Last night, I talked to Chen Liang for more than an hour about "Above the Church", as well as one of my science fiction novels that has not yet been published, and some trivial things, such as ......

Chen Liang read the first twenty chapters, and it was before the revision.

He made two important points.

One is that when I read the first few chapters, I still don't understand the world background and the practice system of the book, and I don't even understand what I'm trying to express.

Another point is that the protagonist Muliu obviously can't practice, but he is very hanging, which means that it is difficult to understand.

Regarding the first point, after many revisions, the general environment such as the world background has become quite clear above.

If you want to be clearer, you have to see about chapter 70.

Yes, I need a little patience, I hope that all readers can be like my dear little brother Zhen treats Xiao Muliu, give me a little more patience, and pass him for three days and two nights, and see seventy or eighty chapters.

The plot in the early part of the first volume is relatively smooth, and there are not too many storms, but the sky is about to change, and I don't know if you realize it.

But then again, I'm going to unravel the fog little by little, and it's not a story about fighting monsters and upgrading a few blind pretends.13 Above the temple, the structure of the novel can't be messed up, the story logic is very important, we have to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, and outwit Tiger Mountain.

The fog will always be shrouded.

On top of the Sanctuary, as long as the superman with high IQ and high combat effectiveness is found by his opponent, he will still hit the street, and he will not let him be sanctified because he is a bull like his little brother.

Here, I will secretly tell you a little news, most of the people above the Holy Church can live for a long, long time, and one or two hundred years is a small matter.

If you want to read a chapter or two to see through my mind and know what I'm writing, no way.

If you don't accept it, bite me, ╯▽╰

"Do you want to know the truth of the world? I can tell you everything if you want! Go find it, the final chapter of the final chapter! I put everything in the world there!!"

In fact, I am a serious person, writing essays is a very serious, rigorous and sacred thing for me, I can't be a child's play, I can't close my eyes and write a few handfuls of scribbles.

Since I was a child, I rented books in a small bookstore and read a lot of scribbling shit-like novels, and once I was so angry that I squirted a mouthful of old blood so far away, and then I fell to the ground and didn't wake up, or the owner of the store carried me to the central hospital next door to save me.

Otherwise, I wouldn't have had a chance to write those bullshit novels.

I don't know if you're laughing.

If not, laugh one.

If so, put away your lewd laughter.

I've made progress, and my brother has written a youth novel for girls.

If it's far away, give me the brain circuit board back!

The plot of the last chapter was determined at the beginning of the conception of this novel, and the final return of Mu Liu, the direction of the whole world, has become a fixed number and will not change.

I'll still touch it up as I see fit, though.

Now most of the online articles,TN in the first chapter to explain the world background、Cultivation methods and cultivation systems, as well as the protagonist's life goals, etc.,I want to sell a cute life with the editor and readers.,I'm so stressed.,My spirit collapsed for a while.,I ate a lot of spiritual liquid refined by my little brother and Master Yuheng together to stabilize.。

This can indeed allow readers and friends to understand the worldview of the novel earlier, understand the author's path, know the highlights of the novel, and then decide whether to include it in the bookshelf.

If I could, I would like to write that too.

There is no Taoist friend who doesn't want to receive a short station before 30,000 words.

Only when it is greatly recognized by the editor, can I feel at ease and have the confidence to write it.

I don't think there's anything wrong with writing like that.

Just wanted to try it, take a detour.

Then I went around to 200,000 words and still haven't signed a contract.

Speechless, choking on tears, sprinkling Jiangtian, and worrying for two months.

I write slowly, and I can only keep one update a day.

I'm sorry, I'm glad for a moment, I forgot the topic of this paper, let me go back and see what I'm going to write.

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Go on.

About why Mu Ryu is so hanging.

The opening seems to be a bit deliberately made him pretend to be 13.,That's probably what it means.。

Comrade Chen Liang is telling the truth.

Because it's God's perspective, I can't look at the story I've written exactly like a reader.

There are three main ways to practice the source of combat power in the book: ancient martial arts, spells, and soul arts.

Soul art is derived from spells and belongs to the branch of spells, but has established its own portal.

Before the soul master enlightened the spirit, he had no combat power, just like mortals.

Unless you practice martial arts like Muliu, you have a root bone like Muliu.

However, after drinking the spiritual liquid, the body will become healthier and stronger

So, Mu Liu can almost hang his peers.

He didn't have the talent to practice soul arts and spells at the beginning, but he had the root bones to practice ancient martial arts, plus the talent bloodline of the Mu clan, and some genetics of his father.

's mother is the eldest lady of the Fan family in Xining, and she also has an identity as Lin Wu, the first of the four unique heroes in the north.

Dad is the inheritor of the Qishan Tongbai lineage of the Mu Clan, and he is also Ji Changge, who has a battle with Mr. Ziji, who is unable to practice soul art and climbed to the top of the peaks purely by martial arts cultivation.

The probability of two cows 13 falling in love with each other and giving birth to waste straw bales should be very low.

In order to suppress Mu Liu's talent and prevent him from bursting his combat effectiveness, he had an accident when he was still in Miss Fan's belly.

After he was born, the big boss fed him so much spiritual fluid, and Ren Du's second vein had already been opened up and entered the Tibetan realm of ancient martial arts.

There is also a strange force from the ghost market, which is related to the truth of the world, and I can't say too much.

All along, I have been looking at things from Muliu's point of view.

Before meeting Si Mingqin Zhen, he was the young master of tragedy.

Abandoned by his father and mother, the big boss also died, he had no relatives, he had to suffer this kind of pain at the age of four, and there were many people who wanted to kill him.

Soul art is the mainstream of this world, but he can't enter the stream to become a soul master, so he is ridiculed and ruthlessly suppressed.

The ancient martial arts are fierce in the early stage, but if you want to break through in the middle and late stages, it is very difficult, unless you become a soul master.

Realizing this, Mu Liu became suspicious of himself, thinking that he couldn't do it.

The real master has already seen his extraordinary, otherwise Si Mingqin would not have recognized him at a glance, and would have accepted him as his apostle.

You must know that the Seven Great Families sent so many talented little mages to Tiemu Cliff were all disgusted by Si Mingqin.

However, Muliu's combat power is currently very limited.

The opponent set for him is very strong, and he doesn't plan to follow the steps and let him practice from scratch.

Therefore, increase his combat effectiveness when he appears, and increase it as the plot develops.

In the last chapter of the first volume, he has a true divine consciousness and becomes a real mage apprentice, and his combat power is on par with that of a soul master who has just entered the Essence and a well-trained senior mage.

The starting point of mages is the highest, but most mages are in the Hinayana realm where they follow the Dharma, and their combat power increases relatively gradually, unless they break through the realm and enter the upper level.

The soul master was very weak in the Qiling and Huangquan realms, and was completely crushed by the ancient martial arts geniuses and mages. As soon as he enters the Yunxiang and is reborn, with the help of the characteristics of soul art to make up for the shortcomings of the root bones, the True Martial Arts can compete with the superior mage.

The protagonists of fantasy novels are none other than these.

A kind of genius qualification at birth, has always been very hanging, all the way to pretend to be 13.

An ordinary qualification, at first I wanted Mu Liu to take this path, and I like to write stories like this, because the vast majority of people on the earth are ordinary ordinary people, and so am I.

One is waste, and then within two chapters, he suddenly got something to create, and he became a genius.

One is a genius, then persecution turns into waste, and then a few chapters later it becomes a genius again.

So, in general, there are only two kinds of fantasy protagonists: genius and ordinary.

There are no waste qualifications in the world, only hopeless waste people.

A serious writer writes so much, just wanted to explain.

My Muliu genius is not yet full, and it's a little awkward, only he feels like a waste.

I really don't know what I'm talking about, I'm a little dizzy, I don't write, I'll go lie down for a while.