have dreams in my heart, blood and breath, and stories I want to tell, which have nothing to do with the subject matter, nothing to do with style, only to my heart!
As Xiao Meng said, it's not a question of whether it's worth it or not, it's whether you want it or not!
I want to, I have no regrets, I'm just a big fool!
The new book has been conceived for a long time, and there are some ideas before writing the arcane, of course, at that time, I wanted to write about the flow of science and technology, but unfortunately the time has passed, and there is no longer that feeling, but the details accumulated at that time, the accumulated bridges, a lot can be used, until now, it has been generally perfected, just waiting to add bricks, but I have been writing for almost two years, I am really exhausted, my thinking seems to be slow, I need time to rest, and I need time to recharge, look at good books, see how others shape characters and how to tell good stories, learn skills and learn experience, so, two months of rest and recharge, one month of perfect outline and manuscript, October 1st, see you in the new book!
Huh, I wrote that some friends have spent high school, some friends have graduated from college, some have changed jobs, and some have started a family like me, Xiao Meng has accompanied us through a stage of life, if this book can become everyone's memories of the past, then I am so happy.
Regards, respects, see you in the new book!(To be continued.) )