Chapter 164: The literary style is limited, please forgive me
"Okay, now let's appreciate the song "Father" composed by Ranaya. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ο½ο½ο½ο½ο½ο½ γ ο½ο½ο½ο½β
The host reads: "
My father never touched wine, and the little girl stole tea for wine.
Smile invited his father to take a seat, and the cup was brought to him.
The wine is full, and the sound is good.
The father's brows furrowed slightly after drinking, and the little girl stuck out her tongue and slipped away. β
After the host finished reading, he couldn't help but shake his head and laugh: "So naughty, really naughty." β
The judges praised: "Naughty and vivid! So it doesn't matter if the text is popular, you don't need flowery rhetoric, you can depict it vividly, just like this, everyone can understand it, and you can understand the mood of the father and daughter in it." β
The audience also praised it, it was indeed simple and vivid, and it was not pretentious.
It was the first time Sven had seen Lanaya's work, but he didn't expect her to hide it deeply, and praised with a smile: "Xiaoya, it's really good, you see, Uncle Luo is laughing!"
Ciro did smile, and after listening to his daughter's work, he couldn't help but recall the scene when he was teased by her......
Lanaya said proudly: "Of course, the only ones who can make Dad laugh are me and Mom." β
The host said: "The author of this song "Father", can you come up and let everyone meet it? I believe everyone is like the old man, I really want to see which naughty girl it is, right?"
Everyone nodded their heads and couldn't wait to see them.
Lanaya immediately walked up.
What everyone saw was a pretty-looking girl, really beautiful and cute.
The host smiled: "Poetry is like people, people are like poetry, calligraphy is also playful and lively, but it's a little stingy, but it's good, after all, it's still too young." β
The host asked people to post Lanaya's work in a better position.
Ranaya walked down happily amid everyone's praise.
The host picked up the next work and said, "Okay, let's appreciate the song "People Like Wine" made by Swin Nye. β
Read: "
Wine is as colorless as water,
It seems to be unremarkable.
Contains thousands of landscapes.
People have a thousand forms,
It has to be beautiful and ugly.
How can appearance make a decision?"
After the host finished reading, he nodded and said: "Yes, it's very straightforward, using 'wine' and 'people' to compare, the direction is very clear." β
"Hmm. The judges also nodded: "It can be seen that he is a person with a very straight personality, although the last sentence is a question, but the first word of each line is read down, and he has already said his own opinion: 'Wine looks inside, people are not outside', plus the theme "People are like wine", it is very straightforward, frank, and straightforward: 'People should look inside, not outside.' ββ
The audience nodded and praised: "The thinking is very right, it's pretty good." β
Others, on the other hand, look dismissive and do not seem to support this view.
After all, people have different perspectives: some people look not only on the inside but also on the outside, and some people only look at the outside.
The host smiled and said, "Can you invite the author of "People Like Wine" to come up and let everyone meet him?"
Swain walked up.
What everyone saw was a very tall and strong young man, with a good appearance, a child's face, honest and honest, and he looked very pleasing.
The host praised: "The young man is good, you can see from your work that you are a very real person." Although the calligraphy is not good, the pen is vigorous and powerful, full of momentum, and very atmospheric! Each word is written very steadily, but the last stroke is very crazy, which is a bit interesting. β
A judge who didn't support Swain asked, "Your work is so outspoken, people don't have any room to think, isn't it too imposing ideas on others?"
Sven said: "Actually, it's a gift, a friend, I talked to her before, and I felt that she cared too much about her appearance, so I made this one for her." β
The judge nodded and said, "Well, if you give it away, I'll approve it." β
Mu Zixin said: "It won't be given to me, right?" After thinking about the conversation with him before, it was really given to her.
The host asked Swain to post Swain's work in a better position.
Someone scoffed and said: "This kind of can also be called poetry?
The host and the judges were about to speak, but Kader preemptively said: "You set 'poetry' in such a narrow sense, which is an insult to poetry! Poetry is free, it can be decent, and it can be unrestrained." As long as you follow your heart, reveal your true feelings, and feel it, you can call it a 'poem'! It is because of your idea that many people who love poetry dare not boldly compose poems, for fear of being ridiculed, and many good works are directly wiped out in the cradle!"
The moderator and the judges nodded, and that was exactly what they had to say.
Most people agree, and some disagree.
The host said: "Distinctive is the key, now most of the poems are the same, like a running account, no matter how elegantly written, in fact, it is not the same clichΓ©?"
There are still quite a few people who praise Swain.
Swain walked down, and Lanaya smiled, "Silly Dawen, you're not bad either." In other words, you didn't like me because of my appearance in the first place?"
Swain nodded, "Of course, I liked you because of ......"
"Because of what?"
"Hehe, I won't tell you. β
Lanaya said with a straight face: "Say it quickly!"
Swinse squinted and said, "If you kiss me in public, I'll tell you." β
"Die!"
The host read a few more works, and many of them were distinctive.
"Okay, now let's appreciate the song "Early Winter" made by Muzi. β
Read: "
As soon as the cloud curtain closes, the early winter is white,
Poor Akiki is gone.
The warm moon refuses to send light,
Drink only the cold wine in your bosom. β
The host stroked his beard and said: "This song is decent, the upper link writes the scene, and the lower link talks about people." uses the scene that winter came too early to express the feeling of helplessness, but it seems to have a deep meaning...... What do you guys think?" he said, looking at the judges.
The judges pondered for a while, then exchanged with each other, and said: "It seems to be a metaphor for borrowing things, among which 'cloud curtain', 'autumn wood', 'warm moon', and 'cold wine' should each represent something, such as 'people'." Of course, this is just our guess, and the real meaning has to be explained by the author himself. β
The host said: "So, the author of this "Early Winter", can you please come up and explain it to everyone?"
Mu Zi said loudly: "There is no metaphor, you think too much, I just make this song casually." β
Seeing that she refused to come up, the host said it directly, so he had to say: "Then let's do this one, let's take a look at the next one." β
Swain heard what the judges said, and said to himself, "Metaphor? I probably know what Muzi is writing." If he was not mistaken, then the poem does have a special meaning......
The host said: "Okay, let's appreciate the song "Sijun" made by Kanana. β