Chapter 243: Meticulously crafted
The gate of the Heavenly Dao Scripture Pavilion.
Ling Hao took out four hundred Xuanjing stones, handed them to Zheng Meichun, and then ordered, "You wait for me outside for a while now." ”
After that, he entered the Heavenly Dao Scripture Pavilion, opened the door, and asked for four hundred Xuanjing stones from Zheng Meichun's hand, which led Zheng Meichun to enter the Heavenly Dao Scripture Pavilion smoothly.
There were all kinds of books in the Scripture Pavilion, but Ling Hao didn't plan to let Zheng Meichun read those books, the reason why he brought Zheng Meichun to the Heavenly Dao Scripture Pavilion was mainly to prepare for future plans.
Even if he wants to train Zheng Meichun to become a literary giant, he can't be too indulgent, and as his registered disciple, it is impossible for him to come to the door in person to give advice.
"Senior, are you going to start pointing him out now?" Xu Yueqiong asked casually.
"Hmm. Ling Hao nodded.
"Then I'll listen to it too!" Xu Yueqiong grinned and deliberately leaned over to Ling Hao's side.
Ling Hao looked helpless, but he didn't stop it.
He looked at Zheng Meichun and said expressionlessly, "Take out your manuscript." ”
"Oh. Zheng Meichun hurriedly took out the manuscript and handed it to Ling Hao.
Ling Hao first flipped to the title and introduction page of the book, and said slowly: "You have also seen the comments that everyone gave you, what do you think is the most important among those comments?"
Zheng Meichun was stunned for a moment, looked at the manuscript in Ling Hao's hand, and hesitated: "The title and introduction of the book are too ordinary, and there is no ** for people to open it?"
"Smack!"
Ling Hao raised his hand and slapped it, this sudden move startled Xu Yueqiong, who was joining in the fun.
Zheng Meichun had tears in the corners of her eyes, a look of grievance, and she didn't understand why Ling Hao suddenly hit him.
"Can you kid not be clever?, think that when I turn to the title of the book and the introduction page, this is the most important thing?" Ling Hao said angrily.
"No...... Ah, yes!" Zheng Meichun was a little incoherent, and in the final analysis, he was still afraid of being slapped in the face by Ling Hao again.
Of course, Ling Hao was not so cruel, and he didn't use the power of True Yuan with the slap just now, otherwise Zheng Meichun would have already braided his hair.
After staring at Zheng Meichun for a while, he said seriously: "Listen, in this field, you are a newcomer, and if you have average qualifications, if you want to get ahead, you can't be too ordinary." If you want to stand out from the crowd and stand out from a group of great gods, you must learn to go off the beaten path, so innovation is the most important thing, and you can succeed if you are creative. ”
"Yes, Master, I understand. Zheng Meichun took out her notebook and hurriedly wrote it down.
"Creativity is divided into three parts: the innovation of the worldview, the innovation of the golden finger and the innovation of the identity of the protagonist. Like the one you wrote, the worldview is very ordinary, the protagonist has no golden finger at all, and the identity of the protagonist is too ordinary, how can an ordinary disciple of an ordinary sect give people a sense of expectation?" Ling Hao commented in combination with Zheng Meichun's works.
"Uh......" Zheng Meichun was slightly stunned, but she still quickly clicked on the notebook a few times.
"I'll just say so much about ideas, give you a day to go back and think slowly, and when you come to me tomorrow, I have to see at least ten ideas, otherwise...... Otherwise, you don't want to see the sun the day after tomorrow!" Ling Hao threatened.
"Ahh
Ling Hao didn't pay attention to it, and continued: "Next is the title and introduction of the book, I don't know if you have heard of a sentence: liking a person starts with appearance, falls into talent, and is loyal to character." The title and introduction of the book are like the appearance of the book, if the appearance is high, others will pay attention to you and like you, if it is ordinary, how can others pay attention to you?"
"It starts with appearance, falls into talent, and is loyal to character......" Xu Yueqiong couldn't help but glance at Ling Hao, her expression was a little weird.
Zheng Meichun was a little distressed, and shouted: "Master, I also want to choose a good title, but this kind of thing is not something that you can have if you want it, if I were really that powerful, I wouldn't have passed the review by now." ”
"So, let your sword go off the rails, if you can't be the most handsome, you should be the ugliest, if you can't be the most elegant, you should be the most vulgar, if you can't be the best, you should be the most bizarre. Being handsome can attract people, and being ugly can also stand out from the crowd, you know? As long as you don't just go with the flow. Ling Hao revealed.
Zheng Meichun seemed to understand whether she understood or not, and nodded vigorously.
"That's all for today, and the rest for tomorrow. Now you can go back, memorize the tasks you go back to, come up with ten ideas, and add a title and synopsis to each idea. Ling Hao was already ready to finish his guidance.
Zheng Meichun's face turned pale when he thought of the ten ideas and the corresponding book titles and introductions.
However, Ling Hao didn't care so much at all, and without waiting for Zheng Meichun to take the initiative to leave, he raised his hand and blasted people out.
"Senior, wouldn't this be too ruthless?" Xu Yueqiong said casually.
"This is called a strict master to become a high apprentice, if you want me to give me guidance one day, maybe I will do the same to you. Ling Hao said disapprerovingly.
"I don't want you to instruct!" Xu Yueqiong snorted lightly, "Such a senior is not the senior I want!"
"......" Ling Hao was speechless for a moment.
Under Ling Hao's high-pressure threat, the next day, Zheng Meichun really came up with ten ideas, and also matched each idea with a very good title and introduction.
Ling Hao picked out the best idea, and helped refine the title and introduction of the book, and then began to point out the next step.
With the idea, title, and synopsis in place, the general framework, the specific setting, the main outline, and the beginning and end are all here.
Ling Hao spent half a month of hard work, and finally let Zheng Meichun come up with a very good work.
Of course, this work currently has only ten chapters, which just meets the requirements for the submission of entries in the Literary League, and the rest of the content will be slowly expanded.
In the past half a month, Xu Yueqiong even wrote a beginning.
However, no matter how curious Ling Hao was, Xu Yueqiong refused to show it to him, so he had to bury this curiosity in the bottom of his heart.
Since both of them had already written the beginning, Ling Hao asked them to go to the Reading Academy to submit it.
As Ling Hao expected, Zheng Meichun's carefully crafted work did not need him to come forward at all, and the person in charge of the review passed it at once.
To Ling Hao's surprise, Xu Yueqiong's work also passed, and according to Zheng Meichun's description, after the person in charge of reviewing Xu Yueqiong's beginning, he exclaimed that it was a masterpiece, and the evaluation of that work was higher than that of Zheng Meichun's work.
After such a incident, Ling Hao felt that he was really a failure, but fortunately, Ji Xinlan suddenly came back from the Ten Mile Gallery, which made the depression in his heart subside a lot.