Chapter 86

Xu Lei closed his mobile phone, walked to the window and looked: the rain was getting heavier and heavier, like a splash. As soon as a person stands in, it is estimated that it will take less than five seconds, and the whole body will be watered~~ This is not to think of going out.

Xiaoyu didn't come back, and she didn't know what her mother was talking about.

Xu Lei shook his head, sat down, took out his mobile phone, he wanted to see: how bad the little white author wrote, to see if he could poison him into the intensive care room...

Feel free to go through the first ten chapters.

The person is in the third person, so the author should have changed it.

The subject matter is a very popular system stream, and the theme is catering. The writing is average, the plot is bland, and it doesn't feel cool. But after reading it, it makes people smile a little.

This is Xu Lei's evaluation of it.

Finish the first 30 chapters.

The plot is a bit old-fashioned, but it can be connected to some extent. It can be seen that the author wrote with his heart, but he did not write anything new because of the pen power.

There is sincerity, but there is a lack of ability. This is Xu Lei's second evaluation of it.

Turn to chapter 48.

This little white author actually said that he was in a bad mood.

It's easy for you to lose your collection with a glass heart!! Xu Lei secretly slandered himself.

Finish the first 60 chapters.

There are very few people commenting in it, and the popularity is not good~ This is the usual treatment of novices.

There are indeed few words in the chapters, most of them are more than 1,000 words. Look at the explanation of the author's comments in the back because: time is too fragmented, write as you go?

Is this a reason? Do book friends care about your reasons? How unpleasant it is to read it in two or three clicks! Xu Lei thought to himself.

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Finally flipped to the end.

Xu Lei didn't have the heart to laugh at him, he seemed to see another life of his own~~ There is no systematic self:

A young man who is 20 up and 30 down.

I think I'm just married, maybe I have one or two children.

He opened a small shop, but because of poor craftsmanship or poor management, the small shop closed down. He now works in a hotel, where he is tired and not paid much.

He had to work hard for the sake of his family, but life was still tight.

He wanted to change his life and make more money, so he picked up a pen he hadn't touched in years and tried to write a novel online.

During the day he had to go to work, and he could only start writing after 6:30 p.m.

Because it is very rusty, it takes more than an hour to write a thousand words. Sometimes I'm so sleepy that I can't help but fall asleep. When I woke up, I found that I hadn't finished the task of three chapters, so I picked up my energy and continued to write...... Although it was two or three o'clock in the evening.

He only had a few hours to write in the evening, and he had to eat, take a bath, and take care of the children in between...... But it has never been interrupted, ensuring that there are more than 3,000 words every day......

Now that he is slowly getting used to it, he may be able to write up to four or five thousand.

He replied to most of the comments of book friends and added refinement~~ Whether it was criticism or praise him.

All in all.

Xu Lei felt: This is a young man who has no talent for writing but can still persevere.

Flipping to the back of the book, Xu Lei made a comment: You street writer, don't think about climbing to the sky in one step. Walk forward step by step with your feet down-to-earth, and maybe next year today, you will be able to earn a few packs of cigarettes.

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Alas, if there is no system, maybe you are a portrayal of my future! Xu Lei said in his heart

I turned off my phone and rubbed my astringent eyes...

I heard the tinkling of my phone.

Xu Lei clicked on it and took a look:

This little white author added refinement and gave a reply:

Thanks for your support! Newcomers are not afraid of scolding, but afraid of obscurity. Weakly asked: Is it okay to give a ticket???

Xu Lei: ......