About the rewording
Special statement on the revision:
Because I am not satisfied with the book, and at the request of some book friends, in line with the purpose and spirit of excellence, this book will make some fine-tuning and point out some foreshadowing in advance, so as not to make people feel that the rhythm is too slow and the plot is not tense enough. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info
However, the changes made in the previous chapters will be added at the bottom of the latest chapter, so that you don't waste time going back to watching. Of course, if you are interested, you can also follow the description of the latest chapter, track down the revised chapter, and see how the author has improved his work.
Finally, for the failure to make arrangements in advance, the act of revising in the writing process, the author, Lao Getou would like to solemnly apologize to everyone, this revision, in fact, is to provide better works for everyone, for the inconvenience caused to everyone, solemnly apologize, and please forgive me.
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Main changes:
1. Point out some foreshadowing in advance, especially the impending crisis. This addition will be attached to the bottom of each update - new content has been added to Chapters 7, 10, and 12 - and Chapters 22, 23, 53, and 54 need to be added.
2. The family fight is too long, and the rhythm is not right. The essence of the competition is in the front, and the back is boring, so the second half has been cut out - it has been revised.
3. Some boring and offensive chapters or paragraphs have been deleted - they have been cut.
4. According to the previous two points, some of the corresponding adjustments will not be explained in detail - the adjustments have been made.
5. Modify typos, and optimize the content that is not exciting.
There are also some changes that need to be made:
1. The four chapters of Chapter 22, Chapter 23, Chapter 53, and Chapter 54 need to be supplemented with new content.
2. Continue to find and revise typos, and continue to optimize the content that is not exciting.
Three new chapters have been added:
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Chapter 7, "The Old Man of the Library" supplements: Added an iron core to encircle Wu Yan, and Wu Yan successfully escaped with the help of the library owner. The owner is a powerful character, so come out a little earlier to speed up the pace of the story.
After walking a few steps, just about to turn a corner, Wu Yan suddenly heard a shout: "Quick, Wu Yan didn't go out of the gate, he must still be in the school, everyone search carefully, don't let him run away!"
Lying on the corner of the wall to take a peek, Tie Xin and the dogs, with the dogs, have already gotten rid of Li Cai, and are searching for Wu Yan everywhere on campus.
Want revenge?
Wu Yan sneered in his heart, frowned, and ran to a place with his legs.
The place where Wu Yan was going was the library where he had often stayed for the past seven years.
The library can be read casually, although the name is loud, there are some messy miscellaneous books in it, really valuable exercises, cheats, and other places to preserve.
However, the curator of the library, Bu Cripple, is a ruthless character.
It is said that when he was young, he was very good at kung fu, but later he was injured in the leg, and he had plans to retire, and it happened that his old friend became the dean of Taiyang Academy, so he followed him to become a curator.
Relying on his martial arts and qualifications, no one pays attention to the lame man, even if he is a thorn like Zhao Yuanhai Tiexin, he is like a little white rabbit when he arrives at the library.
Therefore, in the past seven years, Wu Yan ran to the library when he had nothing to do, and stayed in it for a whole day.
The library is full of miscellaneous books, but the number is vast, and Wu Yan has been in it for a long time, and he has learned some useful things more or less.
After staying for a long time, Wu Yan and Bu Cripple gradually became acquainted, and later told Wu Yan about his back door.
When Zhao Yuanhai, Tie Xin and others blocked him in front of the library, they could secretly run to the teacher's office area from the back door, or go directly to the outside of the school.
Zhao Yuanhai and Tiexin blocked it a few times, but found that it was useless, so they let Wu Yan hide in the library.
In this way, for Wu Yan, the library has become a refuge, a paradise on earth where he can avoid the harassment and oppression of Zhao Yuanhai Tiexin and others.
Although in addition, the cripple didn't give Wu Yan any special treatment, but Wu Yan was already grateful to him.
In this institution, the cripple can be said to be one of the few "friends".
Now seeing Tie Xin and others searching for him, Wu Yan naturally repeated his old trick, and quietly slipped to the library.
Wu Yan only picked a small path to walk, and sure enough, he successfully avoided the round-up of Tie Xin and others all the way, and saw that after passing through a small alley, he could reach the library.
Wu Yan accelerated his pace, and was about to rush to the library in one go, when he suddenly heard two "hehe" sounds, and a head popped up in front of the alley.
Looking back, the back of the alley was also blocked by a person.
"Wu Yan, Li (you) this repentance (waste) has caused me (vomit) to be so miserable, look at the vomiting (me) swollen today (how) to search (clean up) you!" The dog's remaining teeth were all knocked out, and he hadn't even wiped the blood at the corners of his mouth, so he rushed to block Wu Yan.
Tie Xin was afraid that Wu Yan would run out, so he rushed to the gate with people.
The dog is very ghostly, so he did the opposite, and pulled a companion to run to the library to block Wu Yan, but he really got him blocked.
Although the strength of Gou Yu and the others is not very high, they still have a big advantage compared to Wu Yan.
What's more, now it is two people dealing with Wu Yan and one person, and it is in a narrow area like a small alley, Wu Yan can be said to have no chance of winning.
Seeing the two dogs and the rest of the dog menacing towards him, Wu Yan couldn't help but feel a little flustered in his heart.
When he was in a hurry, Wu Yan suddenly thought of Taobao in his mind......
Pregnant!
Wu Yan hurriedly searched on Taobao, bought a bottle of mustard powder, opened the cap, and quietly held it in the palm of his hand.
Waiting for the two of them to approach, Wu Yan suddenly took a step and was about to run, and when the two of them stepped forward in a hurry, he took out mustard powder and sprayed it violently before and after.
The one in the back was caught off guard, and was sprayed all over the face by mustard, and a lot of eyes went in, and he screamed, scratching his eyes with both hands, and the result was that the more he scratched, the more uncomfortable it became.
The dog was more cautious, closed his eyes in time, and was proud, and wanted to ridicule Wu Yan, but he didn't expect to suck the mustard into his mouth as soon as he opened his mouth.
As a result, the dog also barked and scurried all over the alley.
Wu Yan's plan succeeded, and he immediately reversed the situation, but he was unwilling to let go of the opportunity to beat the water dogs, raised his fist, and greeted the two of them fiercely.
The remaining two dogs had been made useless by the mustard, and they had no energy to guard against Wu Yan at all, so they were soon beaten to the ground by Wu Yan, convulsing and no longer moving.
After being addicted to boxing, Wu Yan didn't dare to delay, and quickly rushed into the library.
Tie Xin and the others heard the screams and also arrived, but unfortunately they were one step too late, so they could only watch Wu Yan swagger into the library.
Entering the library, Wu Yan turned back to Tie Xin and the others, and mocked again, making Tie Xin so angry that his lungs were about to explode, but there was nothing he could do, gritted his teeth, shook his hand, and ran away with the dogs.
Seeing Tie Xin running away, Wu Yan was still not at ease, for fear that Tie Xin was hiding in the dark and waiting for him, so he said hello to Director Bu and asked him to open the secret back door of the library.
Wu Yan's entanglement with Gou Yu, Tie Xin and others just now, Director Bu looked at it one by one, and when he saw Wu Yan's proud look, he scolded Wu Yan with a few words, and led Wu Yan to the back door, opened the secret door, and let Wu Yan slip away quietly.
There were a total of eight exits in the back door passage, and Wu Yan picked the farthest one, drilled out of a remote place, and successfully got rid of the entanglement of Tie Xin and the others.
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Chapter 10, "Behind the Conspiracy Hidden Conspiracy" supplement: Wu Yan went home and met two old men at the fork in the road, suggesting that their anxious matter was related to the "formation".
At the fork in the road, there were two old men arguing there at this moment.
The two old men, one with a white beard and the other with a black beard, were both dressed in strange robes and costumes, and the word "array" was embroidered on their chests.
Seeing Wu Yan coming, the two beards stopped arguing.
Whitebeard spoke first:
"This little brother, I have something to ask you.
The terrain in this area has changed greatly, and my brother and I have lost our way for a while.
Little brother, have you ever heard, where is Manglugou?"
Manglugou?
Isn't it the inaccessible ravine in the mountains behind you?
Such a remote valley, few people know about it at all.
Even Wu Yan, who lives at the foot of the mountain, would not have known this place if he hadn't followed his father-in-law Wu Tai a few times when he was a child.
Seeing that there was an opportunity to show off his knowledge, Wu Yan replied with a smile:
"You're always asking the right question!
If you see the peak of the pen, this valley is in the ......"
Before Wu Yan could finish speaking, Blackbeard grabbed Whitebeard, stared at the lantern eyes, blew Blackbeard, and said urgently:
"I'm right, that's it!
Let's go!"
As he spoke, he hurried away with his white beard.
"I, I'm not done yet......" A good opportunity to show off was missed like this, Wu Yan was dumbfounded.
"No need, thank you, little brother!"
Whitebeard's voice could be heard in the distance.
Wu Yan suddenly felt that something was wrong - these two bad old men, who seemed to be walking so slowly, how could they run so far in the blink of an eye?
If you look closely, their steps seem simple, but they are actually very subtle, and they bypassed a small mountain bag and disappeared in Wu Yan's sight.
"Masters!"
Wu Yan was secretly speechless, looked back at the gate of Wujiazhuang in the distance, wiped his sweat, and turned onto the fork in the road to go home.
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Chapter 12, "Seven Days Later" Supplement: The two old men suspect that there will be a great crisis after seven days. The upcoming crisis is pointed out in advance, so that readers can have a clearer prediction of the development of the situation behind.
Just when Wu Yan was anxious about the next day's competition, at the foot of Bijian Mountain, two uninvited guests came to Manglugou, which is rarely visited on weekdays.
White-bearded and black-bearded, holding two trays in their hands, stood on a high place on the edge of the ditch, inspecting the terrain.
"The long needle vibrates violently, and the short needle is as quiet as stagnant water, yes, this is it!"
Blackbeard's eyes lit up, and he shouted out with joy, stretched out his hand to snatch the array plate from Whitebeard's hand, and shouted:
"What's the reaction of your spirit plate, is there really something abnormal?"
Whitebeard took out one hand, blocked Blackbeard, and frowned:
"Are you still in the period of ten thousand laws?
Now that this spiritual power is very thin, how can it come to fruition so quickly?
Wait a little longer!"
Unable to snatch it, Blackbeard leaned his head over and stared at the array in Whitebeard's hand.
After only a few glances, Blackbeard couldn't help but exclaim:
"This spiritual power rises like a drunken turtle, but its magical power grows like a galloping horse.
Could it be that there is really a loophole in the Black Hell Demon Suppression Array, and it is about to be unable to suppress the spatial gap?"
"No hurry! Wait and see!"
Whitebeard's brow furrowed, but he still shook his head, comforting Blackbeard in a loud voice.
Blackbeard's face also became grim, and he put away his agitation, and together with Whitebeard, stared at the tray with wide eyes.
On the tray, there are two hands, one black and one blue.
The black hand rotated slowly at a speed visible to the naked eye, and after a long turn, it stopped.
The speed at which the blue hand rotated was almost indiscernible, and it took a long time for the slightest movement to be noticed.
The black and white beard, staring at the four old eyes, looked at it for an unknown amount of time, and the blue pointer finally stopped moving.
On the final dial, the blue hand turns at an angle about seven times that of the black hand.
The two beards waited for a long time, and when they saw that the blue pointer was still unmoving, they really couldn't turn around, so they both raised their heads.
The two looked at each other, and from each other's eyes, they saw the shock and horror that penetrated deep into their hearts and lungs, and they all opened their mouths and said:
"Not good, in seven days, disaster is coming!"
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(Urgent notice: about the emergency treatment of the content of the client that does not match the title of the chapter after the text change!)
Sorry, because last night the book was revised and something went wrong.
I studied it.,There's no problem with the computer.,As long as the problem is the client of the mobile phone.,Readers who have read the chapters in the book.,The chapters are downloaded.,After I changed it.,The name of the chapter on the client has not been updated.。
Solution, please see the lower left corner of the starting point of reading, there is a "bookshelf", click into the "bookshelf", find the book "with Taobao mixed with the other world", pay attention, on the right side of the book, there are three vertical rows of small dots, click there, a small interface will come out, click on the upper left corner of the interface "Download", you can update the chapter name of the book.
I'm really sorry for the trouble for everyone!
In order to write a better work for everyone, I insisted on changing the text.
Please bear with me!
Also, thank you book friends for finding the error in time with lead-free preserved eggs, thank you very much!)
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