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I wrote this book mainly because I wanted to write about an ordinary teenager who had systematically traveled to another world to cultivate. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
It's a system text, yes, but I want to write it, it's a little different from other system texts, the protagonist of my pen from the beginning of the weak, grow into a master, or from a master to a strong person, there will be changes in the heart, at first by the system, let him complete some tasks, with a series of things happening, make the protagonist more disgusted.
is originally a new generation of young people, and they are constrained by the system left and right, and they must feel very unhappy.
If you think about it, if it's you, you travel to another world, and you get a system that can make you stronger, yes, and then you rely on your own talent and proficiency to get started, and you become stronger, but your mind will also change with it.
Transform without wanting to be constrained.
A generation of strong people, well, don't do it here, don't do it there, however, you have to do whatever task the system asks you to do, as long as you think you are strong enough and have become a strong person in this world, a thing controls you, will you be disgusted?
Yes, even if the system helps you become stronger, people's minds will change as they change.
For example, a boy who was born with a cripple and was plagued by illness from the beginning, lying in bed day and night, unable to see the outside world.
He doesn't know anything about the outside world, so what would he think?
I want to see the outside world, I want to understand the world, and I want to know many beautiful and colorful things about this world.
However, God favored him and got the opportunity to relieve him of his illness, and he was finally able to get out of bed and walk, to go out and see the world, and to feel everything that he could not feel before.
He also had a chance to start cultivating.
So, after a few years, he became stronger, so his current thoughts are naturally no longer to be able to relieve the disease, that's for sure.
There is a certain truth in the fact that ideas change with their own changes.
The protagonist I wrote about crossed over, got the help of the system, and became stronger step by step.
Then his own thinking will also change, and he wants to no longer be disturbed by the system from now on, and go against the system.
However, the system was subdued, no longer swayed him, and at the same time was recognized.
The protagonist is such a person, he thinks that the system is just an auxiliary, don't issue any tasks to influence him, he is a flesh and blood person, a person with independent thoughts, and like everyone here, he is a modern person.
If you think about it carefully, when a generation of peerless powerhouses can destroy the world with a flick of your fingers, when you are tired of playing in this world and want to break the void and go to other worlds, the system says that you can't go, and I will erase you if you go.
Doesn't that look distressing?
It's not just the readers who are distressed, I'm also confused.
I have read a lot of system texts, and many systems are in the main road and dominate the protagonist, which makes the protagonist lose his color and lose everything that makes people reverie.
The system issued a task to eliminate this sect.,Then the protagonist does it.,Complete it to gain experience.,Become stronger.,That's right.,But that's not interesting.。
No matter how strong the protagonist is later, he never has a soul of his own.
The protagonist I set is the protagonist, and the system I set is the auxiliary.
From the beginning, when the protagonist is weak, he will do the tasks arranged by the system, complete them, and make himself stronger step by step.
At 300,000 words, the protagonist finally becomes stronger, and the system plays an auxiliary role.
For example, if you meet an unknown character, it will report to the protagonist who this person is, what it is called, what exercises it is practicing, what kind of realm it is currently in, and where it comes from.
For example, when you reach a new map, the system will automatically load the current map into your mind.
For example, when the protagonist encounters some difficulties, the system will summarize and tell the protagonist according to some clues on the spot, or help the protagonist analyze, as for whether to do it or not, it is the protagonist's business, he has his own ideas, and will judge the pros and cons, right and wrong.
Don't say that if you don't do it, you will erase the protagonist.,The system I set up is also a person.,Not a machine.,Because of the limitation of some kind of power.,Let him be sealed in the system.,Troubled by programming.。
The system is dedicated to helping the protagonist grow.,The stronger the protagonist.,The more things you unlock.,The more memories of the past life the system gets.,The system will slowly understand.,What kind of person was in the original self.。
Therefore, he will do his best to help the protagonist grow up, and maybe he will finally be able to understand his past life in the future, however, it will never say anything to the protagonist that you will erase you if you don't do what Lao Tzu says.
However, this is foreshadowing about what the system is all about, so I won't say more about it here.
Tell us a little bit about the book.
The name is called the villain of cultivating immortals.,Naturally, it's related to cultivating immortals.,The early monks used light skills.,It's because of the strength of the realm.,I want to start writing from close to martial arts.,Because the protagonist is an ordinary person.,So let him and the immortal cultivator fight at the beginning.,It seems that although readers will think it's awesome.,But I think it's a bit ridiculous.,I want to shape the story in the early stage to be more readable.,So the protagonist won't be too strong at first.。
Of course, there is one thing I dare to guarantee, that is, the protagonist's growth is absolutely 300,000 words, and he will not talk at length about how to practice this exercise, how to practice that method, how many years it took, and what kind of ghost is accumulated over time......
There is no thing, as long as the characters in it take the initiative to teach the exercises to the protagonist, only one sentence is needed, and the system will automatically help the protagonist pass the exercises into the body.
For example, the protagonist wants to learn the master's magical skills, so he asks for advice.
As long as the sect leader says or has the will to teach the exercises to the protagonist, then the system will prompt the sect leader to teach the exercises to you, and whether the host accepts it.
It's that simple, there is no complicated practice process.
Of course, it's not enough for the protagonist to just learn this set of exercises, he must continue to experience in order to become proficient in this set of exercises.
Therefore, this is a bloody story of a man who is in charge of his own in the midst of blood and killing.
As for the villain, I think there is no right or wrong between good and evil, position, everything is because of position, well, there is also good and evil, in a small world, everyone is fighting for ascension.
There are too many things hidden in this small world, why can't the current monks cultivate immortals? Why can't the current monks ascend? Why did the strongest man in the world cut off the Ascension Dao? What is the real purpose of cutting off the Ascension Dao? What is the original small world like? Why are so many ancient inheritances left in the world?
Also, Why is the protagonist so terrifyingly strong?
Let's find out about this in the book.
This book is my first book, I'm a newcomer, a new work, there are no recommendations, the book has a very poor grade, very poor, a mess.
Maybe it's not the reason why there are no recommendations.,Or maybe it's because my pen is too bad?Maybe yes.,But,Classmates who think I can't stand my writing.,I'm really sorry.,Because I paid too much attention to planning the plot in the early stage.,So many details are not described in place.,It's my fault.,As a novice to make such a mistake.,I realized it.,So,After that, I realized.,A lot of places began to work hard.。
If you read the first wave of the book, that is, 400,000 words, at that time, you still feel that the book is not your appetite, not enthusiastic enough, and not moved, then it is really my problem, and I don't blame everyone.
At first, I wrote with interest, but now I write with dreams, so I will be very attentive.
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Why don't I revise it in the background, so don't you spend money to read my own novels? That's right, but I want to look at my own text from the reader's point of view, so I have a stronger sense of substitution in this way, besides, I subscribe to my own chapters, and the gold coins are deducted, but not counting the number of subscriptions, which means that I consume it in vain, so I also think from the reader's point of view.
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And finally, about the book.
Have you ever felt like you can't change the truth on your own?
Has there ever been a time when facts are as immutable as they were meant to be?
Have you ever tried your best, but you still can't go back?
Have you ever fallen to the bottom in pursuit of that ray of light in your heart?
Have you ever had a life that can never be changed like fate?
Have you ever had your dreams extinguished by the harsh reality?
So, welcome to my world, this book is written for people who have had blood in the world, in order to pursue their own path, people who have embarked on a journey without hesitation.
Even if I am the enemy of the world, I will also kill the world with one sword and one sword.
"Are you ready to face the evil god?"
Xuanyue cried three times
2017.6.13 Night
The hierarchy of a small world:
1. Open up the two veins of appointment and supervision
2. Pingwu Realm
3. Use force
4. Gao Wujing
5. Tianwu Realm
6. Shenwu Realm
Great Thousand Realms Hierarchy:
1. Human Wonderland
2. Wonderland
3. Heavenly Wonderland
4. Golden Wonderland
5, Da Luo Jinxian
6, the fairy king
7, Immortal Emperor
I'll give you a song, you can listen to it if you haven't heard it, and say it if you like it very much
Angel Wings - Dai Ailing
After crossing the jungle and falling into the ocean
And the night has been accompanied for a long time
You can't despair, you can only be stubborn
There are so many burdens for you to carry
A frowning brow and a pensive face
Spreading exhaustion drowns out strength
Kiss your shoulders and clasp your palms
The knowing look will shine and give strength to the person you love
Lend you wings to wander
Lend your dreams to shine
The sun lent you to warm the heart
Release your faith through lending
A frowning brow and a pensive face
Spreading exhaustion drowns out strength
Kiss your shoulder and clasp your palm
The eyes that know will shine and give strength to the person you love OH WOW~~
Lend you wings to wander
Lend your dreams to shine
The sun lent you to melt the past
Release your faith through lending
Hope for disappointment that backfires with all your might
The indomitable confrontation is sad after all
With tears of distress
I'm proud to be with you
Lend you wings to wander
Lend your dreams to shine
Lend you the sun to dry your old wounds
Release your faith through lending
Wandering together is not afraid
Lend you wings over the clouds
Lend you heaven to sing
We're going to be beautiful