First of all, I would like to thank the book friends in the book review area for their suggestions, I will not miss every comment, and even read it seven or eight times a day, exaggeration is to say that it is regarded as a treasure! The book review area is very deserted, and I hope that readers will leave your valuable suggestions in their leisure time.

Opening this single chapter is not a request for votes, nor a book list, I mainly want to talk about the current plot: Yan Jixin appeared, and there was a big poison point in the text, where the poison of Yan Jixin went, it was lost there, and the author was very anxious.

In the words of several readers in the book review section, this plot is very bloody, extremely old-fashioned, and even mentally retarded! Here I would like to briefly say the starting point of writing this 'mentally retarded plot', mainly in two aspects:

One is that I want to speed up the pace, the current number of words in the work has exceeded 100,000 words, and the protagonist doesn't seem to have done anything 'practical', in the words of a friend of mine, the plot is too bland, there are no contradictions, let alone cool.

The second is the most important aspect, I want to use the plot of Yan Jixin to portray the role of Hu Yimin, from Liu Xi's appearance, bringing out the marriage contract with Yan Jixin, and then to the protagonist being sent to the hospital, this part of the plot is not just to let the protagonist pull hatred, but more for Hu Yimin's foreshadowing.

I want to make the role of Hu Yimin three-dimensional, and the character portrayal is more plump, she used to be a depressed girl, and now she is recovering, she is not a silly white and sweet vase, she is an elite with good looks and strength, she can make the Lanzhen Group with a market value of tens of billions collapse in just a few days, and in the future, she can give strong support to the protagonist's career, and grow together with the protagonist.

In fact, the plot of Songshan Lake can be written in a way that is not so mentally retarded, and there are too many fuses that can carry out contradictions and conflicts, such as I use comfort wine as the driving interest, so as to start the conflict between Yan Jixin and the protagonist, but with my current pen strength, if I write like this, I have to use at least one or two thousand words to pave the way, or even thirty or forty thousand words to pave the way, so that the plot is a little slow, and the rhythm is too dull to cause the work to be tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it.

In addition, a reader in the book review area said that after writing so much, I haven't established the first relationship, so I take this opportunity to talk about my thoughts: When I first conceived the outline, I also considered the system to force the protagonist to complete them one by one, but I seriously thought about giving up this setting.

It is true that with specific tasks, the plot can be promoted faster and better, but I think this will limit my thinking, and I want to express a superficial truth: if there is an opportunity, you must seize it, and while you are immersed in luck, you must also take corresponding actions.

But unfortunately, I didn't reflect this in the text.

Belch......

In fact, I want to say that the establishment of the first relationship must have the necessary foreshadowing, so that the protagonist's relationship customers can see the value and potential of the protagonist, so that it can be convincing.

With the current plot advancement, the first relationship customer will be established immediately, with the original accumulation, and then the relationship will be established later, relatively speaking, it is much simpler, and several relationship networks may be established at once.

In the end, some readers said that the chapters are too watery, a lot of pen and ink are in the water word count, and there is too much nonsense in the dialogue of the characters.

Sweat~~~

The author is really embarrassed, as a newcomer, where do you dare to water the number of words, I am trying my best to portray the characters, trying to make the image of each character vivid and full, those seemingly boring and trivial dialogues, in fact, in my opinion, it is much more difficult to write than pretending to be forced to slap the face, the character characteristics of each character are reflected in the dialogue, what identity and what to say, it really takes too many brain cells.

Of course, the characters portrayed with pen and ink are definitely not those who come out to show up and get a bento, and the future will definitely drive the development of the plot, such as Wang Yu who appeared in the first chapter, the protagonist resigned, I spent thousands of words to describe Lao Wang, not for the number of words, but to pave the way for the character of Lao Wang, so that Lao Wang will appear again in the later stage and make something shocking that does not conform to ordinary people, which is completely reasonable and not abrupt.

Another example is Wu Haibin, the pen and ink of this nouveau riche of male and female appearance are also for the later stage.

Another example is Yang Jing, the protagonist invites her to take a glass of wine to auction, and the beautiful waiter will also have a story.

Finally, tonight's update is around eleven o'clock.