-5- Try your hand at it

Poof!

Jiang Ye finally couldn't hold back his laughter, "Fangzi, please help me make a subcard, okay, you can talk about it after reading it." ”

The expected cheers did not appear, Yuanyuan's expression became more nervous, making it and doing it well are two completely different meanings, and a bunch of materials are called out casually, but the most important thing in the world of doing a good chapter of the novel depends on whether it can be recognized by readers.

Lan Ruocai didn't care about this, and threw herself into Jiang Ye's arms with a cheer, "It's hard, if they want to say badly, they can only say that they have no vision, Fang Zi, I also want a copy." ”

"Give me a copy too. Feng Xiaotian looked at Lan Ruo's appearance, his lungs were about to explode, his bronze writer's pursuit of more than a month didn't even get a good face, but he threw himself into his arms for this white eye that came out of nowhere, "I want to see what a guy who doesn't even have a ring can do." ”

"Yo, you're Feng Xiaotian, right? Jiang Ye sensed his hostility, and was no longer polite, "I saw that swordsman vs. minotaur of yours, that's it, what kind of thing, no wonder the sales are so bad, and you are embarrassed to say that you are a writer." ”

"You!" Feng Xiaotian exploded, jumped high, and pointed at Jiang Ye.

"What are you, let me ask you, how did you come up with the name of your novel, and the plot, a stupid man inexplicably hacked to death a bull-headed common man who didn't do anything, eh, I said that your heart is not particularly dark, say kill and kill, and the worldview of your novel is to bully the weak, right? Jiang Ye had heard a few words about Feng Xiaotian's character before, and he couldn't give him a good face just because he pursued Lan Ruo and disrespected the members of the studio.

"You, you deliberately distort the plot, the minotaur is ......"

"The Minotaur is a bad guy, where is it bad? Oh, he's called a Minotaur, so he's a bad guy, isn't that a dog called Howling?"

"You curse. ”

"So the name can't determine the quality of a person, as a writer, the first thing you think of should be to let the minotaur do something bad, so that the swordsman can justifiably do the right thing for the sky, especially in the end, you arrange the swordsman to kill it with a sword, everyone will guess that this is the ending, and there is no expectation at all. ”

Jiang Ye paused when he said this, walked a few steps, pointed at Feng Xiaotian and snorted, "This can also be called a novel?"

A passionate criticism, everyone listened stupidly, the meaning of the words was very straightforward, so straightforward that even Lan Ruo could understand it, but the problem is that such a simple truth, the writer's academy seems to have never taught it.

Kuyu originally wanted to pull the rack, but when he heard the thunderous empowerment here, he took a few sips of the teacup, and then urged Fang Yue to hurry up and make the sub-card, looking forward to the upcoming novel.

Feng Xiaotian was so criticized that he didn't know how to refute it for a while, forced a laugh twice, and held back a sentence, "If you can say it, it doesn't mean that you will do it, and I'll clean you up after I finish reading your novel." ”

"I Am a Hero Reborn"

In a martial arts world, Xiao Hei found himself back ten years ago, and retained ten years of cultivation, the most important thing is to remember the burial place of the hero's cheats, and the painful memory of being frightened and oppressed for ten years.

At this time, Xiao Hei returned to the starting point, and clearly remembered the buried address of the hero's cheats, so Xiao Hei walked to the pinnacle of his life, despised all the heroes, pretended to be forced to slap his face all the way, and finally defeated the last opponent Da Lan, Da Lan said, "You think you won? ha." ”

At this time, the camera quickly zoomed out, and the whole world turned out to be a huge toy chess game, and a real hand picked up the big blue and put it at the starting point.

Da Lan wakes up and finds himself back ten years ago, remembering that he had been humiliated for ten years.

-THE END-

Everyone didn't speak for a long time after taking off the reader, everyone had their own feelings, at the beginning, everyone scoffed at this toy-like world, the plot of rebirth fully aroused their interest, and the pretending all the way to the back was simply climaxed.

Until the end, when everyone thought it was a happy end, Da Lan's words, the real giant hand, and the first words Da Lan said after waking up after returning to the starting point, shocked them deeply.

"The world is a chessboard, you and I are chess pieces, I thought I had won everything, but I didn't expect it to be just the beginning of a new cycle. is such a deep novel, it is simply a slap in the face and a wake-up call to the world. Kuyu sighed, still immersed in the afterglow with her eyes closed and shaking her head.

"It turns out that how else can the novel be written, it's so cool to read, but in the end, it's a little incomprehensible, why is Da Lan also reborn, is there a sequel?"

Lan Ruo is as his name, as Lan Ruocao, he looks pure and his thinking is even more pure, after all, he is just a little girl who is less than twenty years old, where does he know Jiang Ye's last fierce medicine, just happy for him, although the world is a little simpler, but it does not affect the reader's feelings at all.

Jiang Ye touched Lan Ruo's head, the more she looked at this little girl, the more she liked it, and she really wanted to hold it in her arms and melt it in her heart.

Feng Xiaotian didn't take off the reader for a long time, his heart was already turned upside down, when he saw the toy-like world and people at the beginning, he was ecstatic, this thing was really an embroidered pillow, but when the plot of rebirth was mentioned in the third second, he was excited to see the end all the way.

For the first time, he questioned his experience as a writer, how the novel could have been written.

"Uncle, are you qualified?" Jiang Ye asked with a little apprehension, although there would be no problem in the plot, it was still unknown whether he could cater to the people of this world.

"It's not just qualified, this novel world is like magic, so I have been in a state of excitement, and the final ending is a big reversal, and I am still a little blind. Yuanyuan is straightforward and fast-talking, and she greatly admires this work that subverts tradition.

"Yes, it's as if there is a mysterious power that has been stirring the reader's heart, and it is the reader's excitement, what is it?" Fang Yue frowned and meditated, his mouth kept thinking in pieces, what kind of power is this.

Jiang Ye finally breathed a sigh of relief, it seemed that his guess was not wrong, in any world, a tight plot and a continuous climax will always be the vitality of a novel.

Five years of bookworms, three years of writers, plus countless films, with such a strength to be reborn in such a world that can be called a writer, it is difficult to think of it.

Having said that, the road has to be taken step by step, and there is still something that must be done at the moment.

Jiang Ye looked at Feng Xiaotian, who was still pretending to be dead, and weighed the pros and cons of confrontation and reconciliation in his heart. After all, Feng Xiaotian is the only bronze writer in the studio, and the entire novel world is not badly built, not to say that it is useless.

Feng Xiaotian is also entangled in his heart, it is obviously a shoddy, twelve or thirteen-year-old student-level work, but why can it make the reader climax and can't stop, if I can know the secret, then my level will definitely be greatly improved, and my future achievements are limitless.

Almost at the same time, two thoughtful people looked at each other almost simultaneously.

"I'm convinced, the emotional impact of your work is far beyond ordinary novels, and I am willing to bow down. Feng Xiaotian took off his headphones, although his expression and movements were still a little stiff, he still bowed slightly towards Jiang Ye.

"Where, where. Jiang Ye saw that he was soft and stuffed a carrot into his hand, "Your work is actually a little flawed in the plot design, world creation, character building, these are no problem at all." ”

Feng Xiaotian still maintained a bowing posture, "I feel a kind of power from your work, a power that can keep readers excited, and I hope to advise." ”

"yes, yes, I feel it too. Yuanyuan's eyes lit up, and she followed Yinghe, which can be said to be the power that turned decay into treasures, making the entire novel world transcend the traditional rules and regulations, and hit the reader's heart.

"Okay. Jiang Ye scratched his head, a little embarrassed this time, "I think the power you are talking about should be SD." ”

“SD!??”

Everyone exclaimed in surprise and fell into doubt, just like pushing away the heavy clouds, a bright moon was still covered by a layer of thin veil, and the hundred claws scratched their hearts impatiently.

"Yes, it's SD, there are many specific means of operation, such as ZBDL, using information asymmetry to make the opposite angle unaware of the strength of the protagonist, and showing his strength in front of the protagonist, but being killed by the protagonist in seconds. When the reader sees this, he will feel a strong mental stimulation and be addicted. Another example is DSNX, where the focus is on ......"

Jiang Yeyang talked for an hour, and everyone was stunned, and finally the conversation changed and patted Feng Xiaotian, who nodded frequently, "Xiaotian, do you understand?"

"I understand, but I still don't understand. Feng Xiaotian had already lost his initial arrogance, Jiang Ye's words were like opening a door, and there were all kinds of artifacts behind the door, but they were like the moon in the water, and they couldn't be caught in a hurry.

"If you don't understand, do it well, I'll teach you slowly in the future. ”

Jiang Ye laughed, hugged Lan Ruo, called Kuyu, and walked into the compilation room with super sound insulation.

The trainee writer test is considered to be passed, then there is one more important thing that needs to be solved urgently.