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About the text, about the people, about the things.

About the text, the captain is not a novice, but he is also a novice, there is a reason for this, I have a long history of pen farming, since high school, I have begun to write some youth egg pain words, which have been published in these magazines such as sprouts and fireworks, and have also written short inspirational texts... In addition, the captain has also written online articles, but he is not very good at writing, and his grades are not good.

Since I started writing online articles, I have never met an editor who can discuss my articles with me, only the editor of this book, the editorial team of China Literature Fantasy, has a big supper!

I always believe that the talent for writing online essays is very important, so after a few failures, I also resigned myself to my fate, and I was ready not to write, and even gave away the manuscript and ideas for the beginning of the book.

Later, I met my editor for a big night's sleep, and he took the route of proposing the direction of a book in a question-and-answer way along my train of thought to study my book, as well as the imperfections of various settings.

After that chat, I feel that I have a new understanding of online literature for the first time, and I used to be a 'literary youth' of traditional literature, so I am not a novice, but in the field of online literature, I am a real newcomer.

Thanks to the night supper, he opened the ****** for me to know the online article as an author, even if the book still pounces in the end, I believe I will find my way.

During the chat, he mentioned a lot of loopholes that I originally set, such as how to suppress the gold finger, how to develop the gold finger, how to use the gold finger, how to use the gold finger to develop conflicts...... Series.

Since then, I've felt that talent is important, but it's still possible to write good essays even if you learn the day after tomorrow.

And so I started.

However, there are still too many shortcomings.

First of all, the plot arrangement, the cool point arrangement, the arrangement of suppressing and releasing emotions, and driving the climax, I don't think it's done well, and it also makes some readers feel unhappy, and the captain says sorry.

The second is the text, which always can't get rid of some of the old problems of the 'literary youth', so it is natural to write some words that I think have depth of content or ancient vernacular.

...... Wait a minute!

The captain is working hard to explore and correct, thank you for the book friends who have been recommending and supporting, and I hope you can join the group, help me point out the shortcomings, and be taught sincerely!

Of course, I don't absorb it all, I have my own writing line, I have my own ideas, and I will collect the plot as appropriate, and my shortcomings lie in the arrangement and layout.

As for some people in the book review area, what kind of problems do you want to suppress the gold finger, I can clearly say that I am not invincible flow, not brainless face slapping flow, if I write all the functions of all the keys of the keyboard in 10,000 words, may I ask, how can I write it later? Today, a gangster scolded the protagonist, and the protagonist used the delete key to delete and erase it? The day after tomorrow, someone laughed at the protagonist and was cut off by the protagonist with Ctrl+X?

It's still fun to write like this once or twice, and after a long time, will you still find it interesting?

Goldfinger is just an aid, and I believe that more readers like to watch the story of the protagonist who finally grows up by relying on unremitting efforts and struggles.

There are also book friends who mentioned that the protagonist's father is a master of high merit, and he can actually be in the position of the prince of the 'Half Dynasty Luan', saying that I lowered the emperor's IQ.

I'm really anxious about this person's IQ, since ancient times, who has been in a high position and is a great minister? I have more time to go through history and supplement my IQ, so as not to have a low IQ balance, which will lead to arrears and become a fool.

Also, if someone reads three chapters and says that the abuser is abusing the master, is it in your opinion, as long as it is not an invincible essay, it is all an abuser? If the protagonist cultivates smoothly and writes a narrative, essay, or even an argumentative essay, it is better to simply write a college paper, you like it?

Even, some people say that stupid, forcing the author, the protagonist's father is highly meritorious, and he has no intention of rebelling, why does the emperor want to target, isn't this deliberately pulling hatred for the sake of hatred? !

For this benevolent brother, I just want to say, is your history taught by a high math teacher? In history, you have a high level of merit and a master, and you have no intention of rebelling, but you have not been taught by unwarranted characters, which dynasty and which generation?

The merit is high and the master is shaken, and the end will be miserable!

If you don't know, then I'll give you an example, Han Xin Peng Yue of the Western Han Dynasty, and even Xiao Liu of the Three Kingdoms have tested our Mr. Wolong, a sentence of Chengdu Wang, scared Mr. Wolong sweating, Wei Jin Niu Jin, Southern Dynasty Liu Song Tan Daoji, Northern Zhou Zhao Gui, five generations later Tang Guo Chongtao, and then more in the Tang Dynasty, Hou Junji If he was not suspected of the prince Yu rebellion, he would not really rebel, Guo Ziyi...... There are a lot of them, and Song Taizu's cup of wine and military power is the most elegant one.

Emperor Jing of Han indirectly killed Zhou Yafu

Yan Timur of the Yuan Dynasty.

Ming Taizu killed Li Shanchang, Lan Yu and several others...... Yuan Chonghuan at the end of the Ming Dynasty and so on, forget it, although this monk's family is good, I won't say much, I killed too much, Kangxi killed Ao Bai, Yongzheng killed Nian Gengyao, and even, I went to find some of the top ten marshals of Taizu myself!

The emperors of the past dynasties dealt with this kind of person in no more than three situations,

First, the guy who shook the lord was really ambitious, and he was forced to be helpless, and he turned against his mother!

Second, the emperor knew that you had no ambition and didn't dare to kill you, so endure! endure! Finally one day, the thorn in the flesh of the eye was sick, and hung up, the emperor raided your house as soon as possible, exterminated your descendants, and dug you out of the grave and whipped the corpse when he was in a good mood.

Third, the emperor has two arms of strength and a belly of leopard gall, and when he bites his steel teeth, he pulls it out and chops it, and you don't even have a single seedling in a minute.

In all dynasties, no one has been spared, even if you resign and go home, it is still a thorn in the emperor's heart!

Brother Ren, do you understand?

So don't say anything about deliberately pulling hatred, I won't pull hatred, but this is by no means deliberately pulling hatred, I don't know history, I don't laugh at you, I don't understand people's hearts, I can only not want to answer you, and reward you with a 'hehe'.

......

I know my shortcomings, and I am not smart enough to pull hatred.

I don't know why many online novels have so much hatred to pull, maybe the circle I live in is not as desperate as online novels, there are no people finding fault at every turn, my girlfriend is taken care of at every turn, and I still think about it when I look at it... At every turn, my girlfriend has taken a fancy to the rich second generation, saying that the rich second generation is good to her, and the rich second generation drives a luxury car and hits your electric horse, and the rich second generation wants to disfigure you when she sees you handsome......

Maybe this is a novel, this is a novel, not life!

Anyway, I can't always think of a very ingenious way to create contradictions, and even if I want to think of it, I will write it in a mess, I won't arrange it, and I won't brew hatred...... I sincerely hope that there are enthusiastic book friends to join the group and help me point out, I am grateful, very sincere!

I want to adapt to online articles! I want to write online articles, I want to marry Bai Fumei, I want to go to the peak of life, and I want to make money to buy milk powder for my children...... It seems to be exposed.

Yes, it's exposed, in fact, I'm a quasi-baba now, and I only found out after I published the book, so it's okay to marry Bai Fumei...

Friends, show your enthusiasm and stretch out your hands, you are all old bookworms, I believe that with your guidance, even if I am a rotten wood, I will be said to be straight...... (Xing Ye Sesame Official's face seems to have this ability?)

As long as I don't work until I die, as long as I don't travel every day, I will definitely wash my ears with formalin and listen carefully to the advice and guidance of my friends!

Finally, about the update, I believe that as long as you have read the number of words in the chapter, I promise to recognize my attitude, I will not be stuck in the number of words, the number of words in the chapter is very unstable, as for updating a few chapters, if in the past, it is not a problem to change a month in a row, but now, the temper of the expectant mother may be known to everyone, I need to set aside more time to accompany her, so I hope everyone will be more considerate, but I promise, the update will definitely not be less!

In the end, in fact, it was not the last just now, this is the last, three requests, the first one, please give more guidance to the captain, grateful!The second one, please collect and recommend, of course, it is better to have the ability to reward (am I very realistic? Yes, I am really realistic now... Alexander) Third, it's hot, don't be too greedy to blow the air conditioner, otherwise it's the same as I am now... It's hard to catch a cold on a hot day.

Above, the fake captain gave up!